Episode 1 "Manhunt"
Author's Note (VERY IMPORTANT! YOU MUST READ THIS!): Hey there all you rainbow cloud believers! So I adopted this story from SilentScreaming1944 and have been hard at work editing it into something of my own and changing it in little ways so that it's not completely different from the original, but it's still my own. I hope you like the new improved version of this story cause so far Silent likes it, and it was her story to begin with! Also, my friend (who I know in real life) Field Empathy was helping me edit this. (She rage quit for some odd reason though...) What's weird is she doesn't even like the show! (I honestly can't see why she wouldn't! The show is AMAZING!) Also, I'm going to try and set this story up so that each chapter is an episode and I'll be adding in more stuff so that there's more character development for the characters voted off early. There will also be commercials in the chapters for other stories that I think you should read so if you want to leave suggestions for other stories for me to advertise, that would be AWESOME!
Stories advertized in this chapter (in order)
-Athena: written by RainbowCloudArt (myself) (on fictionpress)
-Outcast: written by SilentScreaming1944 (original owner of this story) (on fictionpress)
-Total Drama Forest: written by mouse80 (on fanfiction)
Also, another little note, I will still have you guys vote once I get episode 3 up by using the poll thingy, so keep an eye out for that because it will let you know who you can vote for! However, if you don't have an account and can't vote that way, you can always vote in a review. Though, if I need a specific character to be voted off to follow the plot of the story, I will be sure to let you know in the beginning Author's Note of the story so that you don't think I'm just denying your ability to vote. Remember when Harold sabotaged the votes to get Courtney off in season 1, what if I have something like that happen (which I most likely will at some point for added drama), then I can't have you vote just to change it to have some other character voted off! That would be harsh! Or, if I'm trying to lean towards a certain character being voted off, I might not let you vote if I'm not sure you'll vote for them or not, though I think most of you will vote for a reason, right? You wouldn't just vote at random, would you?
Anyway, if you have any ideas as to what the challenges should be, let me know because that would be a great help!
Also, this thing is seriously about 30 pages on word!
On with the story!
Disclaimer: I do not own Total Drama, or the characters that aren't Owen, Richard, or John. I own only those three. I give complete credit to the creators of all things that aren't mine. Also, I might end up using some colorful language (even though I never curse in real life), so if you don't want your characters to curse, let me know as soon as possible. If you don't contact me about this, I'll just let your character curse. Okay?
"What's up everybody! I'm your charming host, Chris McLean, here spending yet another eight or so weeks with a whole new cast. This time, we are back at Camp Wawanakwa after it has recently been cleaned of all traces of toxic waste that were here last season. So now that the health department has deemed this island habitable again, our producers decided, 'why not make a totally new season of Total Drama?' And this time we have a whole new cast... again... And look, here's the first boat now!" Chris cheers.
An old boat rides up and dumps off a shorter boy. The boy stumbles all the way over to the other side of the dock, tiredly dragging an overstuffed black duffle bag behind him.. He's more on the shorter side, and has a gap toothed smile that soon fades once he sees Chris.
"Danny! Dude, what's up?" Chris says in his cheery voice.
"Uh…the sky?" Danny asks, unsure of how to respond to the overly friendly greeting.
Chris stares at him blankly. "Moving On…our next contestant, Roxy, has arrived!'
A shorter girl wearing a blue tank top underneath a white hoodie, black jeans and white flats; hops off the boat. She has waist long light brown curly hair and side bangs, pale blue eyes, and fair skin.
"Hey Chris…" Roxy drawls, sounding a little bit bored.
"Hey Roxy, go stand over there." Chris declares, pointing over to the dock. She walks over, and becomes immediately grossed out, because Danny has his finger up his nose. She gags and stands as far away from him as possible.
The next boat's going a little too fast and a very nauseous looking girl hobbles off the boat. She has dark skin; long, wavy black hair; and honey, hazel colored eyes.
"Trudi! How are you doing?" Chris greets, sporting his million dollar smile.
"Not- so- good-." Replies Trudi, holding her stomach.
"Too bad. Now go stand over there." Chris orders, his smile morphing into something eerily sadistic.
Trudi reluctantly staggers over to to other side of the dock.
A very loud boat pulls up and three people get off. Two guys, and one girl.
"Of all the people I had to be stuck here on this TV show, it had to be you two pompous jerks!" Complains the female. She is shorter than the two guys by a few inches, and has thick, curly, coffee brown hair that reaches her collarbone, with side bangs and layers. She has pale skin and icy blue eyes.
"You're not much better, Owen!" Yells the shorter of the two males, even though he still has a few inches over her. He has short, slightly scruffy chocolate brown hair and blue-green eyes.
