one day twilight just gave up keeping the secret that she liked flash so with out thinking she toke the train to the crystal empire.

she totally forgot that the crystal warriors(the warriors team name) and the cantercolters(their team name)were having their population war both areas thought they had the highest population.

but disaster was what the bad choice that twi had just made (to go to the crystal empire)

when she got here she saw the disaster. she could belive her freind s were fighting each other rarity and pinke pie had joined the crystal warriors and-sunset shimmer was on the crystal warriors team too?

and then flutter and rainbow and apple were fighting for the cantercolters!

this was deffiently going o end right this since i am here! thought then some thing pink caught her eye,"cadence!"twilight said as she galloped to her sister that was laying on the groudnd.

cadence was motionless ponies trampled over her like she was part of the ground."no stop please don't touch her!"twilight would say when ponies stepped on her but they didn't listen.

"stop get away from here save yourself twilie!"a familiar voice said twilight looked up from the tragic sight. it was shining armor her big brother."bbbff(big brother best friend forever) i am so glad to see you!"twilight said. "i will get cadence"shining armor said surios.

"no i have to see what is wrong with her cause...well shes my sis!"

twilight troted it the giant mob the last thing she remembered was that a blue hoove steped on her face.

how is it so far?tell me what you think i will accept anything.