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Pokémon Broken Heart

Chapter 1


Male Announcer: Ash, Brock Max, and May finally reach Petalburg City so Ash can finally get his 5th gym badge.

Ash: "Come on guys we have to hurry up and get to the gym!"

May: "Hold it!" She pulls Ash's ear. "We have to go shopping first!" Everyone falls to the ground anime style

Max: "May we can go shopping anytime. We live he for all I care."

Just then a horde of people cane running up to them.

Random Person 1: "Aren't you guys May and Max Maple?"

May and Max: "Yes?" They said in unison

Crowd: "Can I have your autograph" They all said

Before they could react Ash and Brock were pushed aside and soon May and Max were surrounded by fans

Random Girl: "Aren't you the Pewter City Gym leader?"

Brock: "Yes?"

Crowd of Random Girls: (screaming) "OMG! You are so hot. One of the girls even ran up to Brock and whispered to his ear: "Make my babies with me"

By now Brock's face was red as a tomato then Ash spoke up.

Ash: "Doesn't anybody know me?" He screamed.

Random Person 1: "I think I've seen you before."

Random Person 2: "He's the loser from the Johto league"

By now Ash had run out of town and May and Max didn't realize it.

6:00 pm that same day at the gym

Max: "We finally got away!"

May: "Does anybody know where Ash is?"

Brock: "Now that you mention it I think I saw him running out of town for some reason."

Max: "O yay I remember that I heard Ash ask if anybody knew him and some guy said that he was the loser from the Johto league."

May: "Sounds like you when Ash first came to Petalburg"

Brock: "Focus guys we have to find Ash"

May & Max: "Right!"