Chapter 1 - Lou's first lot of visits while working for Charley at The Last Chance Garage

Once upon a time there was a school girl at the age of 15 years old who goes to the garage to work to earn her keep in her family. Her name is Louise Aile Lisa Kaiba; she is the second eldest out of the four siblings that there was in her family. She has got two brothers with one sister staying with her parents. Her family names were: Seto – the eldest brother of the four siblings that were born, Mokuba – the second youngest, Eliza – the youngest, Emma – the mother and Troy – the father. Louise was in year ten at school, although she only talks to Mel who was her true friend with Becky who is also Lou's another trusted friend. Besides Lou has her two school mates, she has also her boss as a mate; her bosses name was Charlene "Charley" Davidson. Charley runs The Last Chance Garage where Lou works, when the afternoon from when Lou gets working with her mates gets really manic even though there were only the four people altogether helping each other out. One Saturday morning Lou was up, she had a wash even half way dressed when she was thinking about her future until she was fully dressed. When the rest of Lou's family got up whilst Lou was having her breakfast, Troy said, "Louise?" "Yes father?" Louise responded to Troy's call, "What are you doing?" Troy demanded as he walked into the kitchen to find a Lou sitting at the table eating a Sunday breakfast on a Saturday morning. "So you've found me." Lou said, "Yes I did. So you are working today?" Troy responded to Lou. "Yes. I'm finishing off my food before meeting my boss at The Last Chance Garage. That is why I am always hungry when I come home also being really dirty from having everything over me." Lou replied, "True. I know that you are earning your keep while you're staying at home." Troy admitted, "I know that father. Please do not forget that I am not less than 14 years old now." Lou reminded him. "Thanks for the reminder Louise." Troy said, "No worries father. Besides I have finished my breakfast but I'm soon going to be off once I am ready." Lou said, as she was getting ready to be going though she is going to meet up with Charley at The Last Chance Garage so that she can start work with her friends; Mel even Becky whilst having a laugh and a joke as they worked throughout that very day.

Whilst working, Lou was in Charley's office waiting for Charley to finish taking to her mates. "Lou, can you come here please?" Charley called over to her. "I'm on my way Charley." Lou replied as she moved to her three mates. "Do you girls want to start heading off home now?" Charley asked. "You girls go on without me because I am going to help Charley to clean up; so I'm staying behind. Oh could you both tell my family that I am going to be late home for me please?" Lou responded, "Yeah ok we do so you just don't worry about it Louise." Becky replied, "I love you both as friends!" Lou joyfully said. "No problems!" Mel said as the three had a group hug with Charley joining in the group hug. After the group hug Lou's two mates went, made sure that her family knows that Lou was going to be late home but they soon done that before they got home themselves to their parents so that they could rest up ready for the next day to see Lou's face or for Lou to see their faces when they tell each other what happened that night. As soon as Lou got home, she looked at the clock in the kitchen when she noticed Troy sitting at the table staying up and waiting for her. "Did you enjoy work Louise?" Troy demanded to know, "I did father. I just wanted to let you know that my boss is letting me have every Sunday off from this Sunday coming father." Lou replied to Troy, "Ok Lou, which is fine." Troy answered after she sat down in a chair that was in front of Troy. "How come you have stayed up late father?" Lou asked, "I've being waiting for you to come home from being at work all day dear." Troy replied as Lou seen her father's hand clenching on to the cat and nine tails whip ready to be used. "What's with the whip father?" Lou asked in a complete shock, "Lou, you need to tell me why you were late home?" Troy ordered, "I had to stay behind to help my boss to clean up the garage. That's the truth to the reason why I was late home. You can talk to my boss if you have to father?" Lou pleaded to get mercy from Troy. Troy grabbed the phone so he could phone The Last Chance Garage to ask Lou's boss, Charley, if Louise was telling him the complete truth. "Hello, this Is Charley. How may I help you?" Charley said, "Hello. This is Lou's boss. Correct?" Troy mentioned, "Yes, that's right. What has she done to upset you sir?" Charley asked, "Well, I want to clear something up. Has my daughter helped you clean up at your garage by any chance?" Troy asked as Emma walked into the kitchen to sit by Louise. "Yes. Louise did stay behind to help me with the cleaning." Charley answered, worried about Louise, "It's ok. I just wanted to check that Lou was telling the truth." Troy replied, "Ok. Thanks for calling Mr. Kaiba." Charley said, "Thanks for helping." Troy replied, as they put the phone down at either end of both lines. "Why didn't you phone to say instead of sending your mates round to say you were late coming home?" Troy shouted, "I left my phone here father and I realised that I hadn't got it by the time I got to work." Lou responded calmly. "Want to ask Louise anything Emma?" Troy asked, "No Troy. I haven't got anything to say at all." Emma said, "Emma, can you leave please?" Troy asked, "I'll be upstairs." Emma said as she moved to go upstairs. Louise was looking at Troy watching his every movement closely. 'Please don't use that upon me now father. I have done nothing wrong even I know that.' Louise thought. "Get yourself into the living room Louise." Troy demanded. Lou carefully got up off the chair that she was sitting on so that she could move into the living room like Troy told her to do. By the time Troy was in the living room, Lou had her back turned to him. When Lou was not looking Troy raised his hand and whipped Lou's back so that Lou gave away to tears with a lot of screaming in pain when Seto got to the bottom of the stairs on seen Louise gasping for air. "This is for being late Louise." Troy announced, "I'll let her get enough air after you letting her scream like that father." Seto said to Troy. "SETO! What are you doing up?" Troy replied, "I'm getting Louise to bed as simple. Come on little sis." Seto mentioned. "Alright Seto, I need help though." Lou responded as Seto moved to help Lou as he got her in his arms as Seto carried Lou up to her room as Lou asked Emma to call her mates so that they could get to Lou's house the very next morning when Troy would be out of the house. Sunday morning came when Charley was called by Louise herself, when Mel was at her side with Becky, her one sister, even her two brothers but her mother stayed with all seven of them until they could move Lou well away from the house before Troy knows that Louise was moving out of the house so that Troy couldn't find her. That night Lou sat as Seto was giving her comfort as they were watching a programme on the TV whilst eating their tea. 'I do hope that I can get out of here as fast as I can. At least Seto is here to give me the comfort that I needed, but I am getting to the point where my bones are starting to hurt right where my bum is. I have got to tell Seto so that he knows that I need to get out of bed.' Louise thought. "Lou, are you ok?" Seto asked, "Yes I need to get up Seto because I am starting to hurt where my tail bone is just above my bum is at a killing point." Louise mentioned as they moved out of the room. So they headed to The Last Chance Garage for Louise to stay there for the rest of her life. Louise had a lot of fun with Charley at The Last Chance Garage, which Charley gave Lou the easy job of all, which was doing the money even doing all the accounts that followed afterwards when there was nothing less to do when everything was done.

