my first ever novel.. please review cheers

Naomi's Pov

The walk back from Freddie was wasn't a bad silence it was....nice just walking hand in hand with Em's made me think why I didn't just tell her everything sooner.

It would of made the last few weeks better, we could of been....happy it could of been heaven....but me being me I didn't have to balls to do it, not until I thought about my

life without her, she's the only person I ever loved the only person I ever wanna love, Emily looked up at me about 20 mins after we left Freddie shed and headed was back

to Ours

"I love you"

The last time Em's said this to me I told her to not to lie to me. I didn't want to hear it. I was hurt. I missed Emily so much. I know we were in the same house and all but

Sometimes I felt I was a million miles away from her drinking myself to sleep was the only thing that kept me ...alive?. But it was different now. I could see it when I looked

Into her eyes. All the hate and angry was gone. There was nothing but love staring back at me.

"I love you too," I said smiling back at her.

"I missed this..Us..I missed you Naoms." she looked like she was about to cry

"Me to..I missed this...you..i missed you" I leant down placing a kiss on Emily's forehead

Emily smiles at me, her eyes twinkling. god I missed those eyes. We had now stopped walking and were standing look at each other. Without any warning Emily pulled
me in close her capturing my bottom lips with her own. I felt my knees drop. It was fucking amazing more amazing then I remembered. It took me a moment to
react pressing my lips back against hers. Emily pulled away and was now grinning at me. I miss this so fucking much. Her smile. Her eyes. Her smell. Everything about
her. She pulled me back in and gave me a quick peck on the lips and looked back at me.

"Home..Now!" she said not being a question but more of an order

With that she grabbed my hand walking me faster to the house. When we reached the front door of the house I went in search of the key. Without any warning Emily pushed me up against the first door and looked me right in the eye. Her eyes now turned black with passion. She didn't do anything just looked at me.

"I need to find the key Em's" I said shyly

"I know just…I just ….I" again she reached in capturing my lips once more with her own

with that she pulled away and smiled. I pulled the key out of my bag and opened the door, when we stepped into the house I turned shutting the front door when I turned back Emily was gone straight into the kitchen