Hello fan readers I'm back, to be succinct this story isn't the story I'm running a poll on my Profile for. It's just something I thought up reading "Naruto of the Nine Tails" By EDelta88. While it has many similarities there are glaring differences and I'm taking the story in a different direction, I'm trying a new style where I name the first use of a jutsu in Japanese and at the end of the story provide a Translation. On with the show and remember to check my profile as the poll is still running and I've added summaries for the new stories mentioned in the poll. Currently the mainly Naruhina one is in the lead.

EDIT: After reading the reviews I have decided to go back and fix the glaring mistakes that I have made however two things will not change 1. Naruto's tails are just as strong but I have halved the length so they are only ten feet long in the academy. 2. Naruto and Hinata's Kitsune Bi remains the same power but for Hinata there is a cost.

Lastly remember that Naruto is the Kyūbi no Kitsune and incredibly powerful so the tails through concrete is accurate. Also in regards to his mental status, no Bijou in the series has ever shown intelligence when without a Jinchūriki so I hypothesize that they need to be in a human to use their full intelligence. (Look at the Sanbi and how Deidara? I think makes a comment on how it is less intelligent without a host.) End Edit Comment.


Chapter 1: A Nine-Tailed Pet?

Kyūbi attack, 10 October.1267 N.E (Ninja-Era. After the death of the Rikūdo Sennin) Year of the Kyūbi, 20 Minutes after the sealing was successful.

Hiruzen Sarutobi looked sadly at the remains of Minato Namikaze and Kushina Uzumaki-Namikaze. They'd given their lives to save the village by sealing the Kyūbi into their newborn son Naruto, However a mistake had occurred. Naruto had been turned into a miniature Kyūbi the size of a human baby, the differences between the two were the facts that Naruto had Azure blue eyes and Golden fur both of which separated him from the original Kyūbi.

Konoha Council Room, 30 Minutes after the sealing of Kyūbi no Kitsune

The entire council was shocked at what they had just been told, but they were more shocked by the miniature Kyūbi Naruto. The civilian council was terrified but they stayed calm after noticing that none of the Shinobi clan heads were acting in an aggressive manner. The clan heads were intrigued by this development, they wondered if there was a way for them to utilize the power of the Kyūbi in front of them. Danzo was wondering if he could get his hands on the Kyūbi and use its power as well.

With Fugaku Uchina dead, his wife Mikoto Uchina holding her four month old son Sasuke was the new head of the Uchina. They were the only clan to have a loss to the Kyūbi, the losses being Fugaku and the elder council for the Uchina when the building they were in was hit by a Bijudama (1). Mikoto was happy with this as she would be able to prevent the coup that the Uchina were planning as aside from Fugaku and the Elder Council none of the Uchinas wanted to rebel against the Hokage.

After the shock had worn off the entire council debated over what to do with the young Kyūbi. It looked like the argument was going to stay in a stalemate when Hiashi Hyūga had an idea that would have severe repercussions later on. He stood up in front of the council which fell quiet to hear his words. He said "Hokage-sama, if what you have said is true then this child is now a human mind controlling the power and body of the Kyūbi, correct?'

Hiruzen nodded his affirmative while saying "Yes that is correct, I assume you have an idea, Hiashi"

Hiashi nodded "What if we attempt to bond the child with a child of one of the clans and raise them together in a similar partnership as the Inuzuka and their dogs"

The entire council was awestruck at this idea and they all agreed and then came the most pertinent question, Hiruzen comments "And which clan will take Naruto as a partner to their child"

The clan heads didn't know how to decide this until a member of the civilian council with pink hair shouted "How about the Hyūga, since their clan head came up with the idea"

Hiashi was admittedly torn his wife Hitomi was pregnant and wouldn't give birth for a few months so he was hesitant, on the other hand it was his idea so he would have to go through with it. Hiashi stood up and said "I Hiashi Hyūga the clan head of the Hyūga will take Naruto Uzumaki in and attempt to foster a relationship between him and my unborn child."

78 Days later, 27 December. Year of the Kyūbi

And so that is how the new Kyūbi Naruto Uzumaki came to be present at the birth of Hinata Hyūga, They slept in the same bed and likely would for as possible. Naruto took to Hinata immediately and Hinata seemed to take to Naruto as well. Hitomi and Hiashi couldn't help but smile at the adorable sight of their daughter sleeping surrounded by fox tails with a smile on her face.