"Shut up, Richard!" Owen growls as she storms over to the other campers.
"Do I get a say in this argument?" Jokes the other boy with a smirk. He's taller than Richard by a few inches, has caramel brown hair, and chocolate brown eyes.
"Zip it, John!" Owen and Richard yell in unison before glaring at each other.
"Owen, Richard, John! Glad you could make it in one piece!" Jokes Chris, ignoring the eye daggers that are thrown his way.
Another boat pulls up, revealing a rather dark and dreary person.
She has a blood red tank top under a black leather mini jacket, black skinny jeans and dark red converse.
"Marcel! What's happenin?" Chris cheers, attempting to sound cool and failing.
Marcel just stares at him flatly. Then walks over and stands beside John, who offers a half-hearted wave.
A very loud, musical boat pulls up and a boy with an electric guitar over his shoulder hops off.
"Hello, Total Drama!" Booms Kevin.
"Hello Kevin!" Mimics Chris.
Kevin walks over to the rest of the contestants and smiles at them. He mostly receives blank stares.
His smile slowly fades.
~Commercial Break~
I'm Samantha. Known as The Psycho to the rest of the world. My mom used to tell me that I was just like her when she was little, but she didn't know my secret identity.
A young girl with black wavy hair and icy blue eyes is seen running across the rooftops of tall city buildings that eerily kiss night sky.
When I was younger I worked as an assassin for my dad's society alongside my brother Griffin. Being that we had mastered the art of sorcery, as well as many different weapons made us some of the deadliest assassins in the world.
Psychotic brown and green patterns that were splattered over her skin become visible as her eyes begin to glow a vibrant purple color.
My dad trained us day in and day out to be cold blooded killers, and let's just say I did a lot of things that I'm not proud of.
*Lighting flash*
A small room is now seen where the mayor of the city, a pudgy man with salt and pepper hair, is lost in a sound sleep.
*Lightning flash*
The young mystic girl appears at the mayor's bedside instantaneously, laughing with an evil grin plastering her scarred face. She then quietly leans over the sleeping old man and softly whispers "Boo".
"Whaaaa!" The old man yelled in a startle. "A little girl? What is this, some sort of twisted prank?"
The girl smiled innocently and shook her head "Oh no, Mr. Mayor. I could never prank anyone."
She then teleports to the other side of the mayor's bed and taps his shoulder.
"W-wait a minute." The mayor stuttered. "I've heard of you before. Aren't you The Psy-psy-..."
"You don't even want to know!" the Psycho screamed as she smashed his head murderously with a hammer.
Later that night when Dad got home, he explained to us that our mom had been killed in a car crash that day on the way home from work, and that I'd never see her again.
After losing our mom, Griffin snuck me off to live with another family under a different name because he didn't think it was good for me to think the things I did were okay.
The morning sun shines radiantly through a school window upon dozens of drowsy elementary school students.
The teacher walks to the front of the classroom and folds her hands together."Class, I have exciting news! We have a new student today! I would like you to meet Owen Roberts."
Just then the girl with dark wavy hair and icy blue eyes enters the room looking bored and unimpressed.
"You can go take a seat next to Alecia." The teacher instructed gesturing towards a preppy looking girl that was studying quietly in the back of the classroom.
I had to learn to live like a regular girl, and protected my secret at all costs.
Owen is carrying her bags and walking alongside a young lady in her twenties. The lady bent down so that she was eye level with the young girl and looks directly into her eyes.
"Mart and Jane may not be able to see through your little act, but I do. Now please tell me, Samantha, why are you really here?" she yelled venomously.
A look of worry spread across Owens face "Who's Samantha?"
"You know damn right who you are and you know that I know so why bother trying to hide the fact that you're The Psycho?" the lady hissed.
"Excuse me, but I'm not The Psycho! Why would you think that?" Owen questioned innocently.
The lady brushed her hair back over her shoulder, "I've been following you around for a while now. I've seen you without your mask. Just admit it so I can send you off to—"
"Your time is up." Owen yelled insanely in an authentic Russian accent.
The chandelier conveniently located above the lady started to shake.
Owen smiled and gave an innocent wave as the chandelier crashed down on her, crushing her.
Owen laughed as blood poured over the floor.
And though I tried to leave my old life as the Psycho behind me, the past has a funny way of catching up with you...and when you least expect it.
Owen is gracefully performing the violin on stage in front of a large audience in a dressed up, pompous concert hall. When suddenly...
Crash!
A boy with dark brown hair and blue-green eyes wearing a superhero costume crashes into the hall through the skylight and lands on the stage in a thud, followed by Griffin and their father.