The next morning Louise was up early in Charley's office waiting every so quietly. "Good morning Louise!" Charley said happy, "Charley! Good morning, why are you so happy?" Louise answered, "I don't know Lou. I probably feel like it." Charley mentioned. Louise was happy because the six weeks of summer holidays had started, which meant more people to help with problems on cars, motorbikes, vans even lorries. Up until Louise was 16 on the 4th November 1999, Charley was out getting things – mainly presents for Lou with Becky even Mel whilst Lou was still sleeping in bed. When Charley, Mel with Becky got back, which Louise started to get up when Mel taken the breakfast to Louise so that she could eat. "Do you know what day it is today Louise?" Charley asked her as Charley reached Louise. "Saturday 4th November 1999. Why do you ask Charley?" Louise said, "I know you were born on this date. Happy birthday Louise." Charley replied. Louise was surprised when she got into the garage itself. "HAPPY BIRTHDAY LOUISE!" Everyone yelled as Louise burst into tears when she found out she had turn out to be 16 years old. "Oh my gosh! Someone has got to tell me how old I am?" Louise replied shocked, "Louise you are now 16 years old. You have two more years then you are going to be an adult." Seto told her. That evening, when the garage was cleaned up even after Lou's friends left with her family, Charley asked, "Lou. Let's go to bed because it is now getting late." "Ok Charley." Louise said very firm. As they both headed towards the ladders, they suddenly heard a knock at the garage door. "Charley, we better see who is at the door?" Louise said, "I agree to that Louise." Charley replied. "Louise, you better look as if you are finishing off working. I'll have a spanner in my hand." Charley added, "Yes ma'am." Louise said joyfully as Charley opened the door. "What do you want Greasepit?" Charley demanded. "Mr. Limburger sent me. He said isn't it about time you gave him what you owe him?" Greasepit replied. "Charley?" Louise said as Greasepit grabbed hold of her. "Are you going to pay?" Greasepit asked. Meanwhile when there was a rounder's match going on three mice from Mars crash landed their ship into the Scoreboard while the match was still going. The three mice left the match to head into town when the one motorbike started to make funny noises along the way. The leader slowed down because of knowing that there was something wrong with his motorbike so did his friends after going through the town to find The Last Chance Garage for two days and two nights on the run. "Whoa! Listen to that bro's!" The tanned mouse said as he roared his motorbike engine but they were not that from The Last Chance Garage. On that same night Greasepit was back at the garage again, which Charley sorted Greasepit out whilst Lou was sorting the money out. "When are you going to pay Mr. Limburger?" Greasepit asked, "I don't think you are getting the point because we are not giving Limburger anything greasy boy." Lou said. "Shout up little girl. I am talking to the person that is in front of me. So when are you going to pay Mr. Limburger?" Greasepit demanded. As Charley tried to fight the money case when the mice listened to the tanned mouse's motorbike for the last time and went to the garage for the motorbike to be checked out. By the time the lads got to the garage, which Lou was kicked out of the garage though they never seen Louise move so quickly back into the garage that they were after. "We need to get in there and help out!" The tanned mouse said more alerted. "That poor child is getting knocked out of the place." He added. "We agree!" His mates said. As soon as Louise was not able to get back up again as all three mice went to help out, which the white mouse took over in her place. "Why are you troubling these two ladies for?" The white mouse asked in the way of the garage. "It's nothing to do with you mousey paints!" Greasepit rebuked as Louise used the last of her strength as she rushed into the garage as Lou hit Greasepit so quickly when Greasepit turned round and punched Louise in her belly which made Louise fall to the ground. When Charley and the lads saw what happened which the white mouse got into a mess as Lou did soon after she was knocked down to the ground. By the time Louise was moved although the white mouse had slipped on some oil that was on the floor and went into the wall with his back on the floor although the white mouse's backside and his legs were against the wall as Greasepit carried on rebuking him till the other two crashed in through the window to help the white mouse out. Soon Louise was awake again as she introduced herself even Charley to the lads after the three biker mice had sorted Greasepit out. As two of the three showed Louise what happened on Mars.

After Louise met the three Biker Mice from Mars with Charley, Louise thought about letting her siblings visit her after she had graduated from school. Friday 20th May 2000 Lou had fully left school with Melissa even Rebecca, although they had to go back to do their exams then get their exam results on Tuesday 24th August 2000. As soon as the three mates went back to get their results on Tuesday 24th August 2000, they were really shocked to see they had 'A stars' for their exam results, which Lou could not wait to show the others at The Last Chance Garage. As they were putting their results away in their bags, which three lads whistled at the way Louise was dressed, when Louise looked up to find out that she was whistled at by the lads that made Louise embarrassed by them, which made Lou look at what she was wearing. "Why are you lads whistling at me for?" Louise demanded to know. "You look really nice in what you are wearing sweetheart. Besides you are wearing jeans." Vinnie said, "I'm actually wearing trousers Vinnie. I know that they are showing my thighs because they are tight around them. Also these are one of my new pair of trousers that I've got to wear." Louise said. "Get told creep." Mel said as Louise watched Mel kick Vinnie where it hurts most. "Ouch that hurts!"Vinnie said in a week voice as he collapsed to the floor when Lou said, "Mel, don't you realise these three lads are my only chance of living now?" "Oh sorry Lou; I didn't mean it. I really didn't mean it which I'm being honest with you here Louise." Mel said in a pleading voice. "I give up with ya completely Mel. Sorry that Mel has kicked you and called you a creep Vinnie." Louise said helping Vinnie back to his feet. "No worries about it sweetheart; as long as I'm ok then there is no need to panic Lou." Vinnie told her. "Make sure you don't do it again Melissa." Louise hissed. "Sorry for been a pain Lou." Becky said. "Do ya want a lift home?" Lou mentioned. "If it isn't a problem with you Louise?" Becky replied. "Lads, what do you think?" Louise asked as she looked at them. "No worries Lou. It's just explaining to Charley later on." Throttle said, "Throttle, I can sort the explaining out easy. I don't want us four getting into trouble with Charley." Louise responded, "I'm going on whatever motorbike that has not actually got a second person." Louise added as they headed to the motorbikes as Mel paired up with Modo, Becky paired up with Throttle as Louise paired up with Vinnie; as they took Becky with Mel to their own homes which the four friends went back to The Last Chance Garage where Charley was waiting for them to return. "Sorry we're late Charley because we had to drop my mates off at their own homes on the way back to the garage." Lou said. "Thanks for saying so Louise. At least I'm not going to be mad at the four of you." Charley mentioned. "Louise, can you come over here please?" Troy shouted. "Yes father! What is it?" Lou said as she got near the car. "I'm here because I would like to you to go to your younger sister's party. Also bring your mates with you please?" Troy said, "I'll give you a call when I have decided. When is the party father?" Louise said, "Lou, good question. The party is at home and the date of the party will be on Wednesday 1st September 2000." Troy said. "Ok then. I'll see if my friends would like to come. They are welcome for my younger sister's party wouldn't they father?" Louise said. "Yes Louise. They are very welcome to come." Troy said. "Thank you father." Louise replied, "Louise, you are most welcome. Anyway I guess you've got 'A Stars' for your GCSE results. Is it true is it not Louise?" Tory said. "Yes it is true father; I've got all nine 'A Stars'. Why did you want to know?" Lou responded. "Here is £90 in cash for you to spend on whatever you like. Your mother is going to be here later with another £90. I will tell her." Troy mentioned as Lou nodded. 