Okay, first fanfic. Bold means authors note, (( ))means Max's thoughts during songs. I don't own Maxium Ride or Taylor Swift. I wish I did. This the disclaimer for thewhole story. Anyway, Eventual Fax !
Chapter 1
Finally. Ive been wanting Fang to come to one my concerts since I joined my band,Winged. The guys and I got together after Lissa and I's fight. I'm finally just a teenage girl in love with a teenage boy. Did I just say that? Scratch that, I'm just a teenage mutant band member. Much better. Any ways,Fang finally decided to come listen to my songs in concert! I'm actually exited!Ugh, he's on that damn phone again! I bet its Kat, his bitchy little girlfriend. Lissa and I hate her. Lissa decided that she didn't actually like Fang, the idea of a new, hot boy was to awesome to resist. Now we're best friends... Oh! I'm up! Lissa gave me thumbs up and Fang sorta waved. It would just kill Mr. Rock to smile. Please note sarcasm. I got up on stage and sang my little mutant lead singer heart out, Lissa bobbing her head and singing the whole time. Suddenly, Fang gets up and goes to the aisle. With my super hearing, I heard his phone conversation. It went something like this:
Fang: Kat, what is it
Kat: Fang, do you love me?
Fang: Of course, why?
Kat: you never said it, so I got scared you didn't.
Fang: but I do, Sweetie.
Kat: Thank you!
Oh, barf! I was so livid!!! The truth was, I loved Fang. I had to take out my anger on something. I looked at the mike in my hand, then turned to the band. "Sudden inspiration, guys." They immediately tried to guess what notes I would want. They got it perfect. I began...
You're on the phone with your girlfriend, she's upset.
She's going off about something you haven't said.
She doesn't know your silence like I do.
((We like communicate in total silence))
I'm in my room.
It's a typical Tuesday night.
I'm listening to the kind of music she doesn't like.
((She likes bubble gum pop, Fang and I like hard rock))
She'll never know your story like I do.
But she wears short skirts
((Not everyone likes seeing your butt hanging out))
I wear T-shirts
She's cheer captain and I'm on the bleachers
((I'm always actually watching Fang play football))
Dreamin bout the day that you wake up and find that what your lookin for
has been here the whole time!
If you see that I'm the one who understands you
You've been here all along so why can't you see
you belong with me, you belong with me.
Walkin the streets with you and your worn out jeans
((His jeans are always old and worn out, I can't get him to buy new ones))
I can't help thinking this is how it ought to be
Laughing on a park bench thinkin to myself: Hey isn't this easy!
You have a smile that could light up this whole town.
((Have you ever seen it? No?Your missing out))
I haven't seen it in a while since she brought you down.
((He's even more quiet now if thats possible...))
Here I thought I knew you better than that,
Then you run off with a bitch like Kat.
(( What a Bitch!!!))
But She wears high heels
(( Ouch!!))
I wear sneakers
She's cheer captain and I'm on the Bleachers
Dreamin bout the day when you wake up and find
that what your lookin for
has been here the whole time!
If you see that I'm the one who understands you
You've been here all along
so why can't you see
you belong with me,
you belong with me.
((And he does))
There. What an awesome song. I'm so glad Fang came. I waved to him and he walked over to me.. He cornered me backstage. Please kiss me, Please kiss me..."What the hell was that!?!"He nearly yelled. I just stared at him. "Calling Kat a bitch in your song!?! She's my girlfriend!!! And suggesting we should be together!?!No way!!!" Ouch. I was way off. I thought maybe we had a chance. But,of course, I was wrong. I felt tears well up in my eyes,so I ducked my head and ran. All the way to the van, where I wept like a little baby.
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