The older man smiled "Samantha, you've certainly grown weak during your little... hiatus." He then dragged the girl off to the wing of the stage and let her go. Owen turned to face the dark man in a fighting stance. "Let's see how much you remember from your hand-to-hand combat training, shall we?" he continued in a drunken stutter.
The two began to brawl. Owen had the upper hand and was clearly winning the fight when she was lifted off the ground by some invisible force right as she was about to be incinerated.
Another hero, a sorceress was now in combat with the old man, but was losing the battle quickly.
As the man went to strike down the sorceress with a final blow, Owens eyes beamed a light periwinkle and the man began to hunch over moaning in pain.
"Come out, come out, wherever you are!" The man sang psychotically. "I know you're here, Psycho, so why don't you come out and play with the new heroes? They're lots of fun!"
"The Psycho's here?" The sorceress asked sarcastically. "Isn't she dead?"
The man smiled sadistically "That's what we wanted you to think. Besides, someone with as much power as her could never die. She is the strongest of our entire kind"
I have changed my ways since I was a child and have even joined a team of hero's.
An older looking Owen is seen dressed as a masked archer and is fighting off a monster alongside three other heroes'
They are the greatest friends anyone could ever ask for. I can't even count how many times they have saved my butt... literally.
One of the hero's with dark brown hair and blue-green eyes is seen carrying a deathly looking Owen in his arms at lightning speed.
"I'm tired." She muttered weakly.
"Hey! C'mon, stay with me!" The speedy hero's voice pleads frantically.
"Why?" She asked lazily.
"You almost died! I thought you were dead!" He practically screamed his voice cracking.
They have been there with me through the thick and thin of things, good times and bad.
If they only knew about my past...knew about all the terrible things I've done...
But they won't.
That is a secret I will take with me to my grave... Samantha's grave.
My name is Owen Roberts, and I am The Teen Archer.
~End of Commercial Break~
"Welcome back to Total Drama Camp Wawanakwa! I'm your host, Chris McLean. And we're back with 8 of our not so lovely contestants!" Chris McLean announces.
"Who are you calling 'not so lovely', McLean! Let's see who's really not so lovely after this!" Yells Owen as she throws her shoe at him. In his failed attempt to duck, he loses his balance and falls head first into the water.'
"AHHH! My hair!" Chris screams, frantically splashing around.
A laughing Roxy and K haul Chris out of the water. He regains his footing and resumes the show.
"After that random act of insanity." Chris begins as he throws Owen her sopping wet shoe. "I suggest we get on with the show!" He immediately returns to his regular cheery attitude.
A tall, slightly muscular, pale boy hops off the boat with big broad smile, his spiky, darkish blonde hair going every which way.
"Andrew! What's up, man!" Chris calls, still soaked all the way down to the bone.
"Hey Chris, nice to meet you. I'm really excited to be here!" Exclaims Andrew as he walks over to where most of the girls are standing.
"Hello ladies." Andrew says in what he probably thinks of as being seductive yet charming, but really seems more creepy.
Roxy and Trudi slowly back away while Owen gets all up in his face.
"Talk to me like that again, and let's see what happens." Owen threatens darkly, her icy glare cutting right through his soul, scaring the bejeezus out of him.
"Whoa, whoa, whoa! Calm down, I was just kidding!" He says nervously, putting his hands up in front of his face and backing away.
"Sure you were." Owen says sarcastically as she turns, crossing her arms in annoyance.
"Dude, you shouldn't mess with Owen!" Richard says between laughs, pointing at Andrew.
"Wow, drama already!" Chris says, looking surprised. "Oh well, our next contestant has arrived!"
The next boat pulls up, but no one is there.
"Strange. I thought for sure someo-" Chris starts before he gets cut off.
"RAHHHHHHHHH!" Yells a figure, popping its head out from behind a trapdoor on the boat.
"AHHH!" Chris screams, much like a little girl.
"I sure got you, McLean!" Laughs a tall girl with long, wavy black hair under a black graffiti baseball cap.
"You did not!" Chris says defensively, wagging his finger in a chastising manner towards the girl. "Anyways, this is Ivy everybody!" Chris declares, returning to his normal cheery voice.
"Hey everyone!" Ivy cackles, a devilish grin spreading across her face. She then casually walks up next to Andrew. "Nice to meet you! I'm Ivy." Ivy holds her hand out to Andrew.
"Nice to meet you too, Ivy. I'm single- I mean Andrew." He says, reaching out to shake her hand.
When their hands meet, Andrew receives a jolt of electricity from Ivy's concealed hand shocker.
"Ow! What was that for?" Andrew whines, rubbing his hand gently.
"Oh nothing, I just thought it would be funny!" She cheers, smiling sadistically at him. He then proceeds to glare at her as Chris bursts out laughing.
