Hey my first story EVER! please review and tell me what to improve on and how you like it so far. i also need help on weather or not i should include the guys in this please help
I dont own naruto =] i wish i did tho...
She talks like this cause she can back it up. (Now known as I Spy )
Sakura H. A pretty girl with pink hair to her shoulder, loves music of every kind most mostly listens to rock, has green eyes and can sleep until 3 pm. She also hates being insulted and has in human strength. AGE 16
Hinata H. Has purple hair to her mid waist and stunning white eyes. She is kind and easy going a perfect person to go to when you down or need advice. It may not seem like it but Henata listens to mostly rock music with a touch of classic symphonies. AGE 16
Ino Y. she has Blond hair that is mostly in a pony tail and has bright blue eyes. Ino enjoys shopping and dressing up anyone who will let her. Since people see Ino as a dumb blond they never really get to now the real Ino. She loves listening to rock and a touch of country. NOT much but what can she say Taylor Swift has gotten to her. AGE 16
Tenten. Long brown hair that is mostly in 2 buns. She has gorgeous light brown eyes she enjoys listening to rock and basically anything else. She is the closest to Sakura in the group and loves sharp things. So you really shouldn't piss her off. AGE 17
Temari. Dirty blond hair that is in four pony tails. She has Dark eyes and is the oldest out of the group. She also is a pain when shes mad and can probably beat up anyone who gets in her way.
STORY STARTS HERE
"Are you girls sure about this?" Asked a concerned looking man.
"HELL YEAH" Screamed Sakura and Temari at the same time.
The man shrugged, "alright but it's your funeral."
"YES!" they yelled in unison
Ino looked rather bored and Tenten and Hinata looked jealous.
"NO FAIR! I wanna go with Temari!" Yelled Tenten
"NOOO you went last time with her! It's my TURN !" shoot back Sakura
The girls continued to yell at each other while the man just looked at them like they where crazy. What kind of girls who look like THAT wanna risk their lives just to street race?
"Alright this race is a no rules race. Anything goes. I mean anything." He warned hoping they would change their minds.
At this Temari's grin grew bigger.
"Oh don't worry about us we will be fine." She reassured the man
The man shrugged yet again and left them. When he did leave Ino looked at Sakura and Temari and gave them the Don't-do-anything-to-stupid-to-embarrass-me-look-especial when-their-cute-boys-around.
Sakura smirked. Whatever Temari had planed would probably be stupid and dangerous and that's why she and Tenten always argued on who gets to race with her. At this thought she turned and looked at Tenten who, as predicted, was glaring at Sakura. Sakura's smile grew even bigger.
"Sakura you bitch! I wanna go with her!" Tenten growled.
"Your just jealous, and I'm not a bitch you hag." She shoot back
"AHH I hate you"
"I hate you too"
"Alright I get that you hate each other but we should get my baby to the starting point." Said Temari with a look that told them she was not going to be late for the race.
"Whatever just don't lose we will be watching you from over there." Said Ino starring at very cute boys who where watching the girls with some interest. She waved at them in a flirty way and practically dragged Hinata away with her.
"Umm good luck and make sure you win, it will be disappointing if you lose to a bunch of boys." Hinata managed to say before she was dragged away by Ino.
Tenten was still giving Sakura hated-ful glares. Sakura in return gave her a big smile.
"TENTEN HURRY UP!" Yelled Ino
Tenten flinched she did not want Ino mad at her.
"Whatever. Just don't lose kay." She said and left Sakura and Temari with the god like vehicle.
"gosh I thought she would never leave!" laughed Sakura.
"Hn" was Tamari's reply while she got into her baby.
Did I mention that her baby was SSC Ultimate Aero in red of course. ( If u wanna see a pic check out the link at the bottom)
"Ready to get high on the biggest level possible?" Asked Temari looking just as excited as a 3 year old in a candy store.
"Did you really need to ask?" Said Sakura excitement in her eyes as she climbed in to the passenger seat of the SSC ULTIMATE AERO.
Temari smirked 'this is going to be fun' she thought. And then she gently hit the peddles of the car and it started moving so smoothly that it felt like it hadn't moved at all. But in reality they where probably were going 90km h .
