Hey ppl, Spirit here, dreaming up stories XP So anyways, this is my
first post, story, whatever you wanna call it. I know it's not too good,
but hey, that's why I want your reviews please, tell me what u think =D
*and yes, I know the title's a tad cliched ^ ^*
All characters belong to Disney except for that one mysterious person I still haven't given a name. suggestions?
(Just for background purposes, this is somewhere between the 2nd movie and the 3rd movie before they get married and after they've gotten rid of Jafar. and sooo the story goes on)
Enjoy! ^ ^
By the way, go visit bearmoon and toysrusgirl
Chapter 1: Street Rat
Aladdin, Jasmine, and the rest of the gang were strolling through Agrabah once again. As usual Aladdin and Jasmine where strolling together while Abu and Iago eyed the food and necklaces, and Genie and the carpet did whatever they pleased. It was a nice day that's for sure. I mean, what could go wrong? They'd beaten Jafar once and for all, the other enemies like Mozenrath weren't scheming to take over Agrabah for once, and Aladdin and Jasmine would be married soon. The many fragrances and voices traveled through the air,
"Fresh dates, fresh dates and pistachios!"
"Would you like to buy a necklace? Pretty necklace for a pretty lady."
"Fresh fish for sale!"
The chatter was interrupted by the shouts of the guards, "STREET RAT! I'll have your head for this one!" Aladdin spun around to face the voice out of habit, it wasn't long ago that he had to run from the guards and was known as street rat. That was before he ever met Jasmine and found the genie that changed his life. Out of the thickets of the crowd dashed a figure garbed in a nomad's clothes, revealing nothing but his eyes. As the boy glanced over his shoulders at the approaching guards, he muttered, "All this for a loaf of bread?" and ran straight into the genie's blue.ish.ness (er.lack of better words ^ ^''). "Woah there lil' fella, watch where you're goin-hey wait a minute, I'm not done talking to you yet!" as the boy raced off into the alleyways. Unluckily for him, the guards were ready and intercepted him before he made his escape, and even MORE unluckily, the guard he ran into was the captain of the guards, Raoul. "So we meet again street rat," grabbing the boy by his collar, "but then again, we meet everyday anyways." Raoul lifted him off the ground and threw the boy into the waiting hands of the other guards who pinned his arms behind his back and held him down. The mutterings of the crowd were heard everywhere. Aladdin caught a few phrases here and there.
"They actually caught him this time?"
"-never catches him and he comes every day-"
"-such a nice boy too."
"gives food to some of the other poor children."
Aladdin was somewhat shaken by this revelation. In his mind flashed his past during the times he had to run away from these same guards to survive. This kid. he thought. is. just like me. Aladdin glanced at Jasmine showing his concern for the scene occurring and she gave him an understanding affirmative nod before he donned future sultan tone of voice and interrupted the scene, "HOLD everything!!"
Raoul glanced at him, "Street ra---" he snarled before realizing princess Jasmine's presence, and in a nicer tone "I mean, uh, Aladdin," and bowed slightly and backed away to hide his disgust at following orders of a former street rat. Aladdin looked down into the boy's defiant eyes. He was reminded of himself even more as he stared. back when he was living on the streets. wild, reckless. but these eyes were like ebony pools with something shining underneath the dark surface. These eyes aren't like mine. they seem so much darker. lonelier? Hmm. The seem a tad more feminine than a boy's eyes too. but before he had more time to dwell on the thought, those two defiant eyes started to glow a eerie bright white, and coincidentally, the wind picked up, blowing someone's laundry into the guard's and Aladdin's faces. What the heck happened? Aladdin thought as he tore the cloth off his head, His eyes glowed? By the time the wind died down, the boy was gone and genie had turned into a huge blue tent anchored to the ground, protecting Jasmine and the rest of the gang as well as he could. With a poof, the genie turned back into himself and shrunk down to Aladdin's side, "Al, what happened?" he asked curiously. Then suddenly he changed into an excited narrative, acting out everything he said, "One moment I'm gliding with rugman here and next moment wwwwooooooooaaaaahhh, and poof into a tent, and wwwoooooooooohhhhh---"
"Will ya shut up already?" Iago interrupted, "We GET the POINT!"
Jasmine walked to Aladdin's side as he muttered, "His eyes were glowing. Jasmine, I have an idea. Carpet!" He jumped onto the magic carpet as she asked, "What are you going to do?"
"I'm gonna follow that kid," he shouted as he flew off.
"WHAT?!"
"Trust me!" and with that, Aladdin flew off towards the alleyways.