"That was priceless! I wish we got that on tape! Oh wait, we did!" Chris exclaims as another boat arrives. A boy with a plain red t-shirt, black pants and brown sneakers hops off the boat with his hands in his pockets, whistling proudly.
"Okay, I'll give, what did you do?" Roxy asks sarcastically.
"Me? I just like whistling is all. In the last twenty four hours, has it become a crime or something?" The boy jokes as he walks up to Roxy, waiting for an answer.
"What? No it hasn't." She states, looking very confused and a little ticked off.
"I thought so. I'm Dryden by the way, and you are?" He asks, a grin forming on his face.
"Roxy, my name's Roxy. Nice to meet you Dryden." She says, grinning slightly as well.
"Okay, okay, enough of the meet and greet! I want to get done with this before Chef starts cooking!" Chris grumbles in annoyance.
A rather broken down, rusty old boat barely makes it's way over to the dock before breaking down. A smaller girl with long, thick, wavy, ombre, belly length hair with pinned up side bangs climbs off of the boat avoiding the slowly crumbling boat stairs.
"Alyson! Boy am I glad that boat didn't fall apart before you got here." Chris jokes as she directs an icy glare his way.
"I am not in the mood, McLean. Not in the mood." She shoots fiercely back at him.
"I can respect that." He replies, reassuring her that all is well.
A small boat arrives next and a girl and a boy hop off. The girl isn't paying attention as the boy rambles on about stuff.
"I just don't see why you even wanted to be on this show, Shae… It's just gonna be a lot of drama..." The boy states, sounding a little ticked off.
"Well, unlike you, Tanner, I wanted to be on this show." Shae replies in irritation.
"I wanted to come here too, Shae! You don't know everything about me!" He replies, defending his pride.
"I actually do, Tanner. You are my twin brother after all." Shae snaps.
"Naïve!" He taunts.
"Vulnerable!" She replies firmly.
"Lunatic!" He yells, completely losing his last nerve.
"Retarded!" She yells vehemently, getting in his face with the worlds most deadly scowl on her face.
"Okay, okay, settle down! I still have six more campers to introduce and we're burning precious heat!" Chris says as Shae goes over and stands next to Marcel and Roxy. Tanner stomps over and stands next to Andrew and Dryden, crossing his arms.
A rather colorful, shorter girl with light blonde hair. But what really stands out are the different color streaks in her hair; she has fiery orange and purple streaks on one side, and poison green and turquoise on the other side, but it suits her nicely.
"Lex! Wow you look really colorful!" Beams Chris as he just stares at the many colors mixed into her head.
"Thanks Chris! I'm excited to be here with everybody!" She says, sounding unnaturally cheerful.
She walks up to Marcel and sticks out her hand.
"Hi! I'm Lex. What's your name?" She asks, awaiting an answer from Marcel.
Marcel just glares at her, signaling for her to continue on and leave her alone.
"Okay..." Lex says, moving on to Andrew who quickly starts a conversation.
A boat that looks surprisingly better than the rest pulls up and a very handsome boy wearing a simple white t-shirt, blue jeans, and converse shoes hops off the boat.
"Hello Desmond! Very glad you could make it!" Cheers Chris, beaming his million-dollar smile.
"I am very glad to be here, Chris." Replies Desmond as he walks over to the now fawning girls.
"Hello ladies, and may I say it is an honor to be here with fine girls such as yourselves." He says with a very Alejandro like fraise.
"Drop dead you skeez." Marcel warns, shooting a deadly glare his way.
"Mademoiselle, I am sorry if I have offended you. Please accept my most sincere apologies." He requests, taking a few steps towards her.
"Let me think about that... Nope. I know your type, you're the type of person like that Alejan-dork person from season three!" She states, watching his smile quickly fizzle into a blank look.
"Mademoiselle, I promise you-" He begins but is cut off.
"She said zip it, so leave her alone, creep." Owen says defensively as she stands beside Marcel, throwing a deathly glare at the Alejandro wannabe.
"Even more drama and its not even two o'clock! But we still have four more people coming." Chris declares between laughs, breaking up the growing tension.
A boat pulls up and an average height girl walks off, she has on a t-shirt with a triforce on it, skinny jeans, and black converse.
"Holly! How's the gaming going?" Chris jokes.
"Very good, thanks for asking." She replies sarcastically.
"You know I was just kidding, right?" Chris asks.
"Yep, I just wanted to see if you could figure out that I was joking too." She replies, crossing her arms and walking over to the crowded dock.
"Um… okay." Chris says, a little confused about what just happened.
