People! This is thy old story written by me. I, HanaLoid, rewrite it. Be happy while reading it! This is not an Amuto, Tadamu, Rimahiko, Yairi, Kutau, Takuto, etcetera..

I do not own anything here!


Evil flower,

Scatters dainty

In vivid coloration.

The people of latter-day talk (of her) as such,

Oh she was truly the daughter of evil.

~Kagamine Rin


The queen walked through her castle, running her hands on the luxurious black and purple furniture. She smiled and made her way to the stables with her servant at her side. A white and cream horse whined at her. The queen smiled and rubbed her muzzle. "Hello, my dear Temari." The servant handed her a large carrot, which she promptly fed to the mare. "So sweet."

Nadeshiko held the cup and dropped a single sugar cube into the mug. She slightly smirked and stirPink the contents of the golden cup. The dishwater blond lifted the cup to her lips and took a small sip. She pulled the cup away and tossed it aside, smiling happily.

The treasurer came up to the princess, who was lounging in a large black and magenta chaise lounge.

"Fujisaki-sama," He started, "You are starting to run out of money. What do you want to do?"

She smiled as her servant handed her a piece of cake with a white butterfly on it. The purple haiPink queen picked the candy incest up and crushed it in the palm of her hand. "Squeeze it out from the foolish raff. As for the people who oppose to me, make them clean it up." Nadeshiko brushed the measly dust off her dainty hands and dug into her cake.

As she walked out to her balcony, a small white butterfly fluttering around her head. She watched it, before clasping her hands around it. She placed her thumb and index fingers on its wings, above the bug's two black dots. Nadeshiko grinned maliciously before ripping the innocent butterfly in two.

Her arms spread and she shouted into the crowd. "Now, knee down!"

Everyone knelt down, all wearing gray clothing with a lighter grey rose on their backs.

Nadeshiko grabbed her servant who looks like her and started to dance with her. Her ballroom floor was decorated with a large spider web. On the web, it had dew droplets of various shapes. Around the web were pitch-black spiders with pink cherry blossom on their backs. As the two danced, the spiders moved their arms and rose in time with the dancing and music.

The tyrant princess's love was a prince of yellow in other side of the sea.. However, as for him the neighboring country's daughter of pink was the love in first sight.

Nadeshiko looked through a pair of binoculars at the border of the two countries: Yellow and Pink. The Prince of Yellow was secretly meeting the Daughter of Pink.

Tadase grabbed a heart shaped fruit from the tree and handed it to Amu. He smiled and gently kissed her hand.

The Queen of Purple gritted her teeth and tossed the binoculars down. She went into her room and tossed the table over, sending the black vase flying; the water in it spilling out and carrying the purple roses with it. She smashed the mirror by tossing a golden hairbrush at it. Nadeshiko gripped the curtains and pulled at the, tearing and ripping them apart. She sobbed in agony and sat in a chair, her face in her hands. The Queen wiped her eyes and called for the minister.

Nadeshiko sat in a room, everything around her completely destroyed. The table tipped over. Her mirror, smashed. The curtains were ripped and tossed on the ground. The flowers were on the ground, away from the vase.

Her minister walked up to her. Clad in grey, with a rose on his back, he bowed to the young queen.

Nadeshiko softly spoke and said "Annihilate the country of Pink." She was turned away from the man and looked out of the window, so he wouldn't see her ruined makeup

"Yes, Princess."

Soon, the country of Pink was engulfed in flames, many people lost their lives. The country was taken over by grey.

Cries of pain and moans of agony rose from the people still alive, but they would soon be silenced.

Amu ran through the forest, trying to escape the fire. Someone's hand grabbed wrist, she looked back with tears in her eyes.

The queen in the land of Purple smiled as she watched the country of Pink become destroyed then she said, "Oh, time for the snack."

Her servant, ever faithful, stood by her side as she dug into the snack.

Once again, Nadeshiko grabbed her servant and started to dance with him. Now, on the web, there were red droplets. The spiders were now dancing on top of the pink hands, clawing their way from the mangled mess they once called their village.

A large crowd of people made their way up to the castle, a woman in green leading the crowd. They chanted many vile and horrible things.

One person came up to the swordswomen and asked her, "Are you sure you want to do this, Suu?"

She nodded as the continued to lead the crowd.

They finally reached the castle. In their hands, they had spears, torches and flag of rebellion. Many charged at the doors and pushed them open, where the queen was calmly sitting inside.

She walked up to the woman in the purple armor as people reached to touch her. Nadeshiko slapped the hands away and said, "Do not touch me! especially with your dirty hands"

Nadeshiko danced on the floor by herself; the web was ruined and purple butterflies replaced the black spiders. Pink hands came up and clapped along in time with the music and the prince's dancing. Large metal gates closed around the ballroom and chains with pad locks sealed it.

Things were ruined inside of the castle. Nadeshiko's marble statue was lying on the ground, its hand touching the floor.

Nadeshiko sat alone in the prison, looked at the butterfly, resting in the spider's web. It flapped its wings, but didn't move. Then the spider turned away from it.

Nadeshiko was fitted into the guillotine, her eyes were looking at the basket.

In the crowd were mostly purple people. A few in grey, still with the rose on their backs. Two or three people in Pink and Yellow. Nadeshiko and Tadase were standing together.

A tall green man stood next to the guillotine.

Nadeshiko spoke, not giving attention to the audience. "Oh, time for the snack."

On the clock stood the queen and the servant. The knife was on the 12 and the fork was on the three. The knife fell, and as it did, the queen's head was reduced to black.

The knife was now pointing to the six.

The body of the queen danced around the ballroom. Her head was in the middle, eyes shut. The web was repaired, both black, rosy spiders and purple butterflies were together. The droplets were no longer red. Black roses and thorns covered the pink people's hands. Yellow, purple, pink and black hands rose up and clapped in time.

As the body came under the head, they rejoined and her eyes opened. She stopped in the middle of the floor, picked her skirt up, and curtsied. The doors shut and pulled away to be reveled as a cake on the queen's plate. Her servant stood by her side and watched as she scooped a piece up with her gold spoon, and ate it.

End of the chapter


Hana: Tada! I rewrite it!

Nadeshiko: Why is it me? Not Amu-chan and Hotori-san?

Tadase: It's better than the first one... But I'm not the "P" word because I'm a KING!

Amu: You killed me!

Hana: Ikuto! Say R words!

Ikuto: Review and R.. What is the word again? Just Review/Follow/Favourite...