My Little Brother
A story about Mappa Douji and Ohachiyo.
Chapter one: What's with the burned down house?
"You are always here alone... Can you see our existance?"
Ohachiyo is a demon. A human spirit who turned into a demon after his death, because of some horrible things he has done. He turned into a little white creature with three 'ears' and a very small horn it's head. But he didn't mind though, he liked his new appearance. Allthough he was somewhat small.
He has been wandering for two-hundred years with the other demons who ravage through villages and scaring the people. However, on one of his strayings he encoutered a little boy who got lost in the shadows of a burned down house. His hair covered his emotions from the demonic crowd. Every now and then Ohachiyo passes the house and everytime the little boy was there. The white demon always looked for him and on one day saw that the eyes of the boy were following the demons with a spiteful look, but Ohachiyo could not believe he was actually 'looking' at them for humans could not see demons... At least, not all of them.
Ohachiyo left the group of demons and began shadowing the long-haired spiteful kid for he wanted to know more about him. 'Can he really see us? Why is he looking like that? And what's with that burned house he's always at?' These questions always crossed his mind, but no anwsers could be found. Not yet.
Sorry this one's a bit short! I first want to see if my story attracts attention. Please review!