Hey everyone! I've had the idea to write this fanfiction for a long time. I apologize for the cheesy description but it's a good story, there are many, many cliffhangers if you enjoy those. I will be updating (hopefully) daily. I have already written up to Chapter 33 so even if I don't have time to write I can still post. There will probably be somewhere around 40 chapters but I will let you know if that changes. It doesn't really pick up until a few chapters in so just hold on. Have I left out anything? I don't think so. Just enjoy! :)
Chapter 1
"Her name is Alyssa Kaandi, she was last seen a Friday night around 10pm. She was reported missing 1 hour ago by her boss," Garcia told the team about the 4th woman reported missing within the past 19 days. The first was reported missing and found 5 days later, starved and beaten to death, in an alley. The second and third women were reported missing and found the same way. The team had been called shortly after the third woman was found dead.
Reid browsed over Alyssa Kaandi's file. The picture on the front of the file showed a pretty woman of 38 years, with long, wavy, brown hair; the same as all the other women that had been killed. Reid found that she had been successful in business but had no family and her parents had died shortly before her disappearance.
"The unsub obviously has something against women with brown hair," Hotch was interrupted by Reid who added:
"Their hair was also long and wavy and they were all approximately the same short size."
Hotch glared at Reid, who's grin quickly disappeared from his face, then continued, "The unsub probably had a relationship with a woman but she either died, or left him, and now he feels that he needs to punish her but takes it out on woman that look like her."
"By the looks of how she was beaten, the unsub was much stronger than the woman. So probably a man," Morgan said.
"I think it's time to release the profile," Hotch suggested.
"We believe that the unsub is a white male in his late twenties or early thirties," Hotch announced.
"He probably had an issue with a girl that looks similar in appearance to all the victims, which is why he takes all his anger out on them," Morgan added.
"He was probably abused as a child or is a Schizophrenic," Blake said.
"There might be animal abuse and a lot of trouble making in his past," said Rossi.
Reid stood in silence and listened to the team giving out the rest of the profile and the scratching of pens on paper as the police officers took notes. As the team was giving out the profile, Garcia was in her office working on finding a list of people that fit the team's description. Alyssa Kaandi had been found dead less than an hour ago and after giving out the profile, Hotch will start sending them off to examine the crime scene.
"Reid, are you paying attention?" Reid was snapped out of his daydream by the sound of Morgan's voice. He hadn't even noticed that the meeting was over and the team was gathered around a table, listening to Hotch giving orders. The group fell silent as they waited for Reid to come join them.
"Right, sorry," Reid said.
"Alright, Reid and JJ, go check Alyssa's body, see if you can find anything that might give us any clues about who the unsub might be. Rossi and I will head over to the Kaandi house and talk to Alyssa's parents. Blake and Morgan, head over to the crime scene and see what you can find. If anyone notices anything unusual call me immediately," Hotch ordered.
I'm always looking for ways to improve my writing and I'd like you to have a little control over this story so I'm taking suggestions if you want to leave a review. Thanks for reading and have an amazing day!