'I'm getting £180 here, if my one nan knows that would be another £90. So altogether I would get £270.' Louise thought to herself as she watched her father in the car disappear out of her sight. "Lou, what's up?" Modo asked, "Modo, I've got £180 of my parents with another £90 off my one nan that will be £270." Louise replied. "Hey, that is really good Lou because you've earned it big time." Modo responded. "For me it wouldn't Modo. I mean it." Lou said as they walked into the garage. "What's with the face Louise?" Charley asked, "Lou has £270 off her three family members already Charley." Modo said. "It's true Charley. My mother will be here when my father tells her my exam results. All four of you can have a look at my results." Lou responded. Lou's mates were shocked when they had seen Lou's exam results. "Louise, this is brilliant!" Charley said with joy. "Come here and give me a hug sweetheart!" Vinnie said as Louise moved towards Vinnie to give him a hug when their mates give her a hug before Vinnie did. Vinnie held Louise by putting his arms around her so Louise wouldn't move away from him. "Louise, are you in here by any chance?" Emma shouted from the door of The Last Chance Garage. "Yes I am mother!" Louise called back, "I have heard the good news about your exam results which is really surprising. Lou, I heard that you've had £90 off your father." Emma said as she got to Louise. "Yes mother that I've got £90 off father. This must be your mom, am I right?" Louise replied in agreement. "Yes, I am Emma's mother. I am also your grandmother Louise. You may call me Nanny Jane. Your other grandparent is outside. Here is £180 which means its £90 each off me and your mother." Jane said, "I want to thank you both for the money. Can you thank father for me mother?" Louise responded, "I will do Louise." Emma said. As Louise went outside to see her grandfather as well Louise said, "I wonder what your name is granddad?" "Ah! Louise, my favourite granddaughter of mine! I am your granddad as you have guessed. Call me Granddad Phil." Phil said. "That name reminds me of Phil Collins." Louise said. "Oh does it really Louise?" Phil asked, "I am sure and I am positive about it too grandfather!" Lou said as Phil saw Throttle. "Lou, who is this nice young man?" Phil asked. "This is Throttle Granddad Phil. Throttle this is my grandfather, Phil." Louise said. "Nice to meet you sir." They both said together. "Oh! Lou before you go, here is another £90 to add to your pocket money that you have already got." Phil said, "I want to thank you for the money Granddad Phil." Louise said. "It is my pleasure Louise." Phil said. "Want to go shopping with Charley?" Throttle asked, "Throttle, it's up to Charley if she wants to come or not." Louise replied, "I would love to come shopping with you Louise!" Charley said as Throttle put Lou's feet into a pair of roller skates whilst she was talking to the people that were around her at the time. "What the hell Throttle! What did you put on my feet?" Lou said, "I've put roller skates on your feet that's all." Throttle said. "Have a skate in them sweetheart." Vinnie said as he walked up with Modo. "Ok! I will try these roller skates out for sure and thanks for saying Vinnie." Louise responded. As Throttle gave a gentle push to get Louise moved her feet as Emma put the radio on so that the music was turned up as Modo got a pair of roller skates on to join in with Louise at the same time. As everyone watched Louise dance with Modo without realizing that Louise would sing along with the songs while Emma recorded what had happened that day; as Lou's CD finished when Louise gave Modo a massive hug to thank him for dancing with her when Troy returned at that point. Modo held Louise soon as she had turned to face her father when Troy said, "Are you coming home Emma?" "Yes. I have a video for you to watch when we get home darling." Emma replied. "How is the rest of the family Troy?" Jane asked, "Jane, they are very well thank you." Troy answered. "Troy, Lou has thanked you for her pocket money. She has gone with her boss even with her mates shopping because the garage is all locked up." Emma mentioned. "Ok Emma. Thanks for letting me know sweetheart. At least Lou is going to be ok." Troy responded. "I agree with what you've said darling." Emma responded. As Lou put her hands into her best trouser pockets as she carefully staked down the street as she gave Charley food money as Charley took the lads with her. Louise told Charley that all five of them will meet back at The Last Chance Garage between 4pm – 8pm that very day. 'What's today's date now? Oh yeah it's Wednesday 25th August. No it's not it's Tuesday 24th August 2000. I could look for a for some new clothing like a new top, new pair of trousers or a new dress.' Louise thought as she looked into a shop window looking at a dress that glittered in the sun. So Louise went into the shop to ask for the price of the dress that was in the window. "Excuse me; are you the owner of this place?" Louise asked, "I am indeed young lady. The name is Molly Black. How may I help you dear?" Molly said, "I would like to know the price of that sparkly dress in the window is please?" Lou asked. "The sparkly dress is £90. For you it is £30 my dear." Molly said. "Hello there. I'm Sirius Black. You must be Louise Aile Lisa Kaiba?" Sirius said standing next to Louise. "I am sir. You've guessed really well." Lou responded paying for the dress. "I would leave the shop in your hands Molly if that is ok with you?" Sirius said, "I am fine with running the shop on my own little brother." Molly responded. "Ok Molly. I'll see you later because I'll be with Louise for a while." Sirius said. "Ok little brother. Be really good please?" Molly said. "I'll keep an eye on him for ya Molly." Louise said. "Thank you Louise." Molly said as Louise walked out of the shop with Sirius. As Louise went around shops with Sirius getting things that Lou need to get as they both started to go back down the same street that Louise had got her sparkly dress from. "It was nice talking to you Sirius." Louise said. "It's the same with me. Where are you going to now Louise?" Sirius said, "I'm going back to The Last Chance Garage now. Sirius, it's meeting you and Molly is waiting for you. Although I better get staking now. Bye Sirius." Louise said as Sirius said good bye to Louise as she went back to The Last Chance Garage for 8pm. "Hello everyone! I'm back in the garage now! I'll be upstairs if you need me" Louise shouted. "Hello Louise and ok because we are fine with it!" Charley with the lads shouted from Charley's office as Louise skated over to the bedroom that was above the garage to put her things away. As Modo went to find Louise as she sat down on the bed crying when Modo had found her. "Lou, are you ok mate? How come you're crying?" Modo asked, "I-I-I don't know Modo." Lou sobbed as her tears continued to go down her face when Modo had decided to sit down by her and gave her a hug as he promised to take Louise out for a meal on their very own without anyone interrupting them both from talking to each other so that it would give Lou the chance to tell someone how she feels and why she was really upset even been in tears.