Three Years Later. 3 After Kyūbi. The Hyūga Estate.

Three long years had passed since Naruto and Hinata had become paired together. The Hyūga clan had come to laugh at the adorable antics of the Kyūbi and the Heiress, the usual stoic clan members were often driven to their knees laughing. Only a few days ago Hinata's younger sister Hanabi had been born and to the clans delight and surprise Naruto had taken to the younger sister almost as much as the older sister. Naruto had grown over the years to where he was the size of a German Sheppard, more often than not Hinata went to sleep in his long bushy tails (that were about 8 feet in length) instead of her futon.

Tonight was an important night! Tonight a Kumo Shinobi would attempt to abduct the Heiress of the Hyūga clan and would find out the consequences of such an action.

The Shinobi crept silently into the estate, not being spotted only because the Hyūga were banned from releasing the Byakugan within the estate unless there was an emergency. The Kumo Shinobi snuck into the Heiresses' bedroom, he then cast a Genjutsu to keep Hinata asleep at the one place he'd thought she would be.

Without pausing to check he stole the futon wrapping poor Hinata inside it, it felt rather light to the Shinobi. As he fled the estate he was caught by one of the Branch Family guards. When his package was inspected the guards burst into laughter and the Kumo Shinobi was infuriated at them, he'd just attempted to kidnap the daughter of their clan head and in a fit of rage screamed that out. Unfortunately for him Hiashi Hyūga was right behind him, having just walked into the yard with the Hokage who was coming to have a look at Naruto and discuss some things with Hiashi.

When the Kumo Shinobi noticed them behind him he cursed. Hiashi and Hiruzen on the other matter immediately recognized the Kumo Ambassador that had just finished peace talks with the Hokage and was scheduled to leave in the morning. When Hiashi asked why the guards were laughing they showed him the 'package' that the Ambassador had been carrying, Hiashi and Hiruzen burst into laughter as well. Losing it once again the Kumo Shinobi asked once more at the top of his voice what was so funny. The Branch Family guards showed him, the 'package' he'd risked everything over was empty he'd picked up the futon while Hinata had been sleeping wrapped in Naruto's tails the whole time.

The Kumo ambassador was sent back in disgrace, only to be laughed at by the Raikage when he explained what happened. He ended up the laughingstock of Kumo for the rest of the year, he eventually took up drinking and ended up sacrificing his life later in a mission, saving over 200 civilians.

Six Years later, 9 A.K.

Hinata now sat in the academy classroom watching all the students pour in on her first day of school, on the seat to her right was her six year old sister Hanabi, who'd managed to get an early admission into the academy due to her being a genius (Also because she didn't want to be left alone at home). On the seat to her left was Naruto who was about the size of a small pony standing up (A/N Think Akamaru from Shippuden, after all a full grown Kyūbi is massive. Also there is no set age limit for entry into the academy that I could find so I went with nine and a three year curriculum.) His tails were almost 10 feet in length and had enough power to smash through a concrete wall one and a half meters thick. There were many students in the class who Hinata didn't blink an eye at, there were some however that drew her attention.

Shikamaru Nara the heir to the Nara clan, true to his heritage he was sleeping on his desk… or pretending to. Next to Shikamaru was Chōji Akimichi heir to the Akimichi clan who were renowned for their jutsus... and their large stomachs, true to form he was munching on a packet of chips, Barbeque pork.

At the desk next to them were Ino Yamanaka and Sakura Haruno doing the inevitable girl talk they have whenever they are together. Behind them were Shino Aburame and Kiba Inuzuka the first was listening to music, the second was playing with his pet Akamaru. Sitting in the corner by himself was Sasuke Uchina. Sasuke was hoping that one day he'd equal his brother's achievements.

Iruka Umino walked into the room and glanced at the class he would be teaching for the next three years and thought 'This'll be an interesting class to teach, several clan heirs and to top it off the Kyūbi reincarnation. Oh well I enjoy a challenge and this should be a fun one'.

Iruka smiled and then shouted "QUIET"

The whole class quieted down while Naruto looked lazily at Iruka for shouting.

Iruka smirked and then said "Welcome to the Academy all of you. My name is Iruka Umino and over the next three years I'll be teaching you how to be a Ninja of the Leaf. You may call me Iruka-sensei or Umino-sensei I don't mind which. All of you will be pushed to your limits to find out exactly how strong you are." The whole class looked very uneasy at that proclamation and then Iruka continued by saying.