A boy is shoved off of the same boat, looking slightly agitated. He's wearing a simple long sleeved shirt, dark blue jeans, and gray sneakers which went nicely with his short, light blond hair.
"Jeremy! Why so agitated?" Chris asks, smirking at the new arrival.
"Well, first things first, I had to share a boat with a girl who wouldn't stop talking about her video games and I wasn't able to finish reading my poetry piece!" Jeremy complains, picking up his notebook and trudging over to stand with the other contestants.
"You can read your 'oh-so-precious' poetry later, Jerry!" Holly says in an impatient manner.
"First of all; it's Jeremy, not Jerry; and secondly, poetry is way more precious than your boring video games!" He corrects incredulously.
"Moving on. Our second to last boat is almost here, so go stand over there and shut up!" Chris commands.
A very pine scented boat pulls up and off hops a blond haired, blue-eyed girl. She's wearing a ocean blue, denim shirt and a hooded jumper.
"Myst! How's the whole 'Ice Age Obsession' going for you?" Jokes Chris.
"Shut it, McLean! Ice Age is way better than your stupid two dollar hairdo!" Myst shoots back.
"Harsh much…." Replies Chris with a fake 'I'm hurt' look on his face.
The last boat is just coming into sight when Holly lunges at Jeremy. Owen and Marcel start yelling at Desmond, and Andrew starts flirting with Trudi who quickly pushes him away and accidentally running into Kevin. During all of this, Roxy is frantically trying to calm everyone down and failing, and Dryden is slowly breaking up the fights.
Suddenly, Roxy loses it. "Will everyone please just shut up!" She screams, loud enough to break up the entire kerfuffle. "I am sick and tired of all this stupid fighting! Can we just accept our differences until the end of this freaking episode!" She's almost breaking into tears by this point.
There are 'okay's', 'fine's', and some nods.
"Thank you…" She sounds extremely out of breath and tired from all of the bickering and fighting. It isn't until a rather tall person walks up to them that everything goes silent.
"Um… am I at the wrong camp?" Asks a very confused looking boy.
"Nope! You're at the right place, Vince!" Chris exclaims. "And you're the final camper, so that means it's time to divide up the teams and team captains!" Chris cheers.
AT THE CAMPFIRE PIT
"Okay when I call your name come stand over here…" Chris starts before listing off the names. "Holly."
"Cool." Holly says with a nod.
"Ivy"
"Woohoo!" Ivy tackles Holly with a hug, screaming into her ears.
"Desmond"
"Thank you, Chris." Desmond says respectfully before walking over to join the group.
"Trudi"
"Awesome…I guess…" Trudi says, looking unsure of whether it really was awesome or not.
"Jeremy"
"Cool." Jeremy nods.
"Lex"
"Coolness." Lex says with a smile.
"Danny"
"T-that's cool…." Danny says nervously, appearing to be scared of Ivy already.
"Andrew"
"Mr. A is in the House! Booyah!" Andrew cheers, slinging an arm around Danny's shoulders and leading him over to join the group.
"Aly"
"Sweet." Aly says with a smile.
"Myst"
"Thanks…" Myst mumbles, not seeming as though she's sure if she'll like her team or not.
"You will be known as…The Screaming Rebels!" Chris announces as one of his interns hands Holly a flag. The flag depicts a fist. "Okay, again when I call your name, come stand over here… Marcel" Marcel glares at Chris.
"Richard"
"Awesome!" Richard cheers, punching a fist in the air for no reason.
"Owen"
"Chris, did you really have to put me on the same team as these two dweebs?" Owen asks in annoyance, pointing at Richard and John.
"Hey!" Richard and John yell in unison.
"Yes, yes I did." Chris says with an evil grin. "Plus, seeing as you hate Richard, it will help add more drama! Next, Shae"
"Whatever." Shae says with a shrug.
"Roxy"
"I hope they don't fight a lot…" Roxy says nervously, twiddling her thumbs.
"John"
"Sweet!" John says with a nod.
"Kevin"
"Kevin is a rockin'!" Kevin practically screams, strumming his air guitar.
"Dryden"
"Cool." Dryden says blankly, not really caring which team he's on/
"Vince"
"Um…..Cool?" Vince says, a sense of unease finding it's way into his voice.
"And Tanner"
"Did I really have to be the last one chosen Chris?" Tanner asks in annoyance.
"Yes, yes you did Tanner." Chris replies, not even caring caring. "You will be known as… The Killer Maces!"
~Commercial Break~
Running. Running away. I'm sorry guys... I should've saved you instead...
Ayden. Winning wasn't worth it all... I now bear the burden of telling Emmie... She loved you Ayden. I'll never forgive myself.
