sorry to all of you who either loved or hated War for Maka... i have deleted the story and im making a new and improved story! Please read it and tell me what you think! :)
Maka and Soul were walking to school together when Blackstar suddenly showed up...
"HEY GUYS! WHAT'S UP!?" Blackstar yelled into Maka's ear. "Ow Blackstar! I know you're happy to see me and all, but do you really have to burst my ear drum?" Maka asked. "I DON'T KNOW WHAT YOU ARE TALKING ABOUT I DO NOT YELL!" Blackstar yelled defiantly. "Don't worry Maka," Soul said. "I won't let him make you deaf." Soul and Maka had been dating for two months now, and Maka was sure she was in love. She watched happily as Soul kindly told Blackstar to shut up. She had finally gotten it right. She knew she was going to be with Soul forever.
Later that day, in a janitor's closet...
"Hey Soul!" Blackstar yelled angrily. "Why do you keep messing me up!?" Soul gave him a funny look. "What are you talking about?" he asked. "You know! I try to get Maka to like me back and you mess it up!" Blackstar yelled. Soul still didn't have a clue what was going on. "What? You don't even like Maka... and besides she can't like you back if she's seeing someone." Soul replied. Blackstar's face went blank. "Wait what? She dating someone?" Blackstar whispered. Soul nodded. "WHO!? I WILL KILL HIM!" Blackstar yelled. "Dude... I told you like two moths ago... you are an idiot!" Soul said. "How could you? You know I like her!" Blackstar asked. "Yea well you know that I love her so therefore, conversation, OVER." Soul said and walked out.
even later in the day, kid walks up to soul...
"Soul!" Kid yelled. "What? Let me guess: it's about Maka?" Soul said sarcastically. "Actually, yes." Kid responded.
"Well what?" Soul asked. "You see, it's just, she's so symmetrical!" Kid said.
"Oh I see. You like her too. Well too bad. She's mine for now." Soul stated.
"Well Soul. That's the thing... Spirit found out where your mom is." Kid whispered. Soul's mom had abandoned him when he was a kid because she couldn't take care of him. Ever since then, he's been trying to find out where his mom is and if she's even alive any more. He would do anything to find out.
"He knows where my mom is!?" Soul gasped.
"Yes. But the thing is, he says the only way he'll tell you is if you leave Maka alone." Kid said.
BUM BUM BUUUUM! Lol sorry guys, cliff hanger! Soo yea tell me what you think and tell me if i should add anything. You guys impact the outcome of the story! So REVIEW REVIEW REVIEW! ^-^ Thanks! Hope it's better than the original!