Hey guys this is my new story :) Loren and Eddie are in high school together. Their moms are best friends. Loren's dad left when she was four and never looked back. Enjoy. *Settings: First day of High school
Mel: I know! I have waited for this day all my life!
Loren: Really? (Loren gives Mel a look.)
Mel: No. Look there's Eddie. (Mel waves at Eddie.)
Loren: Stop!
Mel: Why? (Mel gives Loren a look.) You like him don't you?!
(Eddie heads over to them just as Mel says that.)
Eddie: Who do you like? Tell me so I can pound their face to the ground. (Eddie laughs.)
Mel: If you really want to know she likes... (Loren covers Mel's mouth with her hand.)
Loren: I don't like anyone that you know. We have to go to class right Mel?
Mel: Right... Bye Eddieee.
(Loren and Mel walk away and start heading towards class.)
Eddie's thoughts: That was weird... God Loren looks hot today. When did she grow up? It feels like just last week that we were playing in the sandbox in her backyard. She has grown up beautifully. God she is gorgeous! I wonder if she is coming to my back to school pool party this weekend? I will ask her at lunch today.
Loren: I can't believe you just did that!
Mel: I'm just trying to get you out there!
Loren: He is a senior! I'm just a freshman! He could have any girl in this school that he wants. I mean look at him! Why would he want me?! I'm just a dumb freshman with a crush...
Mel: Look at yourself Lo! You are gorgeous!
Loren: No I'm not!
(Loren is wearing skinny jeans, a yellow tube top, a white leather jacket, and white knee-high boots.)
Mel: Yes you are. Now come on because now we are going to be late for our first class in high school!
*Lunch time
(Mel and Loren are looking for a table when Eddie waves to them telling them to come sit with him and his friends.)
(Loren and Mel sit down.)
Eddie: Hey Lo, Mel. Guys this is Loren Tate, and Melissa Sanders. They are freshman.
(Eddie puts his arm around Loren's shoulder and one of the cheerleaders give Loren a glare.)
Person: Hi I'm Chloe. I'm the head cheerleader.
Loren's thoughts: Wow. I can tell that Chloe is the queen bee in this school. I can tell that she likes Eddie.
Person: I'm Ryan and this is Justin my brotha from anotha motha.
(Loren and Mel laugh.)
(The other people introduce themselves.)
Eddie: So are you guys going to my party this weekend? (He is talking to Mel and Loren.)
Loren: I thought that it was a no freshman party?
Eddie: I was planning on that, but you can go if you want. I would like you to come.
(Eddie gave Loren that smile that all the girls fall in love with.)
Loren: I guess I will stop by if I don't have a lot of school.
Mel: LO! Don't worry Eddie we will be there.
(Loren and Mel walk away after that to go outside before they have to go to class.)
Mel: If you don't have that much school?! What is wrong with you!
(Mel screams at Loren.)
Loren: I'm sorry, but I don't know what I did wrong.
Mel: If word gets out that you said that our rep is ruined!
Loren: What rep? This is our first day...
Mel: That's my point! Do you know how many freshmen are invited to a senior's party?! And on the first day?!
Loren: I'm SORRY that my school and grades are important to me!
Mel: No need to freak out Lo.
Loren: You're the one talking!
(Loren walks away upset.)
(End of school.)
Mel: Wait up Lo!
Loren: No!
Mel: Do you want me to drop you off at your house?
Loren: NO! I can get a ride from someone else.
Mel: Okay. Bye. I'm sorry Lo.
Loren: Bye.
(Right after Mel leaves Loren starts walking home even though she lives 20 minutes away from her house by car.)
(Loren has been walking for about five minutes a car pulls up next to her.)
(Loren looks and see's that it is Eddie's car. Eddie lowers the window.)
Eddie: Need a ride?
Loren: No I'm good.
Eddie: Come on. Hop in. It takes 20 minutes from here to get to your house. And that's with a car.
Loren: Fine.
(Loren got into Eddie's jeep wrangler.)
*Inside the car
Eddie: Doesn't Mel have a car? I saw her park when I got here today.
Loren: Yeah. We got into a fight.
Eddie: What about? (He then looks over at Loren and see's that she is blushing.)
Loren: Something dumb.
Eddie: Okay. So how was your first day of high school?
Loren: The first half was great. That girl Chloe doesn't seem to like me though.
Eddie: What makes you say that.
(Loren blushes again.)
Loren: Well, um, when you put you arm around my shoulder she glared at me.
Eddie: That does sound like her. She gets jealous easily.
Loren: Oh. (Loren's heart sunk.) So she's your girlfriend?
Eddie: God no. She is my ex though. She cheated on me with a guy named Tyler.
Loren: Oh. (Loren was happy again.)
(Eddie pulls into Loren's driveway.)
Eddie: Is Nora at work?
Loren: Yeah she is at an overnight thing. Do you want to study?
Eddie: Sure. Let me just call my mom.
Loren: Okay.
(Loren unlocks the door and Loren and Eddie walk in.)
Eddie and Katy on the phone:
Eddie: Hey ma.
Katy: Hey sweetie. How was your first day back at school?
Eddie: Good. I just wanted to let you know that I am going to hang out with Lo for a little bit and do school, okay?
Katy: Yeah that's fine. Oh and by the way Loren is staying with us tonight because her mom is away on business tonight. Okay?
Eddie: Yeah okay. I'll bring her over when I go home okay?
Katy: Okay. See you in a little while sweetie. Bye. Love you!
Eddie: Bye. Love you to.
*End of phone call
Eddie: So you are staying at my house tonight...
Loren: Yeah I know. My mom left a note for me and I just read it.
Eddie: So what do you have?
Loren: I have math and history. What about you?
Eddie: I have some reading for English and that's it.
Loren: Okay.
*Two hours later
Loren: Let me go pack a bag and then I will be ready to go okay?
Eddie: Okay.
(Loren goes to pack a bag when she checks her phone and see's a text from Mel saying she is sorry so she replies to her saying that it's okay.)
Loren: Ready?
Eddie: Yeah lets go.
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