Hey everyone DiamondMario41 here and just so you know this is my first fanfiction ever so please leave a comment on what I should do to make it better in any way.
Pokémon Broken Heart
Chapter 1
Male Announcer: Ash, Brock Max, and May finally reach Petalburg City so Ash can finally get his 5th gym badge.
Ash: "Come on guys we have to hurry up and get to the gym!"
May: "Hold it!" She pulls Ash's ear. "We have to go shopping first!" Everyone falls to the ground anime style
Max: "May we can go shopping anytime. We live he for all I care."
Just then a horde of people cane running up to them.
Random Person 1: "Aren't you guys May and Max Maple?"
May and Max: "Yes?" They said in unison
Crowd: "Can I have your autograph" They all said
Before they could react Ash and Brock were pushed aside and soon May and Max were surrounded by fans
Random Girl: "Aren't you the Pewter City Gym leader?"
Brock: "Yes?"
Crowd of Random Girls: (screaming) "OMG! You are so hot. One of the girls even ran up to Brock and whispered to his ear: "Make my babies with me"
By now Brock's face was red as a tomato then Ash spoke up.
Ash: "Doesn't anybody know me?" He screamed.
Random Person 1: "I think I've seen you before."
Random Person 2: "He's the loser from the Johto league"
By now Ash had run out of town and May and Max didn't realize it.
6:00 pm that same day at the gym
Max: "We finally got away!"
May: "Does anybody know where Ash is?"
Brock: "Now that you mention it I think I saw him running out of town for some reason."
Max: "O yay I remember that I heard Ash ask if anybody knew him and some guy said that he was the loser from the Johto league."
May: "Sounds like you when Ash first came to Petalburg"
Brock: "Focus guys we have to find Ash"
May & Max: "Right!"