Wednesday 25th August 2000 as Louise was working away as usual when at the job she was doing as Modo went up to her to find out at what she was doing. "Hey Lou, what are you up mate?" Modo asked. "Hey Modo, I am filling the motors up as usual. Charley needs to see me when I am finished with this customer. I don't know what it is about though." Lou said as the tank was filled up as Lou got Modo to ask Charley for the price list so Lou could get the correct price although the vehicles were in for M.O.T's which required by Louise and Charley as Louise got thinking about her old school mates as they walked past as Lou was heading into the garage. "LOUISE!" Melisa and Becky yelled as Louise turned to see them both waving at her. "HEY GIRLFRIENDS! Oh my life I so can't believe it!" Lou said as she got to them. "How are ya Louise?" Mel said. "I am doing great. I need to see Charley so can you both help out for a bit. I'll explain to Charley why you both are here." Louise said. "Ok and what a good idea Louise." The girls said as the three of them went to do different things at the time. While Lou and Charley got talking when everyone from in the garage heard Charley started shouting at Louise when they all saw Louise rushing out with her roller stakes on as she told everyone else not to follow her as Charley sent Modo and Mel after Louise so that nothing had happened to Lou at the time. When Lou got to the seaside place that she knew as Lou heard motorbike sound as she turned to see Modo with Mel following Louise to her special place. "What are you both doing here?" Louise asked sobbingly, "Lou, me and everyone else heard Charley shouting at you which is unfair." Modo said, "Modo, it is all my fault at the moment because when my father finds out about Charley shouting at me then I will be so done for." Lou sobbed as she just cried her heart out as Modo and Mel put their arms around Louise to comfort her as Vinnie, Throttle even Becky got there with Charley. "Louise, I am so sorry for shouting at you like I did. I had to send Modo and Mel after you so that nothing would happen to ya on the way over here. Please forgive me for what I have done Louise?" Charley said. "I will forgive but just don't do it again Charley." Lou sobbed as they both hugged each other as they wouldn't shout at each other or at their mates ever again. That evening Louise went out with Modo to a restaurant as they choose what they had to eat even what they had to drink all at the same time so that they wouldn't moan at who paid for the meal as they both had settled it before they both had left The Last Chance Garage when Louise had offered up to pay for the meal out which was really kind of Louise to do it for them both. When the waiter got Modo's even Lou's dinner to them as they said thanks to him when Lou asked Modo, "So what do you want to talk about Modo?" "Why you were upset yesterday Lou." Modo replied. "Oh that. Don't say you've seen me in tears?" Lou said, "I did yeah." Modo said. "The reason why I was in tears because I hadn't long received a phone call from my father. My Nanny Jane has not long lost her husband which is my grandfather. It is my mother's dad." Lou said, "Lou, I am sorry to hear that." Modo said, "I know Modo because my father told me that my mother was in tears when he got onto the phone to me to say that my grandfather had died." Lou said. As Modo and Louise were eating as Lou's mobile phone vibrating in her trousers as Louise got her phone out to see who was calling her to find out that Emma was calling her mobile phone. "Hello mother, what is the matter?" Lou asked, "Lou, sorry to disturb your night out but can you hurry and come home please?" Emma asked. "What's that noise in the background? Mother what on earth is happening at home?" Lou asked. "It's your father having one of his fits again." Emma said. "Mother, tell father to take his fit out on me. I'll be there as soon as I have finished my meal." Lou said in a panic. "Ok Louise. I'll let him know and sorry for troubling you sweetheart." Emma said. "It's not a problem mother. I would do anything for ya at any time of day." Louise said as they both hung up. "What is the matter now Lou?" Modo asked. "My mother is having trouble at home. We need to hurry up with what we are eating. Sorry that I am making us rush what we are having Modo." Louise said. "It's ok Louise. I'll take you home to sort the problem out." Modo said, "Modo, thank you ever so much mate; I really, really do appreciate it." Louise said. "It is my pleasure Louise because you're so beautiful to me." Modo said. "That is really cute for you to say that Modo." Louise said as they had finished as Lou called for the waiter as Lou gave the money to the waiter so that Lou could get going with Modo. As Modo got Louise back to where she had used to live as Troy waited outside the house for her although Louise and Modo had to go back to The Last Chance Garage for Louise to get changed into something that was more comfortable for Louise to wear on the way to her where Louise used to live. As Louise got off the back of Modo's motorbike after Modo had turned his motorbike off as Lou walked over to Troy as he said, "Louise, you are so in for it this time young lady." 'Oh what a big mistake I've made. I am really stupid.' Louise thought as she moved out of the way as Lou looked worried at Modo. Modo never saw Louise looked as worried like she was in his life as Troy shouted at Louise saying, "Louise, get here you silly little rat of a girl!" "THAT IS TOTALLY IT FATHER! YOU'VE JUST ASKED FOR ME TO GO MOUSE NOW!" Louise yelled as she went into her mouse form when Modo couldn't believe his eyes when their three friends got there to find out that Louise was a mouse. "I can't believe it." Charley said. "What the fact that Louise is a mouse and she is one of us?" Throttle asked. "Yes Throttle, it is true. We have found out what Lou truly is. Emma had told me before although I had to take Louise into The Last Chance Garage so that she was well away from Troy but I had forgotten to tell you lads. I'm sorry that I never mentioned it till now. I just feel like a complete fool by not telling you lads, I am truly sorry about it. I really am sorry lads." Charley said as Louise heard what was said by Charley. "No you're not a fool Charley. The lads need to know because the four of ya now know that I am in a very bad state because of being human and mouse. I need to get to the bottom of it with or without help." Louise said as she jumped out of the way after Charley told Louise to watch out because of Troy trying to hurt Louise with the cat and nine tails whip that Troy had in his hand although Lou took her rucksack with her and Modo as she could change her footwear from the trainers that she had on her feet into her roller skates so that Louise could move a bit more quicker.

