Alla! This is my first story so don't judge...I accept criticism but not too much...also please review! And I'm on an ipad
A brown tabby tom with amber eyes led his clan across a fallen tree trunk, gripping his claws to the bark. "Ambernose, don't step on my tail!" A mew hissed that belonged to a blind gray cat. "Sorry, Jayfeather." The voice replied. "Calm down, Jayfeather. We all make mistakes...some more than others.." A muscular golden Tom mewed, casting a glance at a striped gray Tom. As ThunderClan's leader led the clan down towards the center of the island. Two apprentices raced ahead. One with gray fur and violet eyes while another with orange fur and green eyes. "Whitepaw! Rainpaw!" The two apprentices touched their noses to two ShadowClan apprentices. "Applepaw! Twilightpaw! How are you?" Whitepaw mewed, licking one paw, casually. "Awesome! Just yesterday, We were assessed!" Applepaw replied. "Hopefully Bramblestar will let us become warriors soon!" Twilightpaw added. "Awesome! Guess what?" Rainpaw asked, eyes gleaming. "We got our names three sunrises ago!" Whitepaw flicked her tail, proudly. "I'm Whiteheart." "And I'm now Rainstrike!" Rainstrike answered, with pride. Whiteheart scented the air. "WindClan." She mewed. As the swift warriors came into the Gathering, two other apprentices came ahead of the others. A brown tabby with hazel eyes and a pinkish gray cat with blue eyes. "Flutterpaw! Petalpaw! I assume WindClan is doing well?" The brown cat, Flutterpaw, spoke softly. "Yes, just last night, Heathertail gave birth to two kits!" "That's wonderful news!" Twilightpaw said, touching her nose to Flutterpaw. "Let the Gathering begin!" Mistystar called out, and cats silenced. Mistystar began. "Newleaf has brought us plentiful prey and we have finished rebuilding our camp from the flood." She stepped back and let Onestar, the elderly WindClan leader take her place. "Prey is everywhere and Heathertail gave birth to two new kits in the Nursery a few sunrises ago." Murmurs of congratulations spread around the clans. Rowanstar took his place. "Like WindClan, our prey has been more than enough. We also have two new warriors, Whiteheart and Rainstrike!" "Rainstrike! Whiteheart!" The clans cheered. Bramblestar stepped up to speak from his branch on the pine tree. "One of our apprentices is currently training to be a medicine cat apprentice, Adderpaw!" Bramblestar announced his sons name, proudly. After he spoke, the Clans began to share tongues, as Twilightpaw began to groom Petalpaw she saw a faint outline of a dark blue cat watching her intently before vanishing in a blink.