Unexpected feelings

A modernised version of pride and prejudice……. Please review! Its probably no good! And certainly wont be any where near the brilliance of the book, but we can only do our best!

Liz Bennet walked through the school gates, it was her first day back after the holidays and she was eager to catch up with her friends again! She saw them all huddled in the usual corner with Kat announcing something excitedly (probably about some guy she'd pulled over the holidays!) as Liz approached she heard Lydia squeal, she laughed to herself and her best friend Jane turned round an saw her! She smiled and whispered a hello, and tried to make out what was being said.

"He's well fit!" Kat was saying " he moved in yesterday! He seems really friendly as well, and he's rich! His dads some old pop star!" she stopped to take a much needed breath before continuing "Well obviously he'll like Jane….. I mean everyone does!" This was true if Jane wasn't such a great person Liz would hate her! She was drop dead gorgeous and there wasn't one guy in the whole school… no town that didn't fancy the pants off her! "but……" Kat continued "He's got a brother to apparently he's even hotter! Although apparently he's really rude! But anyway Jane can't have both can she I mean……." She stopped dead. The girls all turned round there stood before them was a tall blonde tanned guy sure he was good looking…. But he wasn't really Liz's type…. Jane's yes but no Liz preferred the tall dark handsome type, like……… like the guy stood behind him! Wow he was HOT! He had dark brown floppy hair almost over his eyes, and wow those eyes, they were deep dark and intense, Liz could feel herself drowning in them!

Liz was awoken from her trance by Kit "errrrr yeah hi Charlie" she stammered "these are my friends" she continued gathering herself a little "Liz Jane and…." She was cut short as Lydia charged forwards fluttering her eyelids (Lydia had always been a pathological flirt)

"Hi I'm Lydia" she said "its so fantastic to meet you!"

"you to he" said in a polite posh manor "all of you" he continued looking purposely at Jane she smiled shyly, this guy was so her type! Despite her good looks Jane was really shy, she finally mustered up some courage

"So what do you think of this place then so far?" she asked

"Its Brilliant!" He replied in what seemed a genuine way "not quite like the private school we went to before, it's a bit of a major change but its really cool! And its getting better" he looked at Jane again with a smile! Liz could see all her friends react to this… Jane melted whilst the other two threw her a jealous look!

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What about you?" said looking right at the hot one (not that it was a chore!) "errrrr"

"Oh how rude of me" Exclaimed Charlie! "this is my brother Darcy come on Darce answer the lady's question" Darcy looked down at them with a look of distain (or so Liz felt!)

"its aright I spose……" he said "Not the same standard of people as Oak Hill (AN. Yes yes I stole it from corrie!), but I'm sure I'll survive" Lizzie opened her mouth and then closed it again. The cheek of it! She'd gone right off him! Charlie looked a little embarrassed

"errrrm yes anyway we better get going, got classes and that to sort out! Hopefully see you all soon" and with that they walked off, although Charlie kept looking back at Jane. Just as they had disappeared through the door, 2 more of there friends Maz and Charl appeared

"what have we missed?" asked Charl

"Well….." they all began at once!