As Troy kept on trying to hurt Louise as much as he could because he never kept up with Lou's speed at the time as Louise knocked the cat and nine tails out of Troy's hand with her tail. As Lou battled against Troy as Louise didn't know that Troy was going to shot her mates as Lou put a force field around her friends as Troy shot Louise instead without her noticing although Charley told Louise to watch out even to be careful when Lou nodded in agreement with Charley's advice that Louise was given as she just thought on what move she needed to make. Without looking in Troy's hand Louise carefully moved towards Troy although Louise was a little bit more scared of what may happen to her next by Troy. Troy didn't think on what to do next at all because he had a plan although he stayed with the plan by either killing Louise or her friends. Lou was the best flexible person in the Kaiba family as she showed off in front of her friends. "Sorry I am showing off in front of ya. At least the four of ya are entertained for the time been. Oh and don't worry about me if I get hurt." Lou said as she got in front of the force field. "Lou, it's fine because we never knew you were that flexible in our lives. What do you lads think?" Charley said, "Charley, we actually agree." Modo said, "I love having friends like you four to keep me positive." Lou said as her friends agreed. As Lou wasn't looking as Vinnie watched what Troy was doing as Lou knew Vinnie being alert for Lou's safety. "Lou, be careful!" Vinnie said as Troy fired his gun although Louise was fast enough to move so she could miss the attack. As Lou moved, she got caught in her right arm by the bullet from the gun that Troy fired in the first place. Lou managed to get up as she looked at her right arm when Louise realised that she wouldn't last as she got Modo, Throttle even Vinnie to help her out although Troy had three other people behind him so Troy had help. Louise was more focused on Troy as the lads focused on the other three people that were with Troy at the time. Although Lou got thinking as she asked Charley to look in her rucksack to see if Lou had her roller skates in there when Charley told Louise that Lou's roller skates were in Lou's rucksack at the time as Lou asked Throttle to get her roller skates and to help Louise put them on her feet. As Throttle agreed to help Louise put her roller skates onto her feet as she done the lads a favour in return by looking after them for when they were in trouble or even worse by losing Charley in death. As Louise thought about what she was going to do as Charley said nothing to Louise for a while as she looked around to see what she could use to help her. 'What on earth am I going to do now and what on earth am I going to be use to help me?' Louise thought to herself. As Lou saw something that she used to play on from when she was a little girl she thought that she might get herself with Troy over to where she was planning. Modo read Lou easy as he told Throttle and Vinnie what Louise was going to do although the lads gave Louise enough space but Louise moved before the lads did. As Lou moved although had gathered up a lot of speed with her roller skates she raced even knocked Troy to the ground as she managed to hurt Troy in the face although Lou was knocked off even thrown a good mile away from Troy. "LADS I NEED HELP! SO START GETTING THESE HORRID FOOLS OFF ME!" Lou shouted as the lads helped Louise out as much as they could. As the lads got the three men off Louise as Modo helped Louise to her when Lou said to the lads, "Thanks lads for helping me, so all I want to do now is to sort my father out on my own." Lou said. "Ok sweetheart but don't blame us when we pull you way. I hope you understand me?" Vinnie said, "I do understand ya Vincent. Don't you worry about it at all mate because I would have stopped by then." Lou said as the lads let Lou do what she needed to do as Troy kept putting into Louise as Lou kept screaming in pain as the lads stayed by Charley as Lou's mates watched in horror while Louise was sorting Troy out because all Louise did was punched Troy's lights out of him so that Troy would not be able to get up again. Soon Louise had sorted Troy out she let Emma know that Troy needed to be left alone for a bit before Troy could do anything to Louise but she got herself back to The Last Chance Garage with her four mates.

As the fight was over between Louise with Troy as Charley kept told Louise that she should be resting as Lou told Charley that she was going to be fine once Lou got moving about whilst Louise could work as Charley gave with Louise as Vinnie said, "Lou, Charley is right ya know. We are starting to worry about you now Louise and it's going to be not fair on us."

"LADS I NEED HELP OVER HERE! SO START GETTING THESE HORRID FOOLS OFF ME PLEASE?" Lou shouted as the lads helped Louise out as much as they could. As the lads got the three men off Louise as Modo helped Louise to her when Lou said to the lads, "Thanks lads for helping me, so all I want to do now is to sort my father out on my own." Lou said. "Ok sweetheart but don't blame us when we pull you way. I hope you understand me?" Vinnie said, "I do understand ya Vincent. Don't you worry about it at all mate because I would have stopped by then." Lou said as the lads let Lou do what she needed to do as Troy kept putting into Louise as Lou kept screaming in pain as the lads stayed by Charley as Lou's mates watched in horror while Louise was sorting Troy out because all Louise did was punched Troy's lights out of him so that Troy would not be able to get up again. Soon Louise had sorted Troy out she let Emma know that Troy needed to be left alone for a bit before Troy could do anything to Louise but she got herself back to The Last Chance Garage with her four mates.

As the fight was over between Louise with Troy as Charley kept told Louise that she should be resting as Lou told Charley that she was going to be fine once Lou got moving about whilst Louise could work as Charley gave with Louise as Vinnie said, "Lou, Charley is right ya know. We are starting to worry about you now Louise and it's going to be not fair on us." "Look everyone. If I say that I am fit for working then I am going to stay with what I have said. So there is no need to worry about me at all because I want to worry about myself with the wounds that I've got although I know that you are looking out for me." Louise said as her mates realised that Louise was looking sorry for herself at that moment in time as Vinnie comforted Louise as much as he could. As Modo got thinking about Louise that much he didn't know what he should do until Louise asked, "Modo, what is the matter with ya?" "I don't know Louise. I've just been thinking about you more than anything babes." Modo said as he saw Lou's face react to what Modo said. 'Did I hear Modo correctly? Did Modo just call me babes? What on earth am I going to say to him now? I do need say something though because Modo's looking at me funny.' Louise thought as she sighed on thinking what on to say. "Lou, are you ok?" Modo asked as he stroked Lou's face. "Yeah, I am perfectly fine. Why makes you think I'm not Modo?" Louise said. "You took a while to respond back to me that's all." Modo said. "Oh. I'm sorry about that Modo." Louise sighed. "Don't worry about it Louise. Want to have a night out with me again?" Modo said. "I would love that Modo." Lou said. "Ok then, I'll talk to Charley and see what I'm doing later on today. Don't move from there will ya please?" Modo said,

As the fight was over between Louise with Troy as Charley kept told Louise that she should be resting as Lou told Charley that she was going to be fine once Lou got moving about whilst Louise could work as Charley gave with Louise as Vinnie said, "Lou, Charley is right ya know. We are starting to worry about you now Louise and it's going to be not fair on us." "Look everyone. If I say that I am fit for working then I am going to stay with what I have said. So there is no need to worry about me at all because I want to worry about myself with the wounds that I've got although I know that you are looking out for me." Louise said as her mates realised that Louise was looking sorry for herself at that moment in time as Vinnie comforted Louise as much as he could. As Modo got thinking about Louise that much he didn't know what he should do until Louise asked, "Modo, what is the matter with ya?" "I don't know Louise. I've just been thinking about you more than anything babes." Modo said as he saw Lou's face react to what Modo said. 'Did I hear Modo correctly? Did Modo just call me babes? What on earth am I going to say to him now? I do need say something though because Modo's looking at me funny.' Louise thought as she sighed on thinking what on to say. "Lou, are you ok?" Modo asked as he stroked Lou's face. "Yeah, I am perfectly fine. Why makes you think I'm not Modo?" Louise said. "You took a while to respond back to me that's all." Modo said. "Oh. I'm sorry about that Modo." Louise sighed. "Don't worry about it Louise. Want to have a night out with me again?" Modo said. "I would love that Modo." Lou said. "Ok then, I'll talk to Charley and see what I'm doing later on today. Don't move from there will ya please?" Modo said, "I will not move from this spot Modo because I'll wait right here for ya to come back." Lou said as Modo nodded. As Modo walked over to Charley while leaving Louise by the tools when Troy stormed in demanding to know where Louise was at that time as Louise thought, 'I'm in for it this time and there is no way I am going to get out of it now. Oh no father is looking over here. Oh Modo do something please?' "Louise, outside right now." Troy demanded as he clapped his eyes onto Louise. "I'm not going to move father because you are always been a bully to me although I never get any freedom whenever you are around." Lou responded calmly. "Do as you are being told Louise." Troy shouted, "I just want to say that I am doing nothing that you say when you're shouting father." Louise said. "Louise, don't bother because you know what's right because you're doing it at this very moment mate." Charley said supporting Louise as Troy went over to Louise even grabbing Louise as screamed although Lou's body was still in recovery from what had happened. As Troy was heading towards the car as the lads got in the way as Charley said, "Mr. Kaiba, please let Louise go?" "No way am I going to let Louise go." Troy said as Charley moved out of the way while the lads moved to lean against the car. "FATHER, YOU'RE HURTING ME SO BADLY! JUST LET GO OF ME WILL YA!" Lou yelled as Troy thrown Louise on the floor as Charley moved quickly to help Louise. "Just leave us all alone Mr. Kaiba." Charley said. "Louise, I don't know you anymore." Troy said. "Father, why can't you admit that I am not worth anything to you?" Lou asked. "I do admit it Louise." Troy said. "You are that horrid to me father. Really, really horrid and you know what father?" Lou said. "What's that Louise?" Troy asked, "I really do hate you for what you have done to me and you can look at what you've done to me right now." Lou said sobbingly. "Oh Lou, I am so sorry." Troy gasped. "YOU'RE NOT SORRY FATHER!" Louise shouted whilst crying as Charley gave Lou a big hug to help Lou calm down. Charley sent Troy back home as Modo got everyone else inside The Last Chance Garage as Lou's tear's kept falling down her face when the lads tried their hardest to cheer Louise up.

