I would have never thought I would enjoy Pokemon this much again, or Altoshpping. I didn't even know what it was until this week. But it doesn't matter, I enjoyed it so much that I decided to write my own. If you think anything sounds familiar, I know, that's the point. Easily the two best ones I've read are Altomare Revisited and Altomare Fated Reunion. They did so many great things, like how characters act and I decided that some of these small things need to continue. Of course this is my story so I'll write it as mine, but with small things like that being noticed to remember of those two stories. So if you've something good to say, something bad, something important, a nice idea. Then please, write it. I'm not 100 % confident in my dialogue writing, when to use quotations marks etc. Please correct on those mistakes.
' ' - Thoughts, Telepathy
" "- normal speech
"!"- shock, surprise etc
Chapter 1
Lying in the garden of the Lati was no one else than Latias. But something was worrying her.
'Oh how I miss Ash, I wish I could've told him what I felt all these years ago. Ash please come back to Altomare!' she cried out.
Meanwhile…
"Are you ready Ash?" asked Wallace Champion of Hoenn. Taking one of his Pokeballs, Ash was just about to throw it.
"!", Ash fell to the ground feeling a pain inside his heart he never had felt before.
"Ash what's wrong?" Wallace asked worried.
"I don't know, I just felt this massive pain inside my heart. Walalce if you're fine with it can we postpone this match?" Ash asked.
"Of course, I see no problem with it. Just give me a call when you feel you're ready." Wallace said and leaving the arena.
Ash stood up and left the arena to go and meet his friends.
"Guys, I need a break. Anyone interested in going to Altomare?" Ash asked. May,Max and Brock all looked at Ash wondering.
"Huh, shouldn't you be fighting Wallace?" Brock asked.
"Yea, but I felt like I needed a break" Ash said, without meantioning the pain he had felt.
Brock nodded in understanding.
"If you feel like it, Brock said, I'm fine with coming along. May, Max, you want to come along as well?" Both nodded hapily, never having visited Altomare.
"Then let's get ready and pack everything we needed" Ash annouced.
"How do we get to Altomare?" May asked interested.
"There's a ferry from Vermilion to Slateport and from there a ferry to Altomare goes, but we need to hurry, the ferries leave after each other." Brock answered. They all walked together back to their hotel and packed everything they need for their holiday they had planned. But as dense as Ash was, he hadn't heard the voice that cried out when he felt the pain inside his heart.
After a long journey on the two ferries, they had finally arrived at Altomare. The sun was shining down on the town, lighting up everything.
'I had forgotten how beautiful Altomare was' Ash thought.
'!', again Ash felt a small pain inside his heart, this time weaker than the last time. Not aware that the closer he got to Latias, the less the pain would be.
After having arrived at the hotel and having checked in, Ash decided to take a walk on his own.
"Hey guys, if you don't mind I would like taking a walk on my own. I'll be back for dinner though, so don't worry" Ash said trying to convince his friends to let him go.
"Alright, but if you're late you will pay for the dinner!" May shouted after him as he left the room.
Walking through Altomare he had no idea where he went, he had to thank Pikachu that he didn't get completely lost. Unaware that Pikachu was guiding him to a certain house Ash just followed the directions of his best friend.
After Pikachu, somehow, managed to guide Ash to this certain house he pointed at the door. Ash understood what Pikachu meant and knocked at the door.
"I'm coming!" a voice shouted from the second floor. The door was opened and in the opening stood Bianca.
"Hey Bianca" Ash said with a slight smile on his face.