Authors Note: This is the revised version of chapter one. Hope you like it. I like to thank FFML TIM for reviewing my first version. I also wanted to say I hated the scripted form before so I decided to revise chapter one again.
Disclaimer: I do not own Love Hina. Ken Akamatsu and TokyoPop own it. I do like to think that I own my OC so please ask before you use them.
Love Hina: Continues
Chapter one: A new friend
It is now September 1, 2004 and Keitaro Urashima is now attending his second year of Tokyo University. It is 3:30pm in the afternoon and Keitaro is heading to his most hated class, writing class.
"Why do I have to go to a writing class?" said Keitaro while talking to himself. All of a sudden a hand landed on his shoulder. "Because when you make a discovery you have to write a report about the discovery." said Seta, who's Keitaro old employer, friend, and his aunt Haruka wife. Keitaro then screamed out, "Agh Seta-san when did you get here and where is Aunt-Haruk..." POW, Keitaro was hit in the face by Haruka which sent him down the hall into the stair well and out the front door. Five minutes later Keitaro was back supporting a bandage covering a big bump on his head.
"Don't call me aunt. It is just Haruka-san ok." said Haruka. "Yes right no more au..... Ah just Haruka right." said Keitaro.
"So why do you hate writing class?" asked Haruka.
"Mainly because I keep day dreaming in class about Naru and I being more sexually involve, this cause Seta, Haruka, and some of the student pass by to give a sweat drop, and I would say it loud enough for everybody to hear, so when I get back to Hinata-sou Naru will already find out and give me her famous punch." said Keitaro.
"Don't worry about that Keitaro," said Seta "Oh yeah, the writing professor wants to talk to you. "Why me what did I do now?" wined Keitaro.
Keitaro was running to class room 202 (a.k.a. writing class), to meet up with Professor Ryoko Masaki. Keitaro turned a corner and ran right into a woman, face first into her boobs. Of course Keitaro would jump back and start bowing and saying sorry. The person he ran into was professor Ryoko; who is an American/Japanese, tall, light blue hair, yellow eyes, dress like Seta but more skin tight clothes, about her mid-20's, recently gradated from Tokyo University, and boobs in the shape of melons but a little bigger then Kitsune's.
"You should watch where you are going Keitaro." said Ryoko while giggling a bit. "Excuse me Ryoko-sensei, Seta-san told me that you want to talk to me." said Keitaro.
"Yes, I want you to help one of your classmates for awhile." said Ryoko. "Why professor?" asked Keitaro. "He is an America studying aboard here in Japan, I want you to teach him Japanese, and Seta told me you know English." said Keitaro.
"Sure professor I can help him out, oh where is he right now." said Keitaro. "Thank you Keitaro, he is in the library and you can miss today's class so you can help the student out but I expect you in class the next day." said Ryoko.
"Thank you professor, see you tomorrow." said Keitaro.
Then, without warning, Keitaro runs down the hall, to the library, without asking what the American's name is. So as soon as Keitaro gets to the library, he realizes that he doesn't know what the American's name is and was about to scream baka until a Japanese boy about 5'11'', 19 years old, black hair, brown eyes, where's glasses, and dress in a white kacky pants and red polo shirt poked him in the back and said "Hello are you Keitaro Urashima? My name is Steve P. Manz it is very nice to meet you." (All in English)
"Yes, my name is Keitaro and it is nice to meet you too and who are you?" said Keitaro. "Like I said I am Steve P. Manz and you are my sensei in Japanese." said Steve. "Oh yeah that's right." said Keitaro this cause Steve to give a sweat drops. "Well let's get to work ok." said Steve.
So after an hour in the library Keitaro and Steve decided that it was time to go home until Steve asked, "Hey Keitaro do you know any good forest areas around here or where ever you live?" Keitaro turning around slowly and nervously asked, "Why?"
"Because I don't have a place to sleep and I like to sleep under the stars also." said Steve. After hearing this Keitaro fault. "Oh ok, Well there is a nice woods next to where I live, hey why don't you live at my place," said Keitaro "I have a room with a sky light that I just put in, plus I own the place." "Ok, sure why not." said Steve.
While in the train cabin Steve and Keitaro was talking to each other when Keitaro says, "I hope Naru won't be mad at me for this." "Who's Naru and why would she be mad?" asked Steve.
"Oh Naru is my girlfriend/fiancé and one of the girls that live in my all girls dormitory." said Keitaro. "After hearing this Steve yelled, "Why you asshole!" Then he punches Keitaro, which sends Keitaro to the front of the train and then he runs to Keitaro saying. "Sorry about that Keitaro, but what do you think I am a girl?"
While supporting a bandage on his head Keitaro said, "That is ok I am like immortal and no I don't think you are girl I just want to help you out." While sighing Steve said, "Ok and sorry about the punch." "I get that a lot, oh we're here." said Keitaro.
It is about 5:15pm, Keitaro and Steve had finally arrived at Hinata-sou.
When Steve and Keitaro got into Hinata-sou and put Steve's bags down. Keitaro said, "Hey Steve you should stay here in the lobby until I round the girls and explain everything, ok." "Ok, I will hang around on the couch." said Steve.
Ten minutes after Keitaro left Steve falls asleep on the couch. At this time Motoko walks into the lobby after her bath, wrapped only in a towel, to find a sleeping man, Steve, on the couch.
Motoko just realized that a man was sleeping on their couch and she screamed out, "Why you perverted man, Boulder Cutting Blade!"
After the smoke cleared and seeing the couch was in two, she notices that he was standing behind her about 5 feet away in a fighting stance. She then proceeded to use rock splitting slash and cutting demon second form. After that Steve did an energy blast and said, "Turtle canon" which shot an energy blast that turned into about a thousand flying hot spring turtles. This causes Motoko to use different ki attacks, because of her fear of turtles, and fainted. Keitaro and the others coming running into the lobby after hearing the explosions.
"What's going on in here?" asked Keitaro.
Then Steve still in a fighting stance gave a loud snore, which causes everybody to give a sweat drop. At that point Motoko awakened from her little fainting episode and so did Steve, from his little nap.
After Steve woke up from his short nap he noticed the room was half destroyed, Keitaro and the tenants of Hinata-sou, and also a girl on the floor cloth with a towel on. "What is going on here?" asked Steve.
Everybody except for Steve and Motoko, since she was on the floor already, fall down on the floor.
After realizing that the girls are tenants Steve said, "Hello my name is Steve P. Manz I am the new tenant at Hinata-sou."
This surprised everybody, Keitaro was surprised that Steve was speaking perfect Japanese and the girls were surprised that their new tenant was a boy.
Then the girls yelled, "WHAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"
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Authors note: I hope this revised version is better. I also decide to put in a little twist to Steve language a bit. Another thing I won't be able to update until weekends.