As Troy kept on trying to hurt Louise as much as he could because he never kept up with Lou's speed at the time as Louise knocked the cat and nine tails out of Troy's hand with her tail. As Lou battled against Troy as Louise didn't know that Troy was going to shot her mates as Lou put a force field around her friends as Troy shot Louise instead without her noticing although Charley told Louise to watch out even to be careful when Lou nodded in agreement with Charley's advice that Louise was given as she just thought on what move she needed to make. Without looking in Troy's hand Louise carefully moved towards Troy although Louise was a little bit more scared of what may happen to her next by Troy. Troy didn't think on what to do next at all because he had a plan although he stayed with the plan by either killing Louise or her friends. Lou was the best flexible person in the Kaiba family as she showed off in front of her friends. "Sorry I am showing off in front of ya. At least the four of ya are entertained for the time been. Oh and don't worry about me if I get hurt." Lou said as she got in front of the force field. "Lou, it's fine because we never knew you were that flexible in our lives. What do you lads think?" Charley said, "Charley, we actually agree." Modo said, "I love having friends like you four to keep me positive." Lou said as her friends agreed. As Lou wasn't looking as Vinnie watched what Troy was doing as Lou knew Vinnie being alert for Lou's safety. "Lou, be careful!" Vinnie said as Troy fired his gun although Louise was fast enough to move so she could miss the attack. As Lou moved, she got caught in her right arm by the bullet from the gun that Troy fired in the first place. Lou managed to get up as she looked at her right arm when Louise realised that she wouldn't last as she got Modo, Throttle even Vinnie to help her out although Troy had three other people behind him so Troy had help. Louise was more focused on Troy as the lads focused on the other three people that were with Troy at the time. Although Lou got thinking as she asked Charley to look in her rucksack to see if Lou had her roller skates in there when Charley told Louise that Lou's roller skates were in Lou's rucksack at the time as Lou asked Throttle to get her roller skates and to help Louise put them on her feet. As Throttle agreed to help Louise put her roller skates onto her feet as she done the lads a favour in return by looking after them for when they were in trouble or even worse by losing Charley in death. As Louise thought about what she was going to do as Charley said nothing to Louise for a while as she looked around to see what she could use to help her. 'What on earth am I going to do now and what on earth am I going to be use to help me?' Louise thought to herself. As Lou saw something that she used to play on from when she was a little girl she thought that she might get herself with Troy over to where she was planning. Modo read Lou easy as he told Throttle and Vinnie what Louise was going to do although the lads gave Louise enough space but Louise moved before the lads did. As Lou moved although had gathered up a lot of speed with her roller skates she raced even knocked Troy to the ground as she managed to hurt Troy in the face although Lou was knocked off even thrown a good mile away from Troy. "LADS I NEED HELP OVER HERE! SO START GETTING THESE HORRID FOOLS OFF ME PLEASE?" Lou shouted as the lads helped Louise out as much as they could. As the lads got the three men straight off Louise as Modo helped Louise to her feet when Lou said to the lads, "Thanks lads for helping me, so all I want to do now is to sort my father out on my own." Lou said. "Ok sweetheart but don't blame us when we pull you way. I hope you understand me?" Vinnie said, "I do understand ya Vincent. Don't you worry about it at all mate because I would have stopped by then." Lou said as the lads let Lou do what she needed to do as Troy kept putting into Louise as Lou kept screaming in pain as the lads stayed by Charley as Lou's mates watched in horror while Louise was sorting Troy out because all Louise did was punched Troy's lights out of him so that Troy would not be able to get up again. Soon Louise had sorted Troy out she let Emma know that Troy needed to be left alone for a bit before Troy could do anything to Louise but she got herself back to The Last Chance Garage with her four mates.