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And that my friends, is the end of chapter uno. ^^ What did u think, a tad to short? Give me your opinion and I'll do my best to make it better.
All characters belong to Disney except for that one mysterious person I still haven't given a name. suggestions?
(Just for background purposes, this is somewhere between the 2nd movie and the 3rd movie before they get married and after they've gotten rid of Jafar. and sooo the story goes on)
Enjoy! ^ ^
By the way, go visit bearmoon and toysrusgirl
Chapter 1: Street Rat
Aladdin, Jasmine, and the rest of the gang were strolling through Agrabah once again. As usual Aladdin and Jasmine where strolling together while Abu and Iago eyed the food and necklaces, and Genie and the carpet did whatever they pleased. It was a nice day that's for sure. I mean, what could go wrong? They'd beaten Jafar once and for all, the other enemies like Mozenrath weren't scheming to take over Agrabah for once, and Aladdin and Jasmine would be married soon. The many fragrances and voices traveled through the air,
"Fresh dates, fresh dates and pistachios!"
"Would you like to buy a necklace? Pretty necklace for a pretty lady."
"Fresh fish for sale!"
The chatter was interrupted by the shouts of the guards, "STREET RAT! I'll have your head for this one!" Aladdin spun around to face the voice out of habit, it wasn't long ago that he had to run from the guards and was known as street rat. That was before he ever met Jasmine and found the genie that changed his life. Out of the thickets of the crowd dashed a figure garbed in a nomad's clothes, revealing nothing but his eyes. As the boy glanced over his shoulders at the approaching guards, he muttered, "All this for a loaf of bread?" and ran straight into the genie's blue.ish.ness (er.lack of better words ^ ^''). "Woah there lil' fella, watch where you're goin-hey wait a minute, I'm not done talking to you yet!" as the boy raced off into the alleyways. Unluckily for him, the guards were ready and intercepted him before he made his escape, and even MORE unluckily, the guard he ran into was the captain of the guards, Raoul. "So we meet again street rat," grabbing the boy by his collar, "but then again, we meet everyday anyways." Raoul lifted him off the ground and threw the boy into the waiting hands of the other guards who pinned his arms behind his back and held him down. The mutterings of the crowd were heard everywhere. Aladdin caught a few phrases here and there.
"They actually caught him this time?"
"-never catches him and he comes every day-"
"-such a nice boy too."
"gives food to some of the other poor children."
Aladdin was somewhat shaken by this revelation. In his mind flashed his past during the times he had to run away from these same guards to survive. This kid. he thought. is. just like me. Aladdin glanced at Jasmine showing his concern for the scene occurring and she gave him an understanding affirmative nod before he donned future sultan tone of voice and interrupted the scene, "HOLD everything!!"
Raoul glanced at him, "Street ra---" he snarled before realizing princess Jasmine's presence, and in a nicer tone "I mean, uh, Aladdin," and bowed slightly and backed away to hide his disgust at following orders of a former street rat. Aladdin looked down into the boy's defiant eyes. He was reminded of himself even more as he stared. back when he was living on the streets. wild, reckless. but these eyes were like ebony pools with something shining underneath the dark surface. These eyes aren't like mine. they seem so much darker. lonelier? Hmm. The seem a tad more feminine than a boy's eyes too. but before he had more time to dwell on the thought, those two defiant eyes started to glow a eerie bright white, and coincidentally, the wind picked up, blowing someone's laundry into the guard's and Aladdin's faces. What the heck happened? Aladdin thought as he tore the cloth off his head, His eyes glowed? By the time the wind died down, the boy was gone and genie had turned into a huge blue tent anchored to the ground, protecting Jasmine and the rest of the gang as well as he could. With a poof, the genie turned back into himself and shrunk down to Aladdin's side, "Al, what happened?" he asked curiously. Then suddenly he changed into an excited narrative, acting out everything he said, "One moment I'm gliding with rugman here and next moment wwwwooooooooaaaaahhh, and poof into a tent, and wwwoooooooooohhhhh---"
"Will ya shut up already?" Iago interrupted, "We GET the POINT!"
Jasmine walked to Aladdin's side as he muttered, "His eyes were glowing. Jasmine, I have an idea. Carpet!" He jumped onto the magic carpet as she asked, "What are you going to do?"
"I'm gonna follow that kid," he shouted as he flew off.
"WHAT?!"
"Trust me!" and with that, Aladdin flew off towards the alleyways.
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And that my friends, is the end of chapter uno. ^^ What did u think, a tad to short? Give me your opinion and I'll do my best to make it better.
