Author's Note:

Hey guy's this is the rewrite of the original Submission King.

This improved version will include:

Better grammar, longer lemons, more interesting lemons that will include sex toys, bondage, plain old love making, role play, the occasional omake, and more descriptions.

Submission King: Sora Style Rewrite

Proluge: Meeting the Nine Tails and Gaining the Eye

The day started off normally for Naruto Uzumaki. Scrounge for scraps and steal a piece of fruit from a stand and run before they can catch him. Unfortunately, today he got caught in the act. Most kids, would be roughed up a little, before being kicked out. The demon brat didn't have that luxury.

The stand owner, a rather fat man with bead eyes, scrunched up feature, and about 3 hairs on his scalp, was going to let him go, right before he saw his whisker marks, showing his status as the container of the nine tailed fox. This led to a mob chasing the five year old throughout the village, steadily growing in size, as more people saw just who was being chased, and joining in the fun.

Naruto's luck had run out, and he winded up in an abandoned alleyway at sunset. With no way out. Naruto closed his eyes and curled into a tight ball, and then came the pain. He didn't know how long the pain lasted. Maybe an hour, maybe two, but at the end, did it really matter?

When darkness finally took him, it wasn't the normal darkness. Normal darkness was when you fell asleep, or in this case, unconscious. It was a darkness that blocked out your senses, so you had no idea whether or not time passed. Darkness like this was different. It was dark, but he still felt a strange weightlessness, and the sensation of falling.

Naruto wondered whether they had killed him or not.

The world came back into focus as a sewer. An inhumanely dark laugh filled his ears.

"Come boy, we must speak." A voice that dripped with malice spoke.

Almost against his will, his feet moved, bringing him in front of a looming cage, held together by a piece of paper that had the kanji for Seal on it.

"Who are you, and where am I" Naruto managed to ask, feeling slightly reassured by the fact that whatever brought him here was restrained by a cage.

"I am the Great Nine Tailed Fox, Lord of Demons, and we are in you mindscape. I know what you are going to ask, and decided, in the interest of time, to explain everything to you. In the beginning there was one tailed beast, called the Ten Tails. The Ten Tails went on a huge rampage, killing everything its path, for a couple of years. This was before you humans had chakra, and the ten tails was more powerful than I, as you can guess, you humans were unable to hold your ground against the ten tails. Out of necessity a man, who is know called the Sage of Six Paths, the father of the ninja world, discovered chakra, and invented jutsu as a way to fight against the Ten Tails. He had a bloodline called the Rinnegan. Using it's powers, his ninjutsu, and the sealing arts, he sealed the Ten Tails into himself, making himself the first jinjuriki, or the power of human sacrifice.

He had 3 sons, who would later go onto found 3 clans. The oldest would found the Uchiha clan, the middle son, would go on to found the Senju clan, and the youngest son would go onto founding the Uzumaki clan."

Naruto let out a soft gasp hearing his last name, and was about to interrupt, before the Nine Tails froze him with killing intent and glare, before carrying on with the story.

"On his death bed, he separated the Ten Tails into 9 separate beings. I and my siblings are them.

He also name the Senju as his heir due to his view point on the world. The Uchiha believed that the only way to create peace is through power and forcing all others to cooperate. The Senju believed that others can learn to cooperate through love and understanding. The Uzumaki thought all three of them were fools, and peace was impossible. He retreated to an island, which he named Uzu, after himself, and started a clan.

The Senju and the Uchiha founded Konoha, but they aren't important right know. Anyway, all 3 clans had a bloodline that helped them control the tailed beasts, keeping us in line. The Senju had Wood Style, which could suppress our chakra, something the Shodaime Hokage could do. The Uchiha clan, had the Sharingan. Once evolved into it's final stage, it could control a Tailed beasts mind. A Uzumaki inherited talents for the sealing technique. They could seal the tailed beast within themselves to harness their powers.

Your clan had absolutely no morals, and were the definition of a shinobi. Cold, calculating, and ruthless. They made deals with criminal lords and bought female slaves, to use as concubines to keep there numbers in the thousands. It took Cloud, Stone, Water, and Leaf working together to bring them mother Kushina Uzumaki was brainwashed, and so were you for that matter, to serve the Leaf village. Your father, by the way, was the Yondamine Hokage, Minato Namikaze. A sick sort of humor isn't it?"

"What do you mean?" Naruto asked confused.

"The Uzumaki were infamous slavers. Your mother didn't wind up with the Yondamine by accident, you now. It was planned that she would be the Hokages bitch." the Nine tails told him, but before Naruto could reply he carried on.

"The last thing you should know is thee extent of your bloodline. While it may be true that the Uzumaki, Uchiha, and Senju are separate clan, who drifted further apart through marriage, due to sharing a common ancestor, you have similar powers. The Senju got a washed down version of the Uzumaki's powerful chakra. The Uzumaki had very dense chakra, so that so that any jutsu they would use would take less chakra, and be more potent. The Uchiha got a washed down version of the Senju's powerful body, and the Uzumaki got a washed out version of the Sharingan of the Uchiha. The eye only had the hypnosis ability that a fully mature sharingan had. This along with obedience seals, kept there slaves in line.

You have already activated it, why do you think, people that were neutral to you wind up liking you? My proposition is simple enough. I wish to upgrade you eyes. In exchange I want you to abandon the Leaf, eventually, start up a criminal empire, bring back Uzu, and your clan."

Naruto's brain all but shut down, and the Nine tails gave him some time to think while he mulled over the information. he couldn't believe his family was so... evil. If he accepted the foxes offer, would he be evil? Was peace actually possible?

All along, he had wanted a family, know, should he live up to there legacy?

"What upgrades are you talking about?" Naruto asked hesitantly.

"I have no intention of giving you the Sharingan, instead I'll be upgrading your hypnosis. If you accept, then your new bloodline will be ready in half an hour, and if you start practicing know, you will have it mastered by the time your 12. Act stupid, to make them think your not a threat. I'll even through in a bonus, of increasing your flexiblity, and dick size. Flexibilty should help in the battlefield."

Naruto nodded and said two words, "I accept."

His world exploded into pain, once again.