We were young when Tobias promised that when I came back we could finally date! I know what you must be thinking... why so sure? Well, we were madly in love and only had eyes for each other. I guess that's changed because when I come back to the lunch table my new BFF,Christina, pointed out I see my Toby sucking faces with another girl. To make matters worse she is stunning...
So hi! To all you who clicked this story! Wether the summary really intrigued you or you were just trying to click on the story above/below mine and has a sudden interest in my one!
Here are a couple things before I upload my first ever chapter that you guys will hopefully review:
1. I am from England so the words I use might be different from your country. I am making this an American school btw because American schools, from the fanfics I read, sound awesome! So if you are American or if you know a lot about schools there I would appreciate advice or any corrections to anything that I did wrong.
2. No haters! I will not tell you guys my age but I am between 11-14 years old and maybe my story isn't as good as someone else's. I don't know but what I do know is that I'm doing this for fun and not to get a bunch of hateful reviews! ^sorry about my little ramble there^
3. I am writing this on my kindle and I'm not entirely sure how to upload a picture to the story. Also if the names of things aka. Uriah, Zeke, Trissy or any other names that my kindle doesn't understand, are spelled wrong it is because of autocorrect and not because I am a divergent noob who can't spell.
4. Please don't hold back in giving me any new ideas for the storyline, submitting me some characters, (because eventually I want to add some of your guys' characters) or giving me constructive criticism or corrections to things I may have written wrong but it will mostly be autocorrect's fault.
Thinking of any other things to say... hmm... naaah, apart from one thing... YOU KNOW IT: Disclamer tiiiimmmmeeeee!
Tris: Huh, you think she owns me or any of my friends?! Well you are wrong we are not owned, we are dauntless!
Uriah: Yup you got that right, Trissy! Wait who ate my cake?!
Zeke: Ahhh well little Bradah! It just looked lonely there sitting alone on top of the table...
Four: JUST SHUDDUP PANSYCAKES!
Marlene: Oh no, you too, Four?! I already have to deal with enough with my boyfriend saying pansycake!
Will: Actually, Tris, you are wrong we are owned by one person, you know Vero-
Christina: What? The girl interviewing us? The short one with nerd glasses? Ooh where did you get them from?
Shauna: Christinaaaaa! No she does not own us, just the storyline.
Everyone: THEN WHO DOES?!
Me: The amazingly talented Veronica Roth of course!
