This is the intro/prologue to my original character (Suki). It's pretty dark and twisted
Tears streamed down the emaciated young girl's face. Today was her 4th birthday. As she lay in a twisted heap, she felt a cruel and powerful kick to the stomach. She cried out softly in pain.
"Get up," a slithery voice ordered. The young girl struggled to push herself up. Her arms shook from the effort, and gave out from under her. She fell back to the cold steel floor.
"Pathetic," The monster growled.
He wrapped his tail around the girl's neck, and lifted her to his eye level (which wasn't that tall, only 4' 4"). His face was full of hatred. It was the face of the demon who called himself Freeza. "I don't know why I bother keeping you alive," he hissed.
Freeza threw the young girl at the wall.
"You can make your way to the infirmary when you feel like it," He cooed sarcastically. He left the room. This had become a routine for the young girl. She knew that Freeza took joy in beating and torturing her. He found it a "sport".
She felt blood trickle down her temple. She tried to get up. She tried to stand up. Pain shot through her right leg. She bit back a scream."Crap," she hissed under her breath. Her leg was broken. She was going to crawl to the infirmary. "This isn't going to be fun," she muttered under her breath.
She dragged herself to the door. Pulling her bruised and bloody body upwards, she slowly but steadily got closer to the button that would open the door. Suddenly, the door opened. The girl fell backwards in fright, landing in a heap on her wounded leg. The pain was blinding. She bit back a scream. A short muscular man with black flame shaped hair stepped through the doorway.
"Oh Vegeta, it's just you," the girl said with a ragged voice.
"And I see you're still alive Suki," Vegeta snidely replied.
"Hey, broken leg here..."
"And? What do you want me to do about it?"
"Maybe help me? I know you're a Saiyan and all, but the rest of us don't have balls made out of titanium alloy."
Vegeta smirked and lifted Suki over his shoulder. To other's it looked rough, but he handled her with a surprisingly delicate touch. "I see Freeza had a lot of 'fun' with you today," Vegeta whispered sarcastically.
Suki's giggles were interlaced with strain from the excruciating pain she felt throughout her body. "That's for sure," Suki whispered back, "Why'd you come to see me anyway, do you really care that much about little-old me?"
Vegeta raised an eyebrow and smirked. "Don't get your hopes up," He joked, "I got a new assignment. Nappa and I - we're heading to exterminate a B-class planet,"
Suki groaned, "B-class? How long?"
"Don't know, over a month?"
"That'll suck. Who else will I have to drag me to the infirmary?"
"Heh,"
The two had reached the infirmary. The doctor, a reptilian bird like creature looked up from his desk. "Put her in the regeneration tank over there," The doctor croaked.
Vegeta gently placed her in the tank and placed an Oxygen mask over her face.
"Don't die," She called out as Vegeta closed the tank door. He nodded and pressed the button to release the healing gel. Suki closed her yes and fell asleep letting the cool gel flow over her bruises and wounds.
The next day -
Suki awoke to the sound of the doctor puttering around in the infirmary. He glanced over at the monitor next to Suki's tank. He drained the fluid. Suki took off her oxygen mask and walked out of the chamber soaking wet.
"How's the leg feeling?" the doctor inquired.
"Fine," Suki replied.
Suki went to the back of the infirmary where they had extra uniforms. She pulled on another black spandex bodysuit and added another layer of armor. Her armor had the same design as the rest of Freeza's army, except she had a white mark on the right shoulder, designating her as Freeza's personal pet. No one could harm her unless under Freeza's orders, lest they wanted an early death.
"Freeza sent this, you're supposed to analyze all these planets, categorize them. Then look at the new model scouter and work on that. He wants this done by 0200 tomorrow," The doctor explained handing her a pad.
Suki looked through some of the material and nodded. "This'll be easy, I'll have it done by the end of today," Suki concluded.
"Heh, guess we we know why Freeza keeps you around," the doctor chuckled "You're so smart you can do work faster than the entire analytics team!"
Suki smiled sweetly as she turned to leave.
"Wait! I have to give you a checkup," The doctor croaked.
Suki sighed. She stood up and walked to one of the beds and sat on it. "Fine, I'm ready," she grunted, bracing herself against the bed.
The doctor held up a remote in his hands. He pressed a couple of buttons on it and Suki felt all her energy drain away. The Doctor looked through his scouter to monitor Suki's power level. As expected, Suki's power level dropped to near zero. The doctor pressed another button. Purple sparks flew from Suki's chest as she bit back a cry of pain. The sparks faded, Suki lay on the bed, gasping for air.
"There," the doctor reassured soothingly, "That wasn't so bad, was it?"
"No matter how many times you do that, it still hurts like hell!" Suki rasped.
The doctor smiled sympathetically as he entered the results of the test into the computer system. This was not unusual for Suki. She had had implants inside of her since she was two. Freeza had ordered the operation. Why he did it, she did not know. The device controlled her energy. She absolutely hated it. Suki returned to her room. She worked on the material Freeza had sent to her as she lay on her bed.
Life went on for Suki. She lived through the torture of living with Freeza for another year. One fateful day…
"Ah… Suki. I'm glad to see you here," Freeza purred.
Suki knelt down as required. "What do you need, Lord Freeza?" She asked. Suki hated the words coming out of her mouth, but they kept her alive. So she said them.
"We're going on a little field trip to a planet called Namek to go look for Dragon Balls." We depart at once," Freeza announced.
Suki nodded obediently. She often came with Freeza on mission to other planets. She enjoyed going on these trips. She could escape the confines of the bases or ships she lived on. Suki hated the killing though. She absolutely hated the killing. Freeza often left no one alive on planets they visited. It left her feeling sick, no matter how many times she experienced it.
"You're dismissed," Freeza finished.
Suki was going on the adventure of a lifetime. One that would change her life forever.
So! this was my Prologue to my OC Suki... Please comment and stuff... I'm open to constructive criticism (because I'm pretty sure my writing sucks). But! Onwards! Everything is a learning experience. So I want to take this story as far as Super. I do intend on changing some of the Buu arc (It wasn't my favorite - especially how Gohan was thrown under the rug after all the development they gave him during the Cell arc). Please comment any suggestions you have!
