Charmed Challenge

I was REALLY disappointed with the way Kill Billie: Volume Two ended...I've always been really bothered by the fact that Piper never told Paige sge loved her, and never really cared for her the way she cared for Phoebe. When Piper left the manor with Leo without bothering to look for Paige's body at the end of this episode, I felt the writer's were embarrasing Paige's character. The challenge is to re-write the scene in which Piper finds Phoebe's corpse, then leaves with Leo.

If anyone is interested in writing it, please let me know.

I can't really think of any prize, so I'd say anything you want. Plus a giant cyber cookie! D

Also, I'm looking for a well written fic where Phoebe dies instead of Prue at the end of Season 3. Anyone know of any? It would be extremely appreciated!

Thanks!