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Sunday night we, the Glee crew are all chilling in the basement of the Hummel-Hudson household over the summer still coping over our major loss at Nationals. We decided to have a little party, well of the guys watching the game on the flat screen with Burt Hummel and all the girls on the sofa looking at Kurt's fashion magazines and gossiping. During half time of the football game we were all talking and hanging out together, I couldn't help but notice Puck and Lauren away to themselves. I rolled my eyes when I saw Puck and Lauren leave upstairs they are a couple I just could not stand. I have nothing against Lauren, kiddos to a heavy set girl reeling in a school hottie, but she just rubs me the wrong way.

Half time was over and the guys and I resettled on the couch. I maybe a fashionista, but I get down with Sunday Night football with my dad. In the middle of the 3rd quarter of the Puck returned Lauren-free and a bad attitude.

"Yo what's up man?" Finn said never leaving his eyes from the screen.

"Nothing" he said like a pouty five-year-old boy kicking his foot and crossing his arms. I exchanged a glance with the fellas and they all knew that he was lying out his ass.

"Well Mr. Nothing can you walk me to my car then its dark. Come on you ain't doin' nothin'." I got up pulling him to get up too, which he wasn't so happy about and followed me upstairs to my car.

I have no patience for nonsense and beating around the bush. He stood there grumbling as I went into my car, but I had a plan to get him to talk.

"Want one?" I said retrieving cigarettes and a lighter.

"No I don't smoke…what you doing?"

"I will smoke if you don't tell me what's wrong!" Lighting a cigarette is work. My first attempt at lighting it failed with the cigarette falling out of my mouth.

"Your gonna kill yourself" he said shaking his head.

"HA!" I finally lit it. "Start talking or I will start puffing!"

"Lauren dumped me now put that damn thing out!" Damn that didn't take long.

"Why?"

"Some bullshit that I gone soft and that I am trying to hard with her."
"Well you have! Excuse me for watching your blood pressure and not trying to have a damn heart attack you have much better anger management control."

"She called me weak…" He said collapsing on my car he looked so pathetic, and I hated him tripping over her. In my eyes it was her loss, I am glad that bitch is gone.

"And you believe her?" he looked even more mad kicking my car tire. "Listen to me. You gone soft, growing up and finding yourself! She so stupid and clearly does not accept you for you. Defending your unpopular geeky friends, singing and dancing on stage, taking care of your responsibilities as a father, and dating a girl and not cheating she buggin'! You're the total package now. You are romantic and deep with layers upon layers of personality, opinions, and thoughts beyond Super Mario that is so addicting and challenging makes you even more damn fine." I spoke from the heart not thinking twice about what I was saying me and my big mouth. "I mean hello, clearly your unbelievably sexy. There isn't anything wrong with you…except for your pickup lines but still! It makes me wonder what she is smokin' on. My goodness!" I got so pissed at her, and thinking about how much Puck has grown into every woman's dream man that I took a puff of my cigarette almost coughing up a lung.

"eww!" I threw the cigarette on the ground.

"Didn't I tell you to put that thing out?" I didn't realize that he moved standing behind me patting my back, "What are you doing with those anyway?"

"It is my way of getting people to talk to tell me what's wrong."

He snickered, "Got you to talk." Damn I am busted. It hide my feelings so well for so long and I got caught from being nosey and running my mouth.

I sighed turned and faced my biggest crush, "I don't like her. I never really did. When you started to date her I couldn't believe it, it was just so damn wrong. You crawling and doin' this and that, and she just fuck around about it. Where else in Lima will you find someone so fine? Shit makes me think that she is either crazy or didn't know what to do with you."

"You could have said something."

"Like you would have listened?"

"Mama doesn't approve you got to go." I laughed. "You clearly been looking out for me and checking me out quote, 'clearly your unbelievably sexy'"

I face palmed, I had to open my big mouth. "Yeah its true."

"Don't hide your face." He pulled my hands away and I caught him smiling.

"I didn't say nothin' because-hell wait a minute I saw what she did to Santana" I thought mid way through remembering how Santana tried crossing Lauren, and she knocked her Latina ass out, and we both busted out laughing.

"Wouldn't let her do that to my little mama…come on tell me really why? No after thoughts."

"Because you looked happy. I thought I could be wrong about her, could have just been jealousy. If she made you that damn happy why should I put in my two sense. I still cannot believe she caught you and whipped you…where she go I will find her and give me some tips." I was kidding pretending to move towards the driver side of my car but he placed a firm hand on my hip keeping me in place.

"I don't care where she went and you aren't going anywhere. I am not whipped over her no more she doesn't make me happy. Sexy mama you been feelin' me for this long and not tell me?" he pulled me in and wrapped his arms around me.

"You never seemed interested in me!" I said pushing him by his chest. "Never gave me a chance."

"No you never seemed to want to give me a chance girl! You kept turning me down!"

"You going to turn me down now?" I asked hopefully he wouldn't, already I was blushing the hell out of my cheeks. I probably look like a Macintosh apple.

"Nah…but I better not catch you smokin' again."

"I am a smokin' hot mama can't help it" he smiled and took the lighter and cigarettes out of my hands and tossed them over his shoulder.

"Damn straight" he said in a low sexy voice, "Shorty" he patted my head gently and then stroked my cheek. Score for me! Finally I got that man! Normally I have a don't touch my weave policy, but made a one time exception.

"Hey Puck its dark. Can you drive home with me you ain't doing nothin'."

He raised his eyebrow and gave me his sexy grin, "Stop! I want to brush my teeth before I kiss you! I can still taste that cigarette! Boy you done lost your mind!"

"What's a man supposed to think when you say something like that? Should've listened to me I told you put that thing out!" he gave me a quick kiss on the lips and we hopped in the car.