The Temptress and the Shy girl
Haha the title is lame as but I couldn't think of a good title plus it does have to do with the story, it was either that or misinterpretation so…
Are they two different people? NO! They are both Hinata Hyuuga! Well anyway you guys probably think I have flipped my lid starting a new story but it's just a short one, maybe.
Get on with it already…
Oh yeah I forgot! The whole reason I am doing this is because of a writer who just joined the site Tinkerbee! Awesome name, . net/u/2021622/ url for everyone to click! It has been more than a week though sorry! Anyway losing plot again because of tiredness, she asked me to participate in this thing on her profile called challenge of the week and it sounded awesome so of course I'm going to do it, hopefully I will have other people joining in with me soon anyways this is a brief thingo of the task
Challenge of the week
A SasuHina fic
# of characters :basically everyone from Naruto
Main Character: Hinata
2nd main character: Sasuke
3rd main character: Sakura (she's the bitch of the story )
Theme: High school, dorm life, ecchi
Main Idea: Hinata is the school's star student but she's also the school's temptress however, she doesn't know this. Everything that happens to her in class ends up turning into something ecchi and all the boys just can't take it they end up running to the bathroom (I really don't want to get into detail ;) sasuke and his friends seems most susceptible (sp?) and they're also the ones who witnesses most of Hinata's actions whether at home or at school (and NO they're not a stalker you weirdoes out there). Hinata's "sisters" (friends) try to stop the antics while the boys try to control themselves
Ok so usual disclaimer applied and hopefully this is good!
Hinata walked into the large black school campus gates, looking around, the school hadn't changed over the summer, it was still big, cream coloured with black framing. On every side of the gravel pathways were beautiful flowering trees, it was spring so the gardens and grass were as green and beautiful as ever, the school was a boarding school and it had many floors so that the campus wasn't to large in width. Hinata pushed her skirt down as the wind nearly blew it up; she was wearing the school uniform. A short black pleated skirt with thigh length white socks. She had on a short sleeved white dress shirt with the top button undone. She had her long midnight hair up in a ponytail and her black T-Bars were done up tightly. The boy's uniform had the same shirt but with black slacks, a black belt and black dress shoes with short white socks. Hinata had been at Konoha high since she started high school two years ago, she was now in year 9 and had just turned 14 in December last year, it was now February. She walked down the pathway to the big glass doors and down the rows of black lockers and black tiled floors till she reached her locker, feeling eyes on her the whole way.
She opened up her locker, she thought about her friends, she couldn't wait to see them again, for some reason at this school she was really popular.
Hinata walked into the classroom, all eyes on her, especially glaring emerald ones. She took her seat next to her two best friends Kiba and Shino.
"Hey guys" Hinata had known them since she was little and knew everything there was to know about them, 'I'll get a smile from Shino and a massive hug from Kiba'. She smiled back at Shino and squinted her eyes as she prepared for the hug, after about 30 seconds of nothing she opened one eye to find Kiba and Shino staring at her. "Why no hug?" She asked with a confused look on her face, her mouth open slightly and cheeks red from embarrassment, Kiba blushed too and pulled her into a bone crushing hug.
"I'm sorry, I should have hugged you" he shouted alerting the whole class, Hinata's face went bright red as Kiba thrashed her from side to side, she was getting squished.
"I think you better let her go or she'll die" Kiba suddenly stopped and looked up to find a raven haired teenager with a scowl on his face.
"Haha Sasuke, how are you going?" Kiba laughed, letting go of Hinata, he and Sasuke had become friends via Hinata. Sasuke 'hn'ed and sat down in his seat behind Hinata.
"Alright class sit and settle down" Kakashi walked into the room and it fell silent. "Welcome back to school, read pages 1 through 10, go" and with that the half masked man sat down and began to read from his little book and giggle.
"Kakashi can I get a glass of water" A pinkette called from the back of the room, all she got was a nod and she exited the room. Hinata pulled out her book and began to read, she always did what Kakashi said, even though he didn't have much authority she still got As in all her classes, she was top student.
She felt a presence next to her and noticed Sasuke was leaning forward to whisper something to her.
"Did you think about my proposal?" he whispered with what she felt was a smirk, she blushed and nodded, "and?" just as she opened her mouth to answer something splashed her in the face and chest.
"Oops, sorry, I tripped" Sakura was standing there with a paper cup in hand, smirking. Hinata looked down and noticed she was dripping wet and her shirt was starting to become see-through, blushing again she grabbed the nearest fabric in site which unfortunately was Sasuke's black school jumper sleeve which he happened to be wearing. Sasuke's eyes grew big as Hinata began to rub her torso rapidly with his arm trying to dry herself. Someone burst into the room causing everyone to look up, it was Tenten and Temari who were in a higher class.
"I knew it was about time for Hinata to do something like this" Temari sighed as she handed Hinata her jumper.
"Come on, to the bath room to clean up" Tenten pulled Hinata up but she stumbled and Hinata landed on her elbows with her behind in the air at the front of the classroom, the whole room was silent until you heard the sound of people getting up.
"Excuse me" Sasuke had a blood red face and quickly ran out the door, in direction of the males bathroom, the rest of the males in the class followed, some with nose bleeds. Kakashi looked up to see Hinata on the ground, skirt blown up, uniform a mess with her but in the air and a cute dazed look. He quickly ran out of the room leaving all the girls looking at the door, they were in for another year of this. Sakura glared at Hinata as Tenten and Temari helped her up, she was going to find a way to stop that temptress in her tracks.
I have to say this was the most challenging thing I have ever written, I rewrote it numerous times and finally got something semi-decent, sorry it really fails but yeah I don't know how to end it, there will be another chapter up tomorrow, then the final one the day after, I don't know how to end it so review ideas? Sorry if it was a letdown and wasn't the right thing but I tried :S
