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(uchiha Ayuki pov)

I wake up at the soand of broken glasses I guess it's going to be another hard day. Maybe I should start by introducing myself.

My name is Uchiha Ayuki I'm 15 years old and as you have guess my parents are Uchiha sasuke and Uchiha sakura. You should all be thinking that I live a happy life but I don't. You see my father doesn't like me because I'm a girl. Yeah that's right Uchiha sasuke wanted a boy so he could train him and teach all that shit that he wants.Fortunately for him he had a boy, of course he's my brother his name it's Ichigo, he is curently 14 years old. We don't like each other that much, don't get me wrong we love each other but as siblings we have fights. So you still want to know why I don't have a happy life. Well like I was saying aside from my father, my mother makes my life unhappy too. She is nice but she' so stupid she agrees with everything that my dad says. Seriously sometimes I just want to slap her and tell her to have some respect for herself but it wouldn't work anyway.Also my teammates doesn't like me that much either. First of all my bestfriend and teammate is Uzumaki Yamanato but I like to call him yama-kun I think his name sucks but I wouldn't say that aloud bacause last time I did I receive glares from everyone. I mean how was I suppose to know that yamanato was naruto father's name. Yama-kun is Hinata and Naruto's son but seriously he's nothing like them and thank god. Unlike his dad he's not so loud and he's not shy either. Anyway my other teammate is Hyuuga la I know she has a weird name but everyone thinks it's cute. They're stupid like everybody in this village except fot yama-kun but anyway the reason why she hates me it that she has a crush on Yama-kun. We used to be friends until she knew that I was Yama-kun bestfriend. My mother says that I shouldn't give up a friendship because of a guy because later I will regret it like she did. Well, she can say anything she want after all I wasn't the one that broke up our relationship so if she want to fix things then she should say sorry to me not backwards. Anyhow La is Neji and tenten's daughter in my opinion she's ugly but people said she's cute. She has brown hair that reached to her waist and white eyes. Seriously how can someone think that white eyes is cute.Also she dresses like a lut with a white mini skirt and a pink japanese shirt.La has a brother too his name is Hatashi. I hate him he's so stupid and arrogant, he thinks he's the best just because he's older than us. I mean he's 17 years old and he thinks he's great what a loser he is.well who cares about them. My sensei is shikamaru I like to call him shika because his name it's too long, people always scold me of how I call him. They say I should treat him with more respect. Well what has he done to ger my respect, he's strong but he's to LAZY. One time I kick him in the guts because he was sleeping instead of training us. I got suspended 2 weeks because of that and that wasn't the worst. I got ground it and my mother agree to, she said that if 'sasuke-kun' said so then that's the best for me. I wanted to slap both of them at that time. Contuining with my story I quickly go dressed and went to training. I didn't feel like seeing my family today.

(training grounds)

as usual I'm late to training but it doesn't matter after all our sensei spends more time sleeping then training us.

" good morning, Ayuki-chan you look great today" like usual Yama-kun greeted me

"Hi, tomboy" La greeted me

"Hn" was all I said

Everyone then looked at me after all I always greeted her with an insult but today I didn't feel like it after I heard my parent's conversation.

'flashback'

I was going to the kitchen, it was late and I didn't had dinner. I stopped at the sound of my parents voices.

"...sasuke-kun what are we going to do if we die what we'll happen to them" askd my mother

"I want Ichigo to have the house" answered Sasuke, his response didn't surprised me

" but what about Ayuki, I think she should have something too"

" She's going to get marry someday so she won't need anything"

"ok, sasuke-kun if you say so then I think you're right"

'end of flashback'

" what do I have something on my face or what" I ask a little annoy

"nothing" everyone answer

"so what are we going to do shika " I asked our sensei

"so troublesome but we don't have training because Ino wants to take me shopping"

what he make come here just for that man how I hate Ino right now. That's right Nara Shikamaru married the second most annoying person in the world( sakura is first) Yamanaka Ino. They have a daughter name Ukira. She is kinda pretty with her brown hair and blue eyes but she has this prep attitude. We're sort of friends but just when our mother's are around I think they want us to be like them. Well they're so wrong.

when I was about to kick him, he was already gone. Just my luck

"Ayuki-chan do you want to go the hot srpings with me" asked Yama-kun

"sure Yama-kun just let me go pick my stuff" I answer in a smooth happy voice. Sometimes I wonder how he makes me talk like that.

"wait, what about me" asked La with a hint of jeoulosy in her voice

"if you want to come then you can I'll see you both at 2" answer Yama-kun

I knew he didn't want her to come but if he had said no then his mother would scold him for it.Yeah that's right Uzumaki Hinata wants La to marry Yama-kun. I think she sometimes hate me because Yama-kun always prefer me over La.

"ok I'll be going now I'll see you in a hour"I said

" wait Ayuki-chan can I go with you to your house" ask Yama-kun

I like it when Yama-kun is with me, he's the only one that makes me happy. Sometimes I'm cold when I talked to people but eveytime Yama-kun talks to me I ALWAYS talk to him really sweet.

"sure yama-kun" I answer in a sweet voice

(konoha)

We talk all the way to my house. Some people look at us and whisper among themselves if we're a couple or something like that. We really don't care. People in konoha are REALLY noisy, I don't get how naruto wanted to be hokage when the villagers always treated him badly.

(Uchiha compound)

when we reach my house I could see that my family is in there. I didn't want to see them. I thought that my father was training with my brother and my mother in the hospital. I always try to avoid them. They NEVER see me talking nicely with anyone. I guess they don't know that Yama-kun is my bestfriend and he is the only one that undestands me.

