Chevi: Wow, you're first story EVER!
Alison: Yeah, I hope people like it…
Chevi: You're insecure.
Alison: I know…
Chevi: It's short. The ones in the future will be longer right?
Alison: Yeah, and they'll have Yaoi, which this one starts out with.
Chevi: Awesome.
(Note: This is the original version of Balance. I'm using it on a different profile because if i show my original profile - SouthernKittyGal - to my friends or anyone else, i don't want them knowing that a young teenager is typing things like this.)
I grin toothily, just like my Yami does, and sheath myself all the way inside Yugi, who screams out in pain and pleasure. Tears fill his amethyst eyes and roll down his cheeks. I lean down and lightly kiss them away, before kissing him a bit roughly.
I feel him relax around me and he nods. I start pounding into him mercilessly, and moan, "Gosh… You're so tight…" He is, and it's almost unbearable. He replies with moans and mewls of pleasure. God, the sounds he's making. I grip the sheets next to him, and groan out, "Close… S-So c-cl-close…"
There's a noise downstairs, but it's drowned out by Yugi's scream of pleasure as he releases. I groan, just as the door to the room opens loudly, banging against the wall, and scream, "YUGI!" And then plop down on the bed next to him, dazed and tired.
I hear a familiar voice ask, "What the… What are you doing, Hikari?!" I look up with big frightened eyes at Bakura. I've been caught.
Alison: Yeah. That's it.
Chevi: Anticipation…
Alison: Kinda.
Chevi: Next chapter? Now? PLEASE?
Alison: No. I want at least three reviews first.
Chevi: Blegh. You suck.
Alison: And you wonder why I'm insecure. Anyways, it doesn't have to be a good comment, bad ones are good too. Constructive Criticism is always helpful.
Chevi: *Staring at mail, waiting for Review*
Alison: You're weird.
Chevi: *Still staring…
