She was waiting, for some one who will never come. Until he came, and he saw the beautiful cherry blossom that she was, broken by someone. Even though, she killed his beloved sensei. He could not help loving her, she was a broken flower be for she bloomed. Hurt the same way he was…

(It's the summery/prequel, well any way hears my first fan fiction. Please review.)

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The young kunoichi starred out the window, the paint was slowly chipping way. 'I need to fix that.' she gave in to a sigh. As the sunset into a pale pink, then a fiery orange, to a deep coal black. Her thoughts wonder to the day at the hospital, more people came in than usual that day…

Today ninja came flooding in with injures galore. But all of them were knocked out, so they couldn't fill out a report, and had similar injures. Everyone thinks it was a planed assault on hidden leaf ninja. Few even thought it's the work of Oroichmaru…

Suddenly, a bang that was as loud as a thunder clap came form the front door. Quickly she grasped in to the pouch that was fasten to her slender thigh. As her short, pink, hair moved with her. With her small frame, and delicate face you would think she wasn't that strong. But, you're dead wrong, she could make a 10 feet wide, 5 feet deep crater with her fist. She was a superb medical ninja; some say she surpassed her master, the fifth Hokage.

Anyway she sprung up and took a defense fighting stance. As two men, both had a black on with some red (they were moving to fast for her to see). One sent what seemed to be a clay bird towards her head. But, the kunoichi was too occupied by his partners, with an orange swirling mask, to see it coming. Then as she turned her head it explodes with just enough force to knock her out.

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So how was that? I know it was short, but I need to know if it sounds right. Plus it was more of a prequel to the story. Reviews are much needed. Thanks for reading. .