THIS IS MY FIRST THIRD PERSON FANFIC EVER and I am proud of it. Also this took about 1 day to name because I couldn't think of one, then I consolled with my fanfiction and found a good name.

WARNING: Death, Kidnapping, Blood, lots of blood.

Enjoy... if you can :o)


A tall, lanky, black haired teen was sitting infront of an old cafe. He watched as people walked around, thinking there lives where perfect, that they had nothing to fear. They where dead wrong. The teen pulled out a hand gun from his pocket, he pointed it skyward, finger on the the trigger, a crazy smile on his face as he looks at the ground. BAM! Everyone stopped and staired, people looked through shop windows to see what was happening. A man walked up a telling the teen to put the gun down and know one would get hurt, the teen laughed. He pointed the gun at the man. BAM!THUD! The teen shot him, killing him on the spot, A women screamed. The teen just stood their twirling the gun around on his finger. The others should be here any minute...

The gun shot was heard by the others, they hid in the shadows, moving silently. A second gun shot rang out, the one leading the group stopped, looked up then behind him to look at his copanions then sped up. They all knew what had happened and they knew that the had to get there as soon as possable.

When they got their the leader, a normal looking, black haired, sharp tounged,teenage boy. Walked up to the lanky teen, the people in the crowd yell at him to get back before he got him self killed. The boy stood infront of the teen and glared at him. The lanky teen smiled and put his gun in his back pocket, wrapped his arms around the boy pulling him into a hug, "Karbro!". Karkat sighed and hugged the lanky teen back, "Hi, Gamzee." The teen, Gamzee released Karkat from the hug. "So you motherfucking ready?"

"Yes, Gamzee I'm ready"

"Motherfucking great" The teen pulls his gun back out and points it at a woman with a sixteen-year-old girl. "Is this one good?"

" I guess..." Karkat makes a clicking noise with his tounge. A girl with brown hair, green eyes, and cat paws appeaers next to the girl grabs her then disappeares. The woman screams and runs at Karkat yelling at him to bring her child back. BAM!THUD! The women hits the ground blood pouring out of her head, the crowd trys to escape but two people where blocking the exits. A boy with robot legs guarding one end, at the other end a girl with a magic 8 ball and a strange looking eye.

" Gamzee you trapped to big of a group" Karkat sighed.

" Sorry" Gamzee scratches the back of his head carlessly.

A whiry teen with black hair, miss matched eyes and glasses walks up to the group, blue and red whisps coming from his eyes. He picks up a man with the whisps. CRACK! He crushes the man with the whisps, the mans broken, lifeless body hits the ground with a thud. The boy keeps doing this over and over again to the other people in the captive group. " Alright Sollux I can't let you have all the fun know can I?" A tall, black haired, teen with broken sunglasses and a black tanktop, walks up to the boy and places his hand on Sollux's shoulder. " I guess" Sollux says, he drops the body of a women, he had choked her to death.

The teen with the broken sunglasses walks in to up to the group of people and pulls out a scrawny old women. Her husband trying to pry her away from him to no avail. He crushes the women neck with his bare hands, then prosseds to crush the old mans skull. This contunies until every one in the group of captives was killed.

"Where's Nepeta?'' The teen with the sunglasses says.

" I'm right here Equis." The girl with the cat paws appeares in front of him.

" We should get going before the cops get here." Karkat says

" Then lets motherfuckin go" The lanky teen picks up the smaller teen, throws him over his shoulder and starts runnning, the others follow. A pink scaf stained in blood lay next to the girls mother.

They stopped in front of an alley. Gamzee set Karkat down, Karkat gave him a death glare before walking down the alley. At the end of the alley was a brick wall, Karkat knocked eight times. A small part of the wall swung open, a tall thin boy in royal purple, hipster clothes, and thick rimmed glasses. He was holding a sniper rifle, he pointed it past then and fired, their was a thud. He walked out muttering about how they need to be more careful. The girl they had kidnapped stared at the man, in shock.

After the boy, Eridan, had dispposed of the body he led them inside. Still muddering about something, he led them into a huge room with only 12 beds. A girl with red hair was sitting next to a crying black haired girl, the red haired girl was trying to confort the crying girl. Whispering to her, the words contained a caring, loving tone. The black haired girl had calmed down and was staring at a picture of something.

" Kanaya, we brought you something." Nepet said, sitting at the edge of the bed.

Kanaya looked up. " What is it...?" She said in a voice filled with pain.

Nepeta grabbed the girl and set her down next to Kanaya. " Here."

Kanaya stares at Nepeta and then the girl, a small smile spred across Kanaya's face. "What's your name?"

" Rose."

OK, that took me about **counts** 5 days. Again first third person, I will try and get the next chapter out soon.

Please Review :o)

(( Gamzee's my patron troll, I have a right to his :o) face))