This is my first story , I will accept constructive critisam [ not very welly , but I'll try ] please comment . Enjoy
Chapter 1 - Hunt
Bellas P.O.V
I was currently hunting with Carmen , eversince my family and I moved to Alaska,Denali me and Carmen have been insepreatble . Its not as if I did'nt get along with everybody else , I do belive me . We just have a connection - a friend connection not lesbian connections were both married to males - Edward and Eleazear . My Edward is beyond gorgeous , often compared to a Greek Godest ! The wind blew making the trees rattle , a heavinly scent fload up my nostrails as I sprinted closer to the mouth wartering Grizzly bear . He was starring down a young moose like a human looking at a million dollas . I crouched into my hunting position before poucing on the now starteld bear , bearing my razor -sharp, pearl white teeth . I bit through the fur and fat of the grizzly , sucking out the thirst quenching blood , the undescrible taste flowed quickly down my half burning throat .I was so glad Emmett showed me the Grizzlys I've been hooked . I drained all the blood from its body and found myself sucking on dry air that still lurked in the dead courpse in my bloody , pale hands . Dropping the bear to the floor I drained two artic foxes before feeling fully -satisfied . I would of normaly killed less but I had'nt hunted in two weeks because Alice dragged me shopping - again. I had some uh , alone time with Edward , and spent the rest of the days helping or hanging out with all 13 members of my family . I licked off the remaning blood from my hands and waited for Carmen to finish up.
We were almost at the main house , we heard the low murmurs of our beloved ones that eventuly got louder "Com'on Bro , your just scared incase I whipp ya' ass again !" A humorous voice snickerd . Hhhmmmmm , who could tha- EMMETT !That was the typical Emmett loving , caring and a doofous ! Next I heard a whinning . "Emm man , I told you I was sick of call of duty ! " An unsualy frustraited Jasper complained , there was a giggling that had to be coming from Garrett . Garrett was a mix of both Emmett and Jasper . Goofy , sensible , competetive , calming , cheeky sometimes a little secretive . Carmen and I enterd the door only too bw swooped of our feet by two handsome men " Welcome back Love , I've missed you ! " A familliar voice whisperd in my ear , hearing that voice made my dead heart melt . "I missed you too ! " I replied back smiling at his own crooked smile that i loved ." You look gorgeous as always,Nessie looks equaly as stunning as you sleeping again!"