As she reached the starting point of the race she looked around to see most of the boy's envying her car. She frowned. She didn't want the boy's looking at her car like that. It was her baby but she couldn't help but feel proud. So she just winked at them and continued to wait for the race to begin.
Sakura on the other hand looked like she was going to explode out of excitement. She was only 16 and Shizune didn't buy her a car yet. Since Temari was the oldest she was the one to get her car first, but just don't call her baby a car. Temari prefers to call it her baby and she has good reason to. The speed and beauty of this baby made it a god.
Meanwhile
"Oh Raikage-kun yours so strong" flirted Ino.
Tenten had just arrived and already she wanted to barf. Ino was the flirty type but she never really was serious with any of them. All she did was flirt with them for about 5 minutes move on and forget the last. She was never serious when it came to boys and half the stuff she told them where lies. In reality Ino loved sports and loved so goof off but she also liked to shop and dressing in certain outfits that showed a little too much skin. The boys would go gaga over her and she basically played them.
"ahaha your so funny Raikage- KUN" Ino's laugh had snapped Tenten out of her thoughts. She saw Hinata standing by herself and avoiding the eyes of the group of boy's Ino was flirting with.
"Hey Hina whats uppers?" (I say that a lot) Asked Tenten
"Hmm… oh nothing I'm just waiting for the race to start."
The thing about Hinata was when she was around the girls she never strutted, in fact she hardly ever strutted anymore. Only when she was nervous or when she met a guy that she found cute that her stutters came back. Tenten mused on how much Hinata had changed since they first meet. Tenten chuckled. Hinata looked at Tenten with a questioning look.
"Whats so funny?" she asked
"Nothing just…thinking…" Tenten replied hoping she wouldn't be caught thinking of their past.
"HMMmm say Tenten you have matured." Hinata said with a huge smile
"I HAVE?" asked Tenten genuinely surprised.
"Yeah its been 5 minuets and you haven't spazed over not being in the race with Temari-chan"
"OHHhh well know that you mention it…HEY SAKURA YOU LITTLE BITCH I WILL GET YOU BACK YOU HEAR ME I WILL GET YOU BACK!" Tenten yelled on top of her lungs
Hinata just sighed.
Tenten smiled. "See that's what happens when you call me mature" she laughed.
Ino glared at her friend 'what was she thinking; now half the guys here won't come near me.'
Tenten smiled and stuck out her tongue at Ino who almost attacked her at that moment. If it weren't for all the boys around she would have but then her true personality would have shown.
"HMM did you hear something?" Asked Sakura
Temari looked at her and shook her head.
'I must be imagining things.' Thought Sakura.
Temari looked around and saw her competition. To her left there was a guy who had a dark blue Lamborghini Murcielago LP640 the windows tainted back so she couldn't see who was inside, beside the Lambo was a silver Jaguar XJ220 to her right was a black Saleen S7 twin-Turbo again tinted windows. 'I have to get one of those later' Temari thought to herself.
Just then a voice started booming around them.
Temari smirked 'its time to show these boys what a girl can do with a sexy car like mine'
"Alright the race is about the begging…Everyone get ready. Let me warn you that we are not responsible for and injuries or deaths so this is at your own risk. The winner wins 80G."
'Hell yeah' thought Sakura
"So get ready"- engines started purring- "and"- intense purring- "GO!"-car ties protesting as the race started.
Hey GUYS AL RIGHT my FIRST CHAPTER EVAAA!
here are the link to see these really secxy cars!
OO and in my story the girls work for their money but since they are under age Shiznu has the rights to give it to them or not. So until the girls turn 18 no one gets to speed their money on something she does not approve of. it took Temari a LONG LONG time to convince Shizna to buy that BABY ( the car)
.com/images/aero_ SSC
. Saleen this one is red in the story its black
./_ Jaguar
/zdjecia_ Lambo
PLEASE REVIEW and tell me what to improve on ALSO i need help i havent been racing yet so i need some help on what can happen durring the race! i have some idea but i would like more !