A New Beginning 2
Ch. 1: The Beginning of the End
First, I'd like to reply to a review.
Dax Jendo: The reason that I wrote it nonchalantly is because she was injured and Luke didn't want to get her too excited.
Many years progressed and the four friends were now seasoned Jedi Knights.
"Master Madet, I'd like you to train Ben."
"Are you sure, Master Skywalker? I mean, he is your son!"
"I'm sure. I'm too busy training the newcomers to train a padawan of my own. And since Mara already has a padawan, I'd feel better if it was you who trained him."
"I'll try my best, Master Skywalker."
"Thanks, Aarma."
"You hear that Ben? We get to spend more time together!", A young Ben Skywalker looked up at his new Master and smiled.
"Ben, I want you to be good for Aarma. He'll be your new Master for a few years. Okay?"
"Okay, Daddy!", Luke laughed and hugged his son.
As the friends continued to train their padawans, they also sparred against each other so that they could stay in practice.
This time, it was Aarma and Al'riti's turn to fight. Aarma drew his lightsaber from his belt and activated it. With a snap-hiss, his brilliant yellow blade appeared.
Al'riti charged at Aarma, igniting his saber while he ran. The loud hum of the blades and the crackles of the hits drowned out the sounds of the cheering onlookers.
The two swung their sabers at each other so hard that they knocked each other down. Al'riti was the first to get up and went over to Aarma. "You are weak. I have no business fighting you." he said.
- How was that? I'm just getting started. I already have about four pages already written! Please review! Criticism is welcomed! Also, any advice would be helpful! Tell me what you'd like to be seen done in the story, I try to make as people as I can happy with my writing!
