hi guys. just to let you all know that im not dead, i was re-reading my story and i wasn't happy with it let me tell you that. i noticed some gaping holes that contradict some of the ideas for later chapters which i now have to work out. i also noticed that my prologue was effing awful! i literally cringed reading it. i have a new prologue in the wings(almost done with that) and i'm probably gonna continue rewriting the existing chapters before i continue with the story. i am going to take down my poll(since it seems to have no use) and i'll flesh out the storyline for all options and then i'll hopefully find out which one i like best. i can't however promise consistent updates nor can i promes frequent ones. my way of writing is irritating i know but i have no idea on how to improve it. me writing stuff is a cycle of steps: 1) get a brainwave. 2) write until the story idea i just got is exhausted. 3) have no clue on what to write for several weeks. 4)return to step 1. as you can see this is not a great way to write, definitely not when posting online. anyway i guess this is it right now, while the updates may be super slow i will not abandon this story. if anyone has ideas on how to improve my writing please let me know. now, next time i write it will hopefully be my rewritten prologue and it will have less mistakes(punctuation/grammar or otherwise). thnxx guys/gals N