Hey! This is just a basic outline rewrite of the TASM 2 that I started on! Please enjoy and review! It's just one part, but rest assured there is more to come!
Open on army base in Iraq, where Cadet Max Dillon, an electrical engineer, who is pushed around by his fellow soldiers, is in an accident with a special Oscorp electricity draining device, when they're attacked by terrorists, as he's working on accident causes the device to go haywire and reverses its polarity, which overcharges the electrical impulses in Max's body, paralyzing him. As he lies on the ground convulsing, we zoom into his eye, seeing the overcharged electrical impulses spell out: THE AMAZING SPIDER-MAN 2.
Cut to a montage of Spider-Man saving people and stopping criminals. He runs into a bank robbery being held by the Shocker, who says that he was wondering when Spider-Man would show up. As he does battle with him, and is surprised by his sonic blasts, he gets a call from Aunt May, asking where he is, as his High School Graduation just started. He defeats Shocker, and takes one his gauntlets for study.
Peter makes it to the graduation, just in time. Afterwards he has a talk with Flash, where Flash apologizes to him for all the crap he's put him through. When Peter asks him why he's been so nice to him lately, he says it's because his Father had a heart attack before Peter's Uncle was killed, and when he thought about how awful it would be to lose his Father like that, he sympathized with Peter, and ever since then he's been trying to make his Dad proud. Flash then declares that he's gonna join the army, to be the kind of man that his Dad can be proud of, as his Father was in the army when he was younger. Peter congratulates him. He then tries to talk with Gwen, asking her why she's been avoiding him ever since he told her he would break her Father's promise. She doesn't respond. So, instead he asks her to come by his place to out Shocker's device that he took, hoping she might be able to help him with it. She agrees.
Later, in a talk with May, she expresses her concerns about how he won't have very much money for college. Peter says that with his scholarship he'll be able to get everything he needs for school. She says that she's talking about spending money, for fun. Peter says that he's more worried about her, considering they don't have that much money coming in. May playfully slaps him and says that she's the adult and to let her worry about him. He's uncertain.
Meanwhile, Dr. Ratha reports to Norman Osborn that Shocker has failed in acquiring Spider-Man's DNA. Ratha suggests that he can get it, but Norman dismisses the idea, saying that they'll need more firepower. Ratha says he might know where to get that firepower.
Peter tries to get a job at the Daily Bugle, but can't get an interview with J. J., and his secretary Betty Brant says that he won't be able to unless he can get some pictures of Spider-Man. So, Peter tries, awkwardly, in a montage, to take pictures of himself that look natural, wall-crawling, web-slinging, even one of himself stopping a crime. Peter takes the pictures to J. J. and Robbie Robertson. When they ask Peter how he got these, he lies and says that he just got lucky. They are skeptical, but take them anyway. When Peter asks for a job J. J. laughs in his face and says that if he wants a job he's gonna have to be able to give him a lot more than just pictures of Spider-Man. Robbie pulls J. J. aside and convinces him to allow Peter to work for them, only as freelance though. J. J. then tells Peter that if he wants a steady paycheck he'll have to be to steady in his photos because he's not giving charity. They give him his check and send him on his way.
Ratha visits a paralyzed Max Dillion in the hospital, and offers him a deal: Do what they want and Oscorp will make it so he can move again. He agrees.
There! What do you think so far? Please review!