Summary (since the space given was too short): Two armies led by twin
brothers march on Redwall. The only hope for Mossflower is with five
slaves an ocean away and a lowly squirrel guard who lives deep in the
southern lands
Prolog
A young and hansom squirrel named Peter was on his way to the ruins of Redwall Abbey wearing green tunic and a straw hat. It was not his first time going there but today was different he was going there to tell the story of how they abbey fell to all the beasts of his home, Grey Stone Abbey; which was just a few miles south of Redwall. Now normally a story as important as this would be very common and yes it was but over 1000 seasons had past since it happened and the story over time lost truth and gained fictitious events. Last season while looking around the historical writings section of Grey Stone's (which he shouldn't have been doing since it was restricted do to the frailty of the ancient books) he stumbled upon the diary of the assistant cook of Redwall and a first hand account of what happened. After reading it he became intrigued since it was different than how it had been told to him so he looked around some more and found the writings of the last Redwall recorder Charles Arrow. Using this and the diary he was able to piece together what actually happened. Once he finished the work he presented it to Grey Stone's recorder, Magule and after being scolded the recorder asked him to read it to all the Abbey beasts at the Redwall ruins. After accepting the recorder announced it at dinner the night before.
Peter was running late! All of Grey Stone had gathered at the ruins and him not being there was causing a riot that Magule could barely keep under control. "Please be patient, I'm sure he'll be here. I'm sure he'll have a legitimate reason" "Shut up ya ugly otter! We've been waiting for hours!" yelled a young hotheaded Shrew in the crowd. "Look who's talking cheese for brains!" Magule replied while holding his cane like a samurai sword. "ya wanna fight old man" "come close and I'll show you what this old man can do" "ENOUGH ALREADY!" roared a gigantic hare Like dibbuns being told to go to bed Magule and the shrew looked down and quietly said, "Yes, mother Abbess" Through out the entire fight Peter stood behind a tree out of sight and chuckled. After a few more moments of enjoying Magule being scolded he finally presented himself. The crowd went silent with out an argument but gave the squirrel glares signifying that if the story wasn't good he better run for the hills and fast. "Ok lets get started."
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well the prolog is done and the main story is starting. Since Peter would not now what the people said in the story it is not told as if he is reading it k.
P.S. when you review please tell me which name is best for the badger lord and the guy who becomes the abbey warrior(note he's a wolf and not the main character and a good guy). Badger lord Warrior Blood Stripe Alan Heavypaws Charles Shar Warpaw
Prolog
A young and hansom squirrel named Peter was on his way to the ruins of Redwall Abbey wearing green tunic and a straw hat. It was not his first time going there but today was different he was going there to tell the story of how they abbey fell to all the beasts of his home, Grey Stone Abbey; which was just a few miles south of Redwall. Now normally a story as important as this would be very common and yes it was but over 1000 seasons had past since it happened and the story over time lost truth and gained fictitious events. Last season while looking around the historical writings section of Grey Stone's (which he shouldn't have been doing since it was restricted do to the frailty of the ancient books) he stumbled upon the diary of the assistant cook of Redwall and a first hand account of what happened. After reading it he became intrigued since it was different than how it had been told to him so he looked around some more and found the writings of the last Redwall recorder Charles Arrow. Using this and the diary he was able to piece together what actually happened. Once he finished the work he presented it to Grey Stone's recorder, Magule and after being scolded the recorder asked him to read it to all the Abbey beasts at the Redwall ruins. After accepting the recorder announced it at dinner the night before.
Peter was running late! All of Grey Stone had gathered at the ruins and him not being there was causing a riot that Magule could barely keep under control. "Please be patient, I'm sure he'll be here. I'm sure he'll have a legitimate reason" "Shut up ya ugly otter! We've been waiting for hours!" yelled a young hotheaded Shrew in the crowd. "Look who's talking cheese for brains!" Magule replied while holding his cane like a samurai sword. "ya wanna fight old man" "come close and I'll show you what this old man can do" "ENOUGH ALREADY!" roared a gigantic hare Like dibbuns being told to go to bed Magule and the shrew looked down and quietly said, "Yes, mother Abbess" Through out the entire fight Peter stood behind a tree out of sight and chuckled. After a few more moments of enjoying Magule being scolded he finally presented himself. The crowd went silent with out an argument but gave the squirrel glares signifying that if the story wasn't good he better run for the hills and fast. "Ok lets get started."
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well the prolog is done and the main story is starting. Since Peter would not now what the people said in the story it is not told as if he is reading it k.
P.S. when you review please tell me which name is best for the badger lord and the guy who becomes the abbey warrior(note he's a wolf and not the main character and a good guy). Badger lord Warrior Blood Stripe Alan Heavypaws Charles Shar Warpaw