Sharpstar's Revenge
By: Nightstorm of Terraclan
This is a short story that I made for fun. :)
Chapter 1: It raced down the hill and Sharppaw thumped down after the mouse. He wanted to show his mentor so badly that he could be as good of a hunter as his brother, Maplepaw. Maplepaw had always been better at everything besides fighting, but Sharppaw had been renowned as having huge teeth and being a very good fighter. Sharppaw pounced and crushed the mouse's neck easily with his huge teeth. His mentor came out of the bushes. "I'm impressed." Duskclaw exclaimed. "I think that you're ready to become a warrior." "Thanks!" meowed Sharppaw. This was what he was waiting for! Sharppaw thought.
Chapter 2: Back at camp, Stonestar the leader of LakeClan, was sitting on the Mudstone. "All cats old enough to collect their own moss please come to the Mudstone." Stonestar's voice boomed across the camp. "Today two apprentices have finished their final assessments, Maplepaw please come forward." Maplepaw glanced at me quickly. "Maplepaw, in the power given to me by my ancestors I now ask you if you will cherish Starclan as the clan has for generations." I will." Maplepaw meowed. "Then I hereby name you Maplepelt!" Stonestar turned to Sharppaw. Sharppaw wanted him to hurry up! Sharppaw in the power given to me by my anceste…" "I will!" Meowed Sharppaw impatiently. Stonestar scowled at him. "I now name you Sharpfang!"
Question of the day: What do you think will happen between Sharpfang and Stonestar in the next two chapters?