I am sort of new at this I know my punctuation isn't that good but getting better and I hope you like please review and give me some ideas that would be good ENJOY :)
Prologue
"I love you Arriane"Roland said. As we sat in the living room "and I love our baby" he said.
As he placed a hand on the the small baby's forehead.
Arriane was crying "she'll be fine us" said a girl with long brown hair.
Standing next to a blonde hair boy. Roland handed the baby over to the girl "wait" Arriane said "can we at least name" her she asked the brown haired girl nodded.
"Athena and when she's seventeen give her this" a white gold heart shaped necklace that was placed around Arriane's neck.
The girl nodded her head "I love you" Arriane said and kissed Athena's forehead and hugged Roland "our little girls gone" Arriane said.
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