Amber. You were so close. So very very close. I'm sorry... Style was your passion, your talent. No one can ever match your level of fashion. I am proud to be called your friend... Even though I don't deserve it.
Brooke. Oh Brooke. He loved you. We all loved you! I should've done it instead of you... I'm sorry... Good Bye...
Ethyn. Run Ethyn! I'm happy at least one of you guys escaped! I'm so terribly sorry about your companion though. She was like a sister to me... Good Luck.
Elliott. There aren't words to describe my mixed feelings towards you... Hope, Care, Sympathy... Love... But most importantly I hope your safe from harm's reach... Stay safe Elliott... Good Luck...
Ash. I'm terribly sorry about Amber and Summer... You shouldn't have taken that blow instead of Summer... It was her destiny! You could've been fine... Good Bye Ash.
Those are the people who taught me to have fun and relax a bit. Those are the people who answered my call for help. Those were the people who deserved life instead of death or torture. Those six teens changed my life! And in return I destroy them... I lose them... I hurt them... I, am the Outcast...
~End of Commercial Break~
"Welcome Back to TDCW! I'm your handsome host, Chris McLea-" Chris starts, but he gets cut off by Owen... again...
"Can we just get on with the stupid show already?" Owen asks, glaring at Chris for no particular reason.
"Never cut me off when I'm doing the intro!" Chris yells, defending his 'host ship'.
Owen growls as she throws her shoe at him again, once again hitting him square in the chin.
"Ow! Stop doing that!" Chris screeches, rubbing his chin that's now red.
"Bull's eye!" Richard and John cheer in unison, fist-bumping each other.
"Shut up you two!" Owen growls, elbowing Richard and knocking him over. John starts snickering, but quickly shuts up when Owen glares at him.
"Moving on! This is the campfire pit where the unlucky campers will be kicking someone off this island, and they can never come back, ever!" Chris recites, practically from memory.
"'Ever'? As in like Izzy and Eva from season one 'ever'? They came back after they were booted off." Lex states dryly.
"Yeah. If they came back, then how should we know your not pulling our legs?" Holly asks, crossing her arms and glaring at Chris.
"Alright, fine! I don't always say stuff I mean, but would you all just shut up so I can continue on with my show!" Chris demands, looking defeated. He then leads them over to a dingy little shack. "This is the confessional, where you can say things that are on your mind or reveal your dirt and other things about your fellow campers." Chris explains, pointing to the old, smelly shack-esque outhouse.
CONFESSIONAL
(Trudi) *Plugging Nose* "Eww! Does it always stink in here?"
(Owen) *glares at the camera* "Did he really have to put me on the same team as those two loafs?"
(Richard) "I originally thought it would be fun to drag Owen here with me just to annoy her, but so far things aren't going as planned... After we had a little argument filming the audition, I changed my mind and decided to bring Alecia, and she's way better than Owen. She's nice and smokin' hot! The perfect package, might I say." *sighs and looks off into space dreamily* "Too bad I had to accidentally send the wrong audition, huh?"
(Kevin) "Woohoo! I'm so glad to finally be here!" *Accidentally smashes a hole in the door* 'Whoops…"
(Ivy) *Examines the hole in the door* "I guess it could be worse… I really want to know how this hole got here though…"
(Myst) "Oh. My. Gosh! Did you see all of the nature violations! I need to get to work here! This cannot go unnoticed!" *Pulls out a notebook and starts to write stuff down frantically*
(Marcel) *Stares at the hole suspiciously* Um… Since I'm in here, I might as well say something. So far this blows… Majorly! Well, Owen isn't so bad…I guess if I was stuck out in the middle of a smelly island, I guess I could live with these guys until I became fed up with them. So yeah... I'm done talking here." *Bursts open the door and trudges out*
(Lex) "This place is really cool! I still can't believe I'm actually here! I think Owen needs to chill a little and go easy on John and Richard though… Marcel seems cool… if you like a tough, odd, genderbent Duncan wannabe. Did you see what she did to the tree next to the bathrooms! It's, like, all spray-painted and weird looking. *Time Skip* "And did you see the way Jeremy was cradling his notebook? Really odd-"
"Would you hurry up! There's still a ton of other people waiting for a turn chatty Kathy!" Aly yells from outside the door.
(Aly) "I'll tell you, that girl can talk! She's kinda like that girl, um… Staci? Yeah, from last season." *Shrugs and walks out*
END CONFESSIONAL
"Okay. After that quick confessional, we shall go over to the mess hall!" Beams Chris as he guides the twenty campers over to the mess hall.
Inside the mess hall, Chef is chopping up some sort of paste looking 'food'.
"Listen up, maggots! I am Chef Hatchet! You will call me Chef and you will eat whatever I put in front of you! Got it!" Chef booms, yelling in his regular military voice.
