Hey guys this is my first left 4 dead story

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"FRANCIS!" Bill yelled. "Get away from those alcohol cans."I'll leave money for it..."

Francis replied. They were in Dallas, Texas in a bar. Bill, Zoey, and Louis were looking for supplies while Francis explored the beer cans. They were traveling to an evacuation center, an abandoned church along the highway. Francis put on a sad face and slumped over. "Hey guys, is it just me, or is the ground shaking?" Zoey said. "OH MY GOD!" Louis yelled. The rest of them whipped around, guns at the ready. "What's wrong Louis?"Francis asked him, already cocking his auto shotgun.(He had screamed like a little girl when he found it at a gun shop.) "PILLS HERE!" he yelled with joy but that scream of joy quickly turned into a yell of terror as soon as he went flying through the air.

"TANK!" They all yelled together. "Told you!" Zoey yelled already firing her hunting rifle. "RAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHH!" The Tank yelled, punching Louis right through the wall. 'BAM BAM BAM BAM BAM BAM BAM.' Went Bill's M16 assault rifle. 'BOOM.' Went Zoey's hunting rifle. Somehow Francis had crept behind the Tank and shot him the back. The Tank turned and looked him in the eyes. "Son of a …" 'BANG!' The Tank punched him right through the roof and over the moon.(At least it looked like that. :D) "Dang it!" Louis said from inside the wall, "He owes me 5 bucks." "Seriously?" Bill asked. "Um, guys, have you forgotten about the Tank?"Zoey asked. "!" The Tank yelled just to emphasize her point. "Oh... right..." Bill said, pulling out a Grenade. "Raaaah...?" The Tank barely squeaked. '!'

They came out from behind the counter. (Only Bill and Zoey, Louis was in a wall and Francis had flown out of a smoking hole in the roof.) Right then they heard a Hunter and the horde. They started pouring through the hole in the door. "Dang it! Where are they coming from?"Yelled Bill. "They must have heard the explosion!" Yelled Zoey. 'BAM BAM BAM BAM BAM BAM BAM BAM BOOM BOOM BOOM' went their guns. "Throwin' a molotov!"Shouted Bill. 'FFFFWWWWWWOOOOOOOOOOOOOOFFF'

All the zombies came running out with their bodies flaming and bits of flesh raining down from the sky.

"It's like a horror movie come alive!"Said Zoey in awe. "Of course you would think that Zoey."said Bill.

So they retrieved Louis out from the wall. "Thanks guys." Louis said. "No problem Lou." "Wait, so... where did the Hunter go?"Zoey asked, confused. Just then they heard screaming for help outside the bar. "Looks like we found our answer."Bill said, loading a brand new clip into his M16. "Let's go."

As they rushed outside the screaming grew louder. After two minutes they realized it was Francis. When they ran to him the Hunter wasn't on him. It was dead and lay about 5 feet away from him. "Francis are you okay?" Louis asked. "I guess so, that wussy jumped me just as I woke up. I socked him and shot with my shotgun." He kicked him and spat at the ground. Just then they heard the hoard scream. "We had better find a safehouse those bugger's aren't going to stay away for long"Zoey troup walked down the alleway. "Look the highway"yelled Louis. And he was right right in front of them was a mass rubble highway." "And a safehouse"said Francis. "And the horde"Zoey said "And a witch right in front of the saferoom"Bill said. RUUUUN!As they sprinted toward the highway they heard a cough. "Dang it's a Smoker watch the rooftop's"said Francis. "CRAP HELP ME." Bill Louis and Francis looked up. Zoey was being hung against a building by the smoker. "Hang on" BOOM Zoey fell down."So how do we get the witch away from the safe room door?" Bill asked.

They all looked at Louis. "Louis do you still have the pills you found in the bar?" Zoey asked. "Yeah why ...oh right." Louis said. He gulped down the pills.

TEN MINUTES LATER

"Nice job Louis taking care of that witch"Francis said. "Yeah it was funny when the witch grabbed Francis's shotgun and tried to kill herself Bill said." Yeah and then grabbed bill's grenade and pulled the pin,i don't think i've ever run that fast in my life Zoey said."They all looked at the door it was probably still smoking on the other side. "Let's take a nap now and continue in the morning"Zoey said