"There are some ground rules for being a student here. Number one, you mustn't fight unless we're practicing Taijutsu or Ninjutsu or a teacher is present to referee the match. Number two, when taking tests remember you are ninja, if you are going to cheat don't get caught, if you do you will fail the test. Number three, follow all instructions given to you by the instructors. And finally as a special rule, Don't tease or torment the Kyūbi no Kitsune sitting next to Hinata Hyūga, we don't want any deaths. Any questions?" Iruka asks noting the looks on the students' faces.

Sakura looks up and asks "Why the rule about cheating?"

Iruka looks surprised and then answers "We are trying to teach you to be a Ninja, if you have the skill to cheat of other classmates without being caught by a proctor, then you are definitely on the right path."

Kiba decided to take the hit and ask the obvious question "Umino-sensei why is there a Kyūbi in the classroom?"

Iruka chuckled at the question and replied "Why do you have a dog with you?"

Kiba frowned "Akamaru's my partner and part of the jutsus that I use"

Iruka nodded and said "Well it's the same for Hinata with Naruto"

Kiba frowned "Naruto?"

Hinata spoke up saying "Yes, Naruto that is his name" the class turned to look at her and suddenly Naruto's head was in her lap as he responded to her saying his name.

The girls all squealed the same thing "Aww Soooo CUTE".All the guys sweat dropped thinking 'Only girls would think a powerful demon is cute'

Iruka smiled again and said "Okay now let's do the roll"

The Next Lesson

"Okay after that starting orientation let's move on to the next stage. Now I want all of you to follow me outside" Iruka stated.

Outside at the Taijutsu and Ninjutsu practice grounds Iruka stopped and gave the class a short lecture on jutsus and asked "Who here knows any jutsus?"

Hinata, Hanabi, Sasuke, Shikamaru, Chōji, Ino and Shino all raised their hands.

"Okay. Would you all please show the class some of your jutsus please?" Iruka asked.

Sasuke nodded and then did some hand-seals and said "Katon: Gōkakyū no Jutsu (2)" then he blew a fireball out to the awe of the class.

Shikamaru yawned and said "Troublesome Kagemane no Jutsu (3)" His shadow then stretched out and connected to Sasuke's he then did a simple step and punch which Sasuke imitated.

Chōji smiled and said "Baika no Jutsu (4)" he then tripled in size. After 5 seconds he let the technique go and shrunk back to normal size.

Ino then stood up and made a strange hand-seal at Sasuke (Who was still standing) and said "Shintenshin no Jutsu (5)" and suddenly went limp before saying from Sasuke's body "Mind swap complete". Ino then released the technique and went back to her body, Sasuke didn't actually mind the fact that he was being used as a target for harmless (Somewhat) jutsus.

Hanabi smiled and then stood up and made a hand-seal before announcing "Byakugan(6)" then the trademark veins of her Kekkei Genkei being activated appeared and her eyes became more terrifying and ready for battle. Hanabi then deactivated it and sat down

Hinata smiled as well and stood up and walking a short distance from the others, Gathering chakra in her right palm and thrusts it forwards she shouts "Kitsune Style: Kitsune Bi (7)" and a White flame shoots from her palm and leaves a metre deep 4 metre long trench in the ground with some lava at the bottom. The rest of the class was amazed and as they starred at the trench, as the class starred Naruto walked up to Hinata and nuzzled her palm as she panted from exhaustion showing that the technique is quite draining.

Iruka looked stunned and asked "how did you do that?"

Hinata gave a tired smile and replied "Because I'm Naruto's keeper and he sleeps in my room, and I often sleep in his tails I have acquired demonic chakra from him. I can use this chakra to use Kitsune Techniques like the one I just used. Unfortunately I'm not as strong as Naruto, his Kitsune Bi is four times as long and twice as deep!" before she bent over still panting from exhaustion. The entire class all thought the same thing 'Don't Mess with Hinata or the Fox'


Jutsu and Technique Translations

(1) Tailed Beast Ball

(2) Fire Style: Grand Fireball Technique

(3) Shadow Imitation Technique

(4) Multi-Size Technique

(5) Mind Body Switch Technique

(6) White Eye

(7) Fox Style: Fox Fire.


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To Bridge the Endless Void (Hiatus)

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