A note for the readers

My fellow Divergent fans,

Coming from a huge bookworm and die-hard fan of this series I have to be honest with you: I was so disappointed in the end of Allegiant. Not only was I heart broken by the tragic (and quick and stupid) death of Tris, but I was generally upset by the rushed ending and placement of all my favorite characters. As I closed the book I was left thinking, what the fuck was that?
It's not that I couldn't handle Tris dying - I feel like I have to clear that up so I don't get hate mail - if she died in a heroic, bad ass way I would probably be okay with it. But the whole lab rat-Chicago-genetics-shit, quick death (a gunshot wound, really?) and the floppy ending was so awful I felt we got jipped.

So I thought about it. And I came to the only conclusion I could come up with. I have to write an alternate ending or I will drive myself crazy.

A/N: This is the ending everybody deserves. The ending that should have been given to us.

That doesn't mean Four and Tris will run into each others arms like nothing happened. No, we're taking off in the near end of chapter fifty-one in Four's POV. For those who don't remember what happens I will be including VR's direct line lifts until we begin, to make it easier on everyone.

Now some housekeeping before we begin.

Disclaimer

While I may be borrowing dialogue and direct scenes from the book, I do not own anything Divergent. All characters, original story line, all things Divergent belongs to Veronica Roth. I make no claims to her work, I just want to play.

Writing

- POV's will be both Tris and Four respectively.

- There will be a change in voices, mainly because I don't like VR's grammar and I feel like giving this a small change might be for the better. I will still write as close to Tris-voice and Four-voice as possible but don't hold me to it; obviously my voice differs from hers.

- I know a lot of people weren't too big on VR using Tobias more than Four, (she even said she wasn't a fan herself ha ha) especially how he is still Four to Tris in the Divergent film. So I will be using Four more. And you will soon see why. Also, Four is sexy.

- Books/Movies: I love the film almost more than the book so I will be basing this off BOTH, not one of the other.
- Book Four is 18 and Movie Four is 24, but we love Theo James don't we? So 24-Four will be the image you should associate this Fic with. He will still use (almost) the same voice as book Four though, so don't be discouraged so quickly.
- The same rules apply for Tris.

-Romance, yes. There wasn't nearly enough in the books/movies.
-Lemons, who knows. I'm debating.
-Death, I'm not spoiling anything.
-New plot? Offuckingcourse.

Warning

This story will get dark. Why? Because dark is fun and makes your heart beat. I give this a mild M16+ for language, violence, adult behavior references.

Take warning now.

And finally

I'm not making any promises on chapters, because although I have a rough draft I'm not 100% sure how many chapters it will take. If all goes well, I may do a sequel. That's up to you guys.

Chapter lengths will be relatively lengthy and take heed, I love being descriptive. Nothing pleases me more than describing what I see in my mind to you can see it too. Something RV didn't do much.

Be brave.