I OWN NOTHING! NOOOOTHING! Okay, this the first pathetic attempt at fanfilking I did. ^_^ Not too good, but... anyway... here they are! (I don't own anything here except for the few words I changed... no, wait, I don't own words... that's impossible.. I don't own ANYTHING.)




In a Ship with no Name
Filksong by: Invader Kit
REAL Song by: America!!

On the first part of my journey
I was looking at all my life
There was shame and pain and fear and things
There were laughs and taunts and things.

The first thing I saw was a robotic arm
And a sky with bright stars
The heat was hot and the ground was dry
But space was full of sound

Chorus-
You see, I've been through the cosmos
in a ship with no name
it felt good to be out of my shame.
In the cosmos you can remember your name
'Cause there ain't noone for to give you no shame.

After two days in the cosmos
My skin began to turn dark...
After three days in the cosmos's pull
I was looking at a planet
And the story it told of a planet that thrived
Made me sad to think it was dead

Chorus...

After 6 months I got off the space ship
'Cause the cosmos had ended right there!...
There were plants and birds and rocks and things
There was sand and hills and rings
The planet is a desert with its life safe and sound
And a perfect disguise above
Under the cities lies a heart made of ground
But those humans will give no love

Chorus...

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Pwease r&r! Pleeease? Okay, this one wasn't too good, but it was my very first fanfilk I ever wrote. I need criticism. I need it so bad!... critique me! ^_^ Thaaanks...

More 2 come!