Thursday 26th August 2000 as the fight was over from the day before that was between Louise with Troy as Charley kept told Louise that she should be resting as Lou told Charley that she was going to be fine once Lou got moving about whilst Louise could work as Charley gave with Louise as Vinnie said, "Lou, Charley is right ya know. We are starting to worry about you now Louise and it's going to be not fair on us." "Look everyone. If I say that I am fit for working then I am going to stay with what I have said. So there is no need to worry about me at all because I want to worry about myself with the wounds that I've got although I know that you are looking out for me." Louise said as her mates realised that Louise was looking sorry for herself at that moment in time as Vinnie comforted Louise as much as he could. As Modo got thinking about Louise that much he didn't know what he should do until Louise asked, "Modo, what is the matter with ya?" "I don't know Louise. I've just been thinking about you more than anything babes." Modo said as he saw Lou's face react to what Modo said. 'Did I hear Modo correctly? Did Modo just call me babes? What on earth am I going to say to him now? I do need say something though because Modo's looking at me funny.' Louise thought as she sighed on thinking what on to say. "Lou, are you ok?" Modo asked as he stroked Lou's face. "Yeah, I am perfectly fine. Why makes you think I'm not Modo?" Louise said. "You took a while to respond back to me that's all." Modo said. "Oh. I'm sorry about that Modo." Louise sighed. "Don't worry about it Louise. Want to have a night out with me again?" Modo said. "I would love that Modo." Lou said. "Ok then, I'll talk to Charley and see what I'm doing later on today. Don't move from there will ya please?" Modo said, "I will not move from this spot Modo because I'll wait right here for ya to come back." Lou said as Modo nodded. As Modo walked over to Charley while leaving Louise by the tools when Troy stormed in demanding to know where Louise was at that time as Louise thought, 'I'm in for it this time and there is no way I am going to get out of it now. Oh no father is looking over here. Oh Modo do something please?' "Louise, outside right now." Troy demanded as he clapped his eyes onto Louise. "I'm not going to move father because you are always been a bully to me although I never get any freedom whenever you are around." Lou responded calmly. "Do as you are being told Louise." Troy shouted, "I just want to say that I am doing nothing that you say when you're shouting father." Louise said. "Louise, don't bother because you know what's right because you're doing it at this very moment mate." Charley said supporting Louise as Troy went over to Louise even grabbing Louise as screamed although Lou's body was still in recovery from what had happened. As Troy was heading towards the car as the lads got in the way as Charley said, "Mr. Kaiba, please let Louise go?" "No way am I going to let Louise go." Troy said as Charley moved out of the way while the lads moved to lean against the car. "FATHER, YOU'RE HURTING ME SO BADLY! JUST LET GO OF ME WILL YA!" Lou yelled as Troy thrown Louise on the floor as Charley moved quickly to help Louise. "Just leave us all alone Mr. Kaiba." Charley said. "Louise, I don't know you anymore." Troy said. "Father, why can't you admit that I am not worth anything to you?" Lou asked. "I do admit it Louise." Troy said. "You are that horrid to me father. Really, really horrid and you know what father?" Lou said. "What's that Louise?" Troy asked, "I really do hate you for what you have done to me and you can look at what you've done to me right now." Lou said sobbingly. "Oh Lou, I am so sorry. I am truly sorry for I did to ya. Just forgive me please Louise?" Troy gasped. "YOU'RE NOT SORRY FATHER!" Louise shouted whilst crying as Charley gave Lou a big hug to help Lou calm down. Charley sent Troy back home as Modo got everyone else inside The Last Chance Garage as Lou's tear's kept falling down her face when the lads tried their hardest to cheer Louise up as she wasn't buying any of it. As Modo thought about what he asked Louise as Modo went into Charley's office to book a restaurant for two people and not five. As Louise got thinking that night whilst she was talking to Modo at the restaurant when Lou asked, "Modo what would you say if I took you with our mates out of an evening meal?" "I don't know because it would be a great honour for you to do that Louise." Modo said. "Hmm." Lou said as she saw Troy walking into the same restaurant with Emma. "Lou, what is it?" Modo asked, "Modo, I've just saw my father walking in here with my mother. Why would they come here?" Louise said, "I don't know babes." Modo said. "There is no way am I going to find out." Louise said. Then Modo went serious as he looked at his robotic arm as it went haywire when Lou looked at Modo's face when Lou asked, "Modo, what is with the serious face for?" "I don't know why my robotic arm is going haywire for. Anyway, I have a question to ask." Modo said. "Fire way and see if I can answer it for ya." Lou said with a cheeky smile on her face. "Lou, do you want to marry me?" Modo asked. Lou thought about it when she realized what Modo had said she was really shocked. "Modo, I don't know what to say at the moment. If I say yeah then we would have to keep it as a secret from my father and my mother although I want my brothers with my sister to know also I want our mates to know but if I say no then who knows what will happen." Lou said. "Why is it going to course a problem for ya with your parents being here babes?" Modo asked, "I think so baby. Let's see how it's going to pan out first because I think my father is going to notice us soon." Lou said. "Lou babes, I am going to agree with ya." Modo said as they continue talking to each other as the waiter went over to Louise as the waiter asked, "Excuse me sir and madam. I am sorry to interrupt you both from your conversation but may I ask if one of you sing please?" "It's ok because I do sing. Why does the lads that play the music need a singer?" Lou replied. "Yes they do madam. Do you mind singing for everyone in the building please?" The waiter said. "I don't mind Louise." Modo said. "I don't mind either because I'm doing for everyone else." Louise said as she went over to the musicians. "Hello madam." The musicians said. "Hello. I heard that you needed help?" Lou said. "We do because we haven't got a singer." The drummer said. "This is why I am here to help you out. I have came over to here because the waiter went over to me and my friend to find out who could sing so I had offered up to help out." Lou said as the musicians agreed with Lou's offer. "What would you like to sing then princess and we will play it for ya? Please make sure the backup singers are involved with the singing princess?" The drummer asked, "I would like to sing 'A New Day Has Come' by Celine Dion please? Is that a problem?" Lou asked. "Nah, we'll do anything but this one is for you princess. What's your name princess?" The drummer said, "I'm Louise." Lou said. "We are pleased to meet you Louise at a great cost even at the last minute. I am known as 'Drummer' by my fellow team because I play the drums." The drummer said. "It's the same with me drummer and let's the party started." Lou said. The customers were quite as the music started to play as Lou started to sing. "A new day has...come I was waiting for so long for a miracle to come everyone told me to be strong hold on and don't shed a tear through the darkness and good times I knew I'd make it through and the world thought I had it all but I was waiting for you hush, love I see a light in the sky oh, it's almost blinding me I can't believe I've been touched by an angel with love let the rain come down and wash away my tears let it fill my soul and drown my fears let it shatter the walls for a new, new sun a new day has...come where it was dark now there's light where there was pain now there's joy where there was weakness, I found my strength all in the eyes of a boy hush, love I see a light in the sky oh, it's almost blinding me I can't believe I've been touched by an angel with love let the rain come down and wash away my tears let it fill my soul and drown my fears let it shatter the walls for a new, new sun a new day has...come a new day has...come ohhh, a light... ooh!" As Louise finished everyone clapped as she took a bow as Louise went back to her sit as the backup singers with the musicians went to up Louise when the drummer said, "Louise, we want to thank you ever do much for helping me and my team." "It's ok because if you need any help just give me a call." Louise said as she wrote her mobile phone number down on a piece of paper for them. "Ok and thank you Louise. Did you know that you've got a beautiful singing voice Louise?" The drummer said as his fellow team mates as agreed with him. "No I didn't really know at all Drummer." Louise said honestly. "Well Louise, do you now because you have got a talent with a beautiful singing voice like yours." The drummer said. "Thank you ever so much for saying something Drummer." Lou replied quickly. As the drummer left with his team when Louise finished eating her dinner with Modo as they both left as well although Modo had his blue motorbike outside the rest. As Louise got outside with Modo as Lou saw two shadows moving towards both her and Modo when Modo asked, "Lou, are you ok babes?" "I don't think so baby because I want to go." Louise said, "Lou is it because you can see two shadows or something in the distance?" Modo asked looking in the same direction as Louise was at that moment in time as Louise was getting paranoid as the two shadows were getting closer to them. "Yes and those two shadows are getting closer and closer by the second Modo." Louise said when Modo got onto his motorbike even though he revved his motorbike which made Lou jump out of her skin. "Lou, get on the back of my motorbike babes!" Modo shouted over the roaring engine of his motorbike as Modo saw Louise nodding her head saying yeah ok. Louise was soon on the back of Modo's blue motorbike after Lou had put her helmet on her head as Modo raced off back to The Last Chance Garage with the two shadows following. Back at The Last Chance Garage where Charley with two of the lads were at the time of Modo's return with Louise as their three mates watched Lou's actions as Lou looked outside The Last Chance Garage to find out where the two shadows were at the time as the one out of the two shadows fired a net into The Last Chance Garage even right at Louise although the three lads went angry and mad with what had happened to Louise. Lou struggled that much to get out of the net when Lou asked, "Can somebody help me to get out please?" "I am going to help you to get out of there Louise." Charley said as Louise carried on struggling when Charley grabbed one of the tools to help Louise out of the net. Next minute Charley knew Lou was getting electrocuted by the net after Lou pushed Charley out of the way as the lads heard Louise screaming from behind them after the net was been put onto Louise as she tried ever so hard to get out although Louise kept screaming. "LOUISE!" Modo shouted alerting his mates with what was happening to Louise. "Modo, what about Louise?" Vinnie said as Modo pointed to Louise when Vinnie with Throttle looked in the same direction as Modo was as Louise kept struggling whilst she was been electrocuted by the net. Louise managed to get out of the net as she used her powers that she didn't want to use in front of her friends as she but the net upon the two shadowed people outside the garage as Lou's mates saw Louise hurt so badly as they tried not hurt themselves because the net was the only thing Louise didn't want to be in the net that the two strangers in the shadows had done that night.

