So I was reading some poetry and found a little poem called, "Do not go gentle into that good night" by Dylan Thomas, a Welsh poet. As a villanelle it is comprised of 19 lines and six stanzas; the first of which the last line is repeated at the end of all the other stanzas. The first line of the first stanza is repeated along with the last one at the very end of the poem in the six stanzas or couplet. Generally in the poem above, it had five feet for the first line and five and a half for the second and five again for the third. So it would look like this syllable wise with u being unstressed and / being stressed.

u/|u/|u/|u/|u/|

u/|u/|u/|u/|u/|u|

u/|u/|u/|u/|u/|

I wanted to write a villanelle and so I chose our very own Mephisto Pheles or Mephistopheles or Samael—he has far too many names, our clown does—to write about.

I hope you enjoy it.


Reaper, Reaper

Peonies, dying petals of ash and tears

Colors bright in the rise of night

King of Flowers, decayed to the core

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Cloth-strewn garden torn from the root, shame rendered

Truths dyed with pearl-tainted blood. Reaped sorrow

King of Flowers, decayed to the core

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Painted smile of Joy? Dripping poison

From pointed teeth; halted march, slowed Hands freeze

King of Flowers, decayed to the core

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Stagnated, Time-stopped era, royal pyre

Burn in infamy, ruined Father, Amen

King of Flowers, decayed to the core

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Fili Dei miserete nobis

Tiered Babel of tears, Jerusalem fell

King of Flowers, decayed to the core

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Give us thinly-veiled honor, Father

Till blood runs down Hollow'd walls and souls soar

Peonies, dying petals of ash and tears

King of Flowers, decayed to the core


'Nough said.

Tarry a while. Thou art so fair. ~ Wild-Tama