hi im jjshawn this is my first fanfic so just tell me what you think.

Surviever

As the wind blew the ashes of many warrior and civilian alike ,one person stood in the distanse , un fased by the blood that covered him from head to tow ,standing still as the darkness seemed to consume him.

A small green device attached to the little devils left ear flashed to life and spoke to the small monster.

The only words it spoke that i could understand was "Vegetasei was destroyed you are the only surviver know " those where the only words i understood before he she what ever it was pressed a small red button on the side of the device .As i started to lose coniuseus the beast

noticed walked foth with a speed that was taking forever "hehehe what do we have here? A surivor that is rare me and you we are not so different, well exept your about to die" the demon lafted in my face. The blood pored down my whole body as the sayinjin trowed me throught a mountian

i felt my body falling apart as thought he was ripping out my prince as he called him

self instentanlosly apperded before me.

he grabed me by the breast plate i was wereing.

He made a small green ch'i sphere and slowly and painfuly started to push it into my chest.

My cries of prue pain did noting but turn his

emotonless smirk into a smile of pure evil.

I in my last momentes relised this boy was

evil incarnet,but somewhere deep inside him

was in fact good.

what do you all think please tell me.