"Got it!" Most of the campers yell back.
After nearly all of the campers leave the mess hall in a frantic hurry, three campers remain seated.
"Hey! You three! Why haven't you left yet?" Chef demands, holding up a very sharp knife.
"Oh! We were just leaving." Danny says as he stumbles out of the mess hall.
"And what about you two maggots?" Chef asks accusingly, pointing his knife at Marcel and Shae.
"Shut up, grandpa!" Marcel yells vehemently as she stands up, sticking her hands in her pockets and casually leaving the room. Chef's face darkens suddenly, a murderous look on his face.
"No one, and I mean no one, calls me grandpa." Chef says darkly as he steps out of the room, chasing her with his knife.
"Um... I should probably go help her…" Shae says to no one.
WITH THE REST OF THE CAMPERS
Marcel casually walks out of the mess hall with Chef running out after her.
"Marcel, watch out!" Roxy yells, pointing at Chef who's running at her with his knife.
Marcel turns around, a devilish look across her face. "A challenge is it!' She yells, pulling her hands out of her pockets to reveal her bandaged up fists. "Bring it, Cheffy!" She calls as she gets into her fighting stance.
"Cheffy? You don't know what you just got yourself into, maggot!" Chef yells as he charges at the teen, his knife in hand.
Taking advantage of the fact that Chef is slower and less agile, Marcel does a front-flip towards Chef and kicks him right in the balls.
"Mama?" Chef asks as he falls to the ground.
CONFESSIONAL
(Marcel) "You call that a fight? Ha! That was merely child's play. Seems like Cheffy has gotten a little rusty since first season. I guess Duncan and Izzy really did soften him up quite a bit… Thanks guys."
END OF CONFESSIONAL
"Too easy…" She states as she rubs her hands together.
CONFESSIONAL
(Owen): *Smiles, but just barely* "Watching Marcel single handedly take down Chef really made my day. I mean I could have done the same thing with my hands tied behind my back, but she doesn't have any training as far as I am aware..." *Smile slowly fades from her face* "I should look into this..."
(Tanner, Ivy, Trudi and Dryden Split-screen): *All are seen laughing*
(John): "That truly was a classic!"
(Marcel): "I don't feel any different."
END CONFESSIONAL
Most of the campers burst out laughing.
"Chef! You just got taken down by a girl half your size!" Chris yells between cackles. He sighs before continuing on. "Anyways, great job Marcel, but now we need to go to the cabins!" Chris announces as he leads the twenty laughing campers over to the cabins.
SCREAMING REBEL'S GIRLS SIDE
"I call the top bunk!" Ivy yells as she throws her black duffle bag on top of the bunk bed.
"I guess I'll take the bottom… Ivy? You don't mind that, do you?" Aly asks as she pulls her overstuffed brown leather suitcase along behind her.
"Go ahead." Ivy replies. She's currently climbing up onto the top bunk and unpacking her pillow.
"Hey, Lex. Wanna have the top bunk?" Holly asks while she fluffs up her triforce symbol pillow.
"Sure." Lex replies tiredly.
"Have you ever realized how many nature violations there are here!" Myst exclaims, still frantically writing in her notebook.
The girls stare at her blankly.
"Um... no, not until now." Trudi replies a little worried. "Myst? Want the top or the bottom bunk?" Trudi asks as she unpacks her pillow.
"Um... bottom." Myst states, not really caring.
SCREAMING REBEL'S GUYS SIDE
"I call top bunk!" Andrew yells, rushing over to claim his bunk. In the process knocking over Danny and Jeremy.
"Hey! Watch it!" Jeremy warns a he stands back up, glaring at Andrew.
"I'll take the bottom bunk!" Comments a too cheerful Danny.
"I guess it's you and me, friend." Desmond sighs, trudging over to the bunk.
KILLER MACE'S GIRLS SIDE
"AHHHHHHHH!" Screams Roxy as a giant cockroach crawls across her shoes. "Get it off! Get it off!" She yells, frantically shaking her foot around.
"Alright, just calm down, I'll go get one of the guys." Shae reassures, attempting to calm Roxy down. 'Attempting' being the key word.
"Oh my god! Will you just stop your whining and let me take care of it!" Marcel declares as she picks up the bug by it's antennae and throws it out the window like it's nothing. "See? All better now. So choose your freaking bunk already!" Marcel shouts, scaring the living tar out of the girls; minus Owen who just sat there, unfazed by it all.
"Do girls always have to be so loud?" John aks with a groan, getting Owen's attention.
"Oh, hey Johnny." Owen says in a teasing manner, stepping out of the door, looking as smug as can be.