Friday 27th August 2000 Louise woke up as her bones ached for Louise to move out of her second hand bed. 'I never smoked before in my life. Well I did when my father was with me and he gave me a lighter with a pack of cigarettes. Although I do need a cigarette now because all of my nerves have kicked in.' Louise thought as she went downstairs so that Louise could go outside to smoke a cigarette before her mates had woken up themselves. As Louise was sitting in the gutter when Modo woke up and got himself outside as Modo asked, "Are you ok Louise?" "I am fine thank you Modo. What about yourself?" Louise said. "I'm ok thanks." Modo said, "Modo, how come you're up this early?" Louise asked, "I couldn't sleep babes. Couldn't you sleep?" Modo said, "I wake up naturally baby." Louise said as Modo moved to sit by Louise. "Lou, is it me or are you smoking something?" Modo asked, "I'm smoking a cigarette Modo. It's not you so don't worry because I don't want Charley to know." Louise said. "Hey you pair." Throttle and Vinnie said. "Hey Throttle, hey Vinnie. How are you both this brilliant morning?" Louise said. "We are both fine thanks Lou." Throttle said. "What about you Lou?" Vinnie asked, "I am fine but never better than that thank you Vinnie." Louise said. "Throttle, have you seen this?" Vinnie asked, "I haven't Vinnie. What have I missed now?" Throttle said. "I'm smoking Throttle. Modo notice as he sat down by me. It's not a big deal Vincent." Lou said as Vinnie was shocked to hear his full name as Modo laughed at the same time as Throttle. "I just can't believe you've actually said that Louise." Vinnie said. "What me saying your full name? I know because I am just the same." Louise said as saw Charley. "Crap! Charley is up lads." Louise added as she crushed the last part of her cigarette. "Good morning Charley!" Everyone said. "Good morning everyone." Charley chirped. "Charley's in a good mood this morning." Louise said. "Oh yes I am Louise. I knew you smoked Louise because Eliza told me so don't you worry about it anyway." Charley said. "Damn. No wonder I don't like having a little sister." Louise said, "Lou, what is the matter with Eliza?" Modo asked, "Eliza knows that I smoke so does my father. My mother with my three brothers doesn't know that I smoke because they were never told." Louise said as she told them the story. "Lou be careful because a car is coming this way." Charley said, "I will Charley and thanks for saying something." Louise said, "Lou, you are welcome." Charley said as Lou had another cigarette when the limo pulled up outside The Last Chance Garage. As the window was being wound down when the driver asked, "Is a young girl named Louise here?" "That would be me. Why do you want to know?" Louise said as she walked up. "I've brought your brothers. I'm Mac." Mac said, "I am very pleased you meet you Mac." Lou said as Seto got out the car with Mokuba. "Hello Louise. How are ya nowadays?" Seto said. "Hello Seto and hello Mokuba. I'm fine thank you, what about yourselves?" Louise said, "Lou, we are both fine thanks. Are you smoking?" Mokuba said, "I am little brother. I don't want you pair to do it because it's father's fault that I'm in this state." Louise said as Seto told Louise what happened back at their family home. "So that is all you need to know about father Louise." Seto said, "I can't believe it Seto. I really, really can't believe it but why would father go ahead to do something like that for?" Lou said, "I don't know why either Lou." Seto responded. "Let's hope that father can stop what he is doing before he hurts somebody or even worse by killing somebody because there is no way you are going now Louise." Seto added. "I know Seto because nobody wants me to go yet." Lou replied quickly as another limo pulled up behind the limo that Mac was in to take Lou's brothers to her. Troy was in the limo behind Mac's personal limo as Mac said, "I hate to say this but Troy is in the car behind Louise." "Thanks for letting me know Mac." Lou said. "It is my pleasure angel." Mac said as Lou smiled at him as Mac smiled back at Lou as Troy got out of the limo that was behind Mac's limo. "Hello again Louise and funny to see you smoking again my dear daughter of mine." Troy said. "Hello father. I do know about me smoking again, besides I want nothing to do with ya and I don't want to know what you've got to say father because I heard what you've done." Louise replied as she walked into the garage without looking twice at Troy. Troy followed Lou into the garage with the cat and nine tails wipe as Troy hit Louise as she screamed when Lou's mates and two brothers ran inside with Mac to find out that Louise was flat on her front on the floor in front of the tools. Lou struggled to get back up on to her feet as Troy lifted his left hand with the cat and nine tails whip his hand into the air as he struck Louise on her back as Lou collapsed back onto the floor again because Troy was not hurting Lou on accident but he was doing it on purpose so Lou learned her lesson all the time. "YOU WILL NEVER SPEAK TO ME LIKE THAT AGAIN LOUISE!" Troy shouted. "Don't you see that you don't really care about me father?" Lou quickly replied. "What did Lou mean by that?" Mokuba asked, "Lou's made father realize what he has done to her. Father has been hurting Lou for so long because Lou never wanted to as father has ordered her to do in the first place." Seto said. "Every time father goes to hit me, Seto or Eliza there is always Lou to get in the way because she couldn't bear seeing her own flesh and blood get hurt." Mokuba added. "What on earth does flesh and blood mean?" Vinnie asked. "Flesh and blood means siblings or part of the family Vinnie." Lou said as she raised her head to answer Vinnie's question. "Oh and I never knew that before." Vinnie said, "I am glad that I have told you that." Lou said as she placed her head on the floor as Troy kept beating Louise until somebody stopped Troy all together. "Troy that is enough because Louise is now badly hurt because of what have done to her." Emma said as she walked over to Louise to look at Lou's back when Louise looked up see Emma carefully examining Lou's back.

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