Hi guys!

I felt like writing a story with a deep meaning. This is not going to be a long story, probably just 2-3 chapters. Sorry for my bad English, I'm a teenager from Denmark and my English isn't perfect.

There are some Jackunzel and Merricup included in this story.

But I hope you enjoy the first chapter. And please review to let me know what you think. :)


Can't you just shut up?

Ye're so freakin' annoyin'

Don't you understand a 'no'?

All of their words echoed in my head as I looked out of the window. It was raining outside. And was that thunder I just heard? Great. The weather matched my mood perfectly.

Why do you have to be so stupid?

You could kill yourself and I wouldn't care

Everybody does not love ye! Just get it already!

It was only a few hours since I left Jack's house. My eyes were filed with tears, but they wouldn't fall. Maybe it was the thought of what the other would think about me if they saw me crying that kept the tears in my eyes.

They never knew it. I never showed it to them. No matter what they said, I would always just smile and pretend that everything was okay. That I didn't take their words seriously. But they did hurt me. A lot.

I just learned to always have a smile on my face so people wouldn't see how weak I really was. How miserable I was.

I was just an epic fail. Everything I said, everything I did was always wrong. And they weren't afraid of telling me.

Merida would just tell me right away without blinking. At the beginning I wanted to believe that she did like me, that she just had some bad days. But even now, three years after I meet her, she still gave me a deathly glare every time I spoke, and she still told me how annoying and stupid I was every time she got the chance.

Jack was not any better. His words hit me even harder than the others. I guess it was because I had a crush on him since the first time we meet. And I was completely sure that he would never love me back. Something he assured me of by commenting on how stupid I was every time I spoke to him.

And the there were Hiccup. He didn't really say anything to be, but I could see on his face how much he hated me. And I knew that when the three of them were together, they would talk about how annoying I was.

I wanted them to like me. I wanted them to like me, just like I liked them.
But I knew that it would never happen. Because they didn't like me, they hated me. And right now I just wanted to make the pain go away.

I got up and quickly braided my long blond hair. My eyes fell on a picture on the table. Four young people were looking back at me. Jack and Merida looked bored. Hiccup smiled a bit, but you could easily see that it was only to be friendly. I was having my arms around Merida and Jack, giving a big smile to the camera. If just they knew how fake that smile was. I reached out and turned the picture around so I didn't have to look at it, before grabbing my jacket and walking out the door.

I didn't actually know what I was doing before I found myself standing on a bridge. Slowly I put my hand on the fence, and pulled myself over. I couldn't hold back the tears anymore. But at the same time I felt happy. I was finally going to be free. I took a deep breath, and just as I was about to let go, someone yelled my name behind me. Hiccup.

"Rapunzel, what the heck are you doing!?"

I turned around and looked at him, for the first time ever not hiding my true feelings. I almost wanted to laugh when I saw his face. He looked shocked. Completely shocked. He took a step towards me.

"Don't come any near me."

My voice was cold. It didn't sound like me, at all. But it was me. The real me. I looked away from a Hiccup as I heard someone else. Jack and Merida were looking back at me with the same shocked expression as Hiccup.

"R-Rapunzel..?" Merida said, her voice shaky. Probably just because it was cold. I mean, she couldn't possible be scared.

"Get down from there right now Rapunzel." Jack's voice was deep and commanding. If I didn't knew I would have thought there was worry in his eyes as he looked at me. But why should he ever worry about me?

"Now." He said, his voice cracking.

Wait a minute, was he about to cry? No, he couldn't be. After all he didn't have any feelings at all.

I simply looked at him, my face showing all of the pain I had felt through the years. And then I let go of the fence.

Everything slowed down, and I could hear someone screaming my name before I hit the ground and an incredible pain flew through me. I wanted to scream, but I couldn't. The world around me was already getting darker, and all I heard was the scream before the world became completely dark and silent.


Okay, here you go, the first chapter. I hope you liked it. Please review, it would make my day so much brighter. And it only takes a couple of seconds, right?

I'll see you soon. ^^