Hehe well someone asked me to continue my maxie poem but I thought that
this one didn't really fit with the theme I was going with in cannot bleed
so this is just a new one again in maxes pov just cos I love him!
WARNING!!! This was written at three in the morning so might not make any
sense at all
You might not get what this means so ill just explain quickly..
If you look at the sky at night under the street lamps its kinda purple
when you look at it without streetlamps but with an inside light on it
looks blacky brown but if you look at it with no lights at all then it
looks yellow
Ok that was waaay too long!
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YELLOW SKY
Surrounded by pain and regret
Making me a prisoner of my mind
The walls are closing
And I need a release
When the darkness falls
I find a kindred soul
In the solitude of the sky
Yellow sky, it calls to me
Break away the walls
It lets me forget
Numb the pain
Wash away regret
Ignore the should haves
And the could haves
I find solace in the
Yellow sky
Stare deep into its depths
Like a blank canvas sheet
Things are seen in a new light
New patterns found
I cannot trace, I cannot forget
Find solace in my heart
Yellow sky, it calls to me
Break away the walls
It lets me forget
Numb the pain
Wash away regret
Ignore the should haves
And the could haves
I find solace in the
Yellow sky
The pain disappears
And the bars start to flicker
All my thoughts are gone
With the fear and regrets
In the shadow of the night
I can't see how dark I've become
I find peace with myself
Yellow sky, it calls to me
Break away the walls
It lets me forget
Numb the pain
Wash away the regret
Ignore the should haves
And the could haves
I find solace in the
Yellow sky
I'm finally free
But when the lights turn on
It all fades away
My yellow sky, it calls to me
But when the lights turn on
It all fades to black
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ok that's the longest thing ive ever written, (it looks like a song or is
it just me?) and the sh*ty-est but I did write it at 3 in the morning
people .
I would really appreciate some feedback so review please?
this one didn't really fit with the theme I was going with in cannot bleed
so this is just a new one again in maxes pov just cos I love him!
WARNING!!! This was written at three in the morning so might not make any
sense at all
You might not get what this means so ill just explain quickly..
If you look at the sky at night under the street lamps its kinda purple
when you look at it without streetlamps but with an inside light on it
looks blacky brown but if you look at it with no lights at all then it
looks yellow
Ok that was waaay too long!
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
YELLOW SKY
Surrounded by pain and regret
Making me a prisoner of my mind
The walls are closing
And I need a release
When the darkness falls
I find a kindred soul
In the solitude of the sky
Yellow sky, it calls to me
Break away the walls
It lets me forget
Numb the pain
Wash away regret
Ignore the should haves
And the could haves
I find solace in the
Yellow sky
Stare deep into its depths
Like a blank canvas sheet
Things are seen in a new light
New patterns found
I cannot trace, I cannot forget
Find solace in my heart
Yellow sky, it calls to me
Break away the walls
It lets me forget
Numb the pain
Wash away regret
Ignore the should haves
And the could haves
I find solace in the
Yellow sky
The pain disappears
And the bars start to flicker
All my thoughts are gone
With the fear and regrets
In the shadow of the night
I can't see how dark I've become
I find peace with myself
Yellow sky, it calls to me
Break away the walls
It lets me forget
Numb the pain
Wash away the regret
Ignore the should haves
And the could haves
I find solace in the
Yellow sky
I'm finally free
But when the lights turn on
It all fades away
My yellow sky, it calls to me
But when the lights turn on
It all fades to black
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
ok that's the longest thing ive ever written, (it looks like a song or is
it just me?) and the sh*ty-est but I did write it at 3 in the morning
people .
I would really appreciate some feedback so review please?