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To whoever it was who would not stop criticizing my story: if you read NAWHDinosaurs fanfic. "Oh baby" you would find out more, I am just writing my charactars P.O.V.

To my good pal n.d. : as long as you review I am happy and will keep this up glad you are enjoying it

The rock shattered open and the form of a 5 year old child came out. You see when the meteorite went through earth's atmosphere the radiation of the ozone layer caused the virus to evolve quickly and at a rapid pace. (Or you know, fast)

The virus…er …child…um lets just call it the "boy" for now opened its newly appeared eyes and looked around in wonder. Because it had evolved o fast its brainpower had grown exceptionally well. He was as smart as most high school seniors.

Looking down he realized he was nude and looking for something to cover his self up with saw the poor raccoon's carcass. Grabbing a sharp rock he quickly made a small pair of pants to cover his "area" and began to question what the heck was happening.

(His brain might have grown but he did not know everything, he had no idea where he came from and how would he as a virus he had no memories or even a gender)

Before he could do much else he heard a crackling noise coming from the nearby foliage. Terrified, he began making noises to scare whatever it was.

Suddenly bursting out of the trees a male grizzly bear jumped out and eyed the strange creature that had entered his territory. He had recognized it as a "hooman." He heard tales about them often and learned they were not so smart. Instead of leaving his area they just stayed in place urinating themselves while he mauled them to death.

Suddenly the boy stopped making sounds, he realized that it was he who had started the problem and ran off. (note: in real life running from a bear will pretty much kill you) The grizzly stood there dumbfounded did the little creature know what he was thinking.

The young boy ran until he found a rock to sit down on, even for this newly created creature he knew that sensing an animals thoughts was not normal.

Just then he heard another sound, only this one sounded less threatening.

Out of the bushes a woodsman came out and surprised to see a young child started to talk to him.

"Who are you?" he asked hoping the lad could talk

"I really don't know, all I remember is coming out of a clearing and walking to this rock"

Feeling bad for the young one the woodsman invited him back to his cottage to spend the night.

I write short chapters but at least they are well written :D