I've started writing a new fanfic titled (fate/stay night : reincarnation). It wil have some poetic aspects in it, so I'm posting these poems to see how you feel about it. reviews are absolutely essential to the success of my new fanfic. the poems will be updated on a weekly basis, some are from my friends, and some are from the fans.(including me). this experiment will go on until around the end of november. and one more thing, should any of you be interested in sharing some poems feel free to send in your poems on my e-mail[see my profile notify me if you want yours to be posted!!!
well, that's it for now. (send in reviews!)
The distance between us. ( by velvet road)
What have we started…
The moments we shared, the tide of the sea,
The ever prevailing winds of the grassy field…
upon which we couldn't unite.
I saw your graceful looks.
You were standing on the great thrones of the mighty.
Thousands away from my kingdom.
Though our bodies may part, our souls not.
Ah, I see the apparition on my window again..
Turning bleaker every moment
Hast thou art receive my call?
The distant upon which no horse can surmount
And no ship could float on.
We are not real…
Yet we feel….
I speak to myself…
What have we started.
Explanation.
1st paragraph :( life with saber)
2nd paragraph : (Saber's leave.)
3rd paragraph : (few years after saber's depart.)
4th paragraph:(shiro finally gives up (or...maybe not)