A year a go Dylan left. None of us know anything more on him. Whether he's dead. Alive. Evil. Good. Fang keeps telling me to stop worry about him.

"Fang I can't stop! Whether you liked it or not, he was still a member of the flock!" I explained for the hundredth time.

"He was never apart of this flock. He was put in here to tear all of us apart." Fang said back, he's been speaking more. Now I'm worried about two things.

"We don't exactly know that."

"I do."

"Explain then, please."

"We all fell apart when he came in to our lives."

"True."

"Believe me now?"

"No." I walked farther in to the forest away from where the flock was sleeping. We were going to go help pack at my mom's house. They're coming to live with us in our house in the mountains.

To my right I heard a branch break.

"Hello?" I called doing a 36 finding nothing.

"Fang?" I called again when no voice called back. Another branch broke, this time to my right. "COME OUT!"

More branches broke, the sound coming closer, both from right and left. After a few minutes with out anyone coming at me, I decided to go back to the Flock. I turned around and screamed. The person covered my mouth with his hand, cutting off my scream.

"Dang, Max." He said. I reached up and took his hand off my mouth.

"What are you doing here, Dylan?" I growled.

"Coming to see my family."

"Get lost. You're not welcome here."

"Max... You and I both know that's not true."

"Dylan, just go away." I stepped around him and started to walk away but he grabbed my arm and pulled me back into his chest. His arms went around me.

"No..."

"Let me go Dylan!"

"No."

"I said let me go!"

"And I say no."

"FANG!"

"Max, shhh." Dylan's hand when over my mouth again.

"Max?" Fang's voice called through the trees. Dylan let me go but before I could yell for Fang, Dylan hit me in the back of the head. I fell already passing out.

Fang:

Me and Max just finished talking and she had walked off, probably for some thinking time. Ten minutes passed before I heard her scream. I woke up Iggy and ran into the forest just as my name was yelled.

"Max?" I finally reach a clearing and found Max face down out cold. I rushed over to her and flipped her over. I felt around her head and felt swelling on the back of her head. I picked her up and walked back to the flock was now all awake. The sun started to rise when Max came through. Angel was over by her wiping Max's forehead with water. Iggy was making everyone food.

I walked over to Angel and Max, just as Max's eyes started to open.

"Hey Max, You okay?" Angel asked.

"Yeah. My head just hurts." Max said sitting up.

"Fang said you had gotten hit on the back of your head."

"Yeah."

"Do you remember what happened before passed out?"

"Not really."

"Oh."

"Breakfast, guys" Iggy said. Me, Angel and Max walked over to the fire to eat.

Okay so new chapter one. I got a really helpful review. So I'm following their advice and fix the pacing. So yeah spelling I'll try to fix, I can't spell really well sometimes, but I'll try to fix it. Thanks so much for the review. Every one else, please review as well. The new first three chapters are going to be short because they are more past wrap ups so you know what has happened in the past.