Memory of Mother
A/N: All right, my first fanfic in a long time and my first fanfic in this account! There are LOADS of spelling/grammar (mostly grammar) mistakes in here, simply because I wanted to write from the eyes of a 9-year old boy (Lucas, and yes, the twins are 9-12 years old in M3). It was kind of tricky to purposely write incorrectly, considering I'm in high school and usually manage an A average in English. Anyway, enjoy, comment, rate, and review! Don't be afraid to be harsh on me, I do need to improve my writing. I haven't gotten very far in M3 considering I just started like two days ago, but feel free to tell me if I make any mistakes. With that, I'll let you go.
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When we went outside of Grandpa Alec's cabin after lunch, me and Claus wanted to play with the Dragos one last time before going home. Mommy said it was ok, so we went to go play.
But when we got there, something was wrong. The cliffs their were all broken and clawed up. Suddenly, a Drago came into the clearing and chased me and Claus. It looked like part of it had been turned into metal. I think it wanted to eat us. But Mommy heard it and came running with a big rock. She threw it at the Drago and it chased her instead. She screamed and yelled at me and Claus. She said that she loved us and for us to get into the river, even though it was fast and we had our clothes on. We all said goodbye. Then me and Claus jumped in the river. It carried us away, and we heard Mommy shout that she loved us one last time before she screamed.
We fell asleep in the river. We woke up on a beach, and it was nite time. The villagers were standing by us, and they wanted to know where our mommy was. Claus told them that she was by a big Drago that tried to eat us. The villagers looked around and mumbled, then made us come with them. I was too scared, but Claus made me go anyway. He hugged me so I wouldn't be as scared. But a few minutes later we were tired so Mr. Jonel picked us up and carried us to a fire. We thought he was going to throw us in but he told us that he would be right back with some blankets so we could let our clothes dry. We thought that if we sat by the fire it would work, but when he came back with the blankets Mr. Jonel told us to hide under them and take off our clothes. I was really embarased. Once we gave him our wet clothes he hanged them on a clothes line to dry. He told us to stay in the blankets until Daddy came and our clothes were dry.
Later that nite, Daddy came into the little camp site and we hugged him. He talked with Mr. Bronson. I heard the last part: "...pierced through your wife's heart," and then started to cry. Then I knew that Mommy was an angel now, just like Claus had told me. Daddy picked up a plank and started swinging it around. He even hit people with it on purpose. I started crying because Mommy wasn't alive anymore and Daddy was being mean. Mommy and Daddy had told us to always be kind to people, no matter what.
Suddenly, Mr. Lighter took the plank from my Daddy and hit him with it really hard. Daddy fell to the ground and stopped moving. I asked Claus if he would be ok. Claus said he didn't know. As the village men started taking Daddy away, I wanted to scream. I didn't. I looked at Claus. He looked scary. I asked him what he was going to do and he said that he would kill the Drago all by himself with Daddy's homemade knife. I asked to come along and he hit me.
Staring at my brother in a scare, I cried and cried while my nose bled and bled. Claus hugged me and tried to tell me he was sorry. I said it was ok but I wish he didn't hit me because that was mean. He also said that it would be ok. I didn't think so.