"Don't call me Johnny." John growls, receiving a deadly glare from Owen.
"Ugh, what did you want anyways?" Owen asks, clearly irritated by the boy and leaning against the door frame.
"I came here to tell you that Chris wants us all outside in ten minutes."
"Fine, now leave before I throw my shoe at you." Owen threatens, giving John a pointed glare as she reaches down to take off her shoe.
John glares at her, knowing she wouldn't really throw her shoe at him, but he leaves anyway.
"Thanks." Marcel sighs, plopping down onto her bunk.
KILLER MACE'S GUYS SIDE
"Dude. What happened?" Richard asks, snickering as John walks into the cabin.
"Owen was about to throw her shoe at me, man!" He shouts, glaring at Richard.
"Oh, man. That would've hurt!" Richard says, his eyes widening.
"I know, and you were laughing Richard!" Bursts John who's now standing up to face Richard, yet he's wearing a smirk for some reason.
"Can you guys tell me how you know Owen?" Vince asks while the rest of the guys look up to listen.
From the other side of the cabin they hear a bed creak, followed by the slamming of a door. Then Owen bursts through the guy's door and grabs John and Richard by their collars, pulling them out of the cabin as the other guys follow out of curiosity. Marcel walks out a few seconds later and starts snickering.
"Owen, let us go!" Richard demands, glaring at Owen.
"What did we do?" John asks worriedly.
"If either of you tell them about how I know you, I'll personally murder you. Understand?" She practically growls with a bittersweet tone to her voice and a certain fire in her eyes. Her voice then drops to a harsh whisper. "I won't let you two idiots blow our cover. Got it?"
"Y-yes Owen." The two boys comply.
"Thank you boys." Owen says, dropping them onto their feet. "And remember, I can hear everything." She says darkly, dragging a laughing Marcel over to the girls side of the cabin.
"Um... that was weird." Kevin says scratching his head.
"Everything!" Owen yells furiously as she slams a fist on one of the walls, making the guys jump and then they hear Marcel burst out laughing again.
TEN MINUTES LATER OUTSIDE OF THE CABINS
"Okay! Now that everybody is settled in, we're going to play a little game I like to call: Manhunt!" Chris booms as he suddenly grabs Trudi and Kevin from their teams, startling the two. "And these are your men you are hunting for. No offense, Trudi." States Chris.
"None taken." Trudi says reassuringly, crossing her arms.
"Okay! I need everyone to go back to their cabins and wait!" Chris yells, mainly because there's a helicopter descending near them.
All of the contestants immediately rush into their cabins and shut the doors.
ABOUT AN HOUR OF WAITING LATER
"Forty five bottles of pop on the wall, forty five bottles of pop! You take one down pass it around, forty four bottles of pop on the wall!" Richard and Tanner sang. "Forty four bottles-" Tanner is cut of by a sock being violently stuffed into his mouth.
"Thirty five bottles ago, I warned for you to shut up! Now you're going to receive punishment buddy!" Marcel yells as Owen punches Richard in the shoulder, causing him to cry out in pain.
"Hmph. Wyth yew thake ith thok owt of mah mowf Marthel?" Tanner whines.
"Huh? I can't hear you, you have a sock in your mouth." Jokes Marcel, pulling the sock out of Tanner's mouth.
"Eww! It tastes like sweat and, tree bark?" Complains Tanner as he violently tries to wipe away the residue of the sock off of his tongue.
"That's my sock, sorry." John apologizes between nervous chuckles, scratching the back of his head.
He receives looks of disgust from the guys and girls, mostly from Tanner.
"That's it! I can't live with you people for another minute! I'm going outside to look for Kevin!" Shouts Roxy, fed up with all the fighting going on and just wanting to escape from them all.
After a long pause, she runs back in through the door, wide eyed.
"No one's out there and the Rebels are gone! I think they got an early lead!" She yells frantically.
Dryden looks out the door and snickers. "Well, if they're already out there looking for Trudi, I suggest we send them on a wild goose chase." He points to Marcel wearing a grin from ear to ear.
"What do you want from me?" She asks, a look of confusion on her face as she crosses her arms defensively. In response, Dryden motions for John and Tanner to pick her up. "What! No! Put me down! I'm going to seriously hurt someone! Put me down!" She screams. The guys half carry, half drag her over to the dock of shame. Then Dryden motions for them to throw her into the water.
"John, if you throw me in, I will get Owen to obliterate you and Tanner!" She warns.
Ignoring her demands, John drops Marcel into the water, crossing his arms afterwards. John then turns around and starts to walk away, not seeing that Marcel is climbing out of the water. He's completely oblivious to the sopping wet, incredibly ticked off girl behind