" I'm home" I called hoping tha they wouldn't notice Yama-kun

"Ayuki-san come eat with us and don't say you can't because if you do I'll bring you here" my mother said

I knew there was no choice so I look at Yama-kun asking if he wanted to come in and he nodded.
when we got in everyone look surprise even my father that surprise me.Now I knew why mother wanted me to come in we have guests but no any guests. They are Ino and Ukira.

"hello" I greeted with a cold voice but it isn't so cold like always

"Hi, Ayuki-san why are you here so early"ask Sakura

"because Shika said that he was shopping with Ino" I answer

"Ayuki be more respectful" my father scold me

"it's okay and yeah we were going shopping but then I remembered that Ukira-chan's birthday is next week and I want to know if I could make the party here" Ino said

"of course you can Ino-can" mother reasure her

" well then I guess I'll be leaving" I said

"oh wait Ayuki what's Yamanato-san doing here" asked my mother

" I 'm going to the hot springs with him and he is here because he asked if he could come with me and I said yes" I answer

"oh,okay" she sounded surprise

"so Yamanato how is Naruto doing" ask my father

"he's fine sir but he still complains that he doesn't eat ramen too much" Yama-kun answer

"hn" he said

then they keep asking quesions about La, training and if he is going to be hokage. Man how many question do they have they just keep asking about La. I'm getting some foof then I looke at Yama-kun and he had a bothersome look.

"mother I think it's time we go we don't want to be late" I tell her in my monotously voice

"okay but let me ask him some things" mother say

" so Yamanato-san what do you think about La" she ask

" well she's strong but I think her clothes are uncomfortable and she should stop winking at me I don't get why she does that and when she blushes" Yama-kun say

he really is the hokage's son, I mean it's obvious that she likes him. But I'm not telling him if he doesn' like her but what if he does ?
I choke on my food at my last thought and everyone is lookin at me. Oh great

"Ayuki-san are you okay" my mother ask

"yeah " I say

"Ayumi-chan are you okay?"ask Yama-kun with a worry tone

"yes, Yama-kun I'm going upstairs to get some clother please wait here" I answer him with a sweet tone

everyone look surprise after all I NEVER add a suffix to anyone's name nor did I talk sweet.\

I got to my room and pick some clothes, my favorite color are black and blue. I guess La is right maybe I'm a tomboy. After all I always wear baggy pants and loose shirts. Just then I remembered that Yama-kun has been paying more attention to La. That makes me jelous cause lately La has beed dressing more slutty and Yama-kun pays more attention to her.
Then I decided I should dress different just for today but that is hard since I don't have any womanly clothes. Just then I remember the light blue capri pants that my brother gave to me on my birthday. I don't know if the'll still fit me 'cause that was a year ago but I should try. When I find them I put them on. I didn't expect them to be this tight. I looke myself in the mirror but I still looke the same. Maybe I should wear a smaller shirt. I started looking for shirts when I finally found one. It' the one I wore when I was 13 years old but I only wear it one time because my parents said that it was irrespectful.The shirt says 'If you don't like to look at me then turn the fuck around' and on the back it says 'when you call me bitch I just laugh cause I knew that way before you.
I look at myself I look at little different my pants and shirt are tight and they show te curves I always hide and my huge breasts. They are almost the same sice as tsunade's. But somehow I still don't like it then I realize that I always have my hair in a messy bun so I let down my hair. I forget to say that I have black hair with green eyes but in the dark they look kinda green. Everyone says that I have beutiful eyes but I don't fand them special, my mother has the same eyes and my brother. Sometimes I envy Ukira's eyes they're beutiful. Now that I see my hair I see that it's messy. I start brushing it and it see that it's getting curly. I don't remember having any family member with curly hair this is so weird. I look at the time and it mark 1:40. I guess I spende 20 minutes looking for clothes.

(downstairs)

Now that I'm downstairs I'm getting nervous. Maybe Yama-kun won't like how I look maybe I should buy skirts but what if he didn't like me wearing tight clothes after all he always sees me with big clothes. But if I don't try I 'll never know.

"Yama-kun I'm nack it's time to go" I said I didn't realize that I have my eyes close until I open them and everyone look surprise.

"Ayuki-kun what happened to you" ask Yama-kun I didn't expect to be sad but I want to cry now.

" Ayuki-san you look pretty you should dress like that more often"my mother said

"yeah, Ayuki you don't look ugly anymore maybe you still do" Ichigo said

"Hn , you look like my mom ayuki , you know she had curly hair" my father said

I wasn't listening to anything of what they were saying, I' m sad of Yama-kun reactions but then I thought that maybe he was surprise and he actually like it.

"don't you like it Yama-kun?" I ask I could see him cheking me out and he look like if he's dsapproving. Then everyone notice that I my eyes were watering. I don't want to cry infront him but then I see him smile.

" you look beutiful Ayuki-chan I was just a little surprise after all I don't see you onten like that" said Yama-kun

I feel happy now, that's what I wanted to hear

"so you think I look better now" I ask I want to make sure that he likes it if he does maybe it's time for I change

" I think you look beutiful in any way Ayuki-chan no matter how you dress you will always look beutiful in my eyes but I like how you used to dress because I thought that if you dress different you will act different but now I know that you'll always be the same" Yama-kun said I was a little shock for what he said but at the same time happy. I didn't expect him to say that but I'm gald that he say it. Then Yama-kun came closer to me and kiss my forehead.

"I'll wait for you outside" he said

I could feel myself red, everyone is looking at me strangely but I'm happy for what Yama-kun did.

"ok, I'll be going now " I said but this time my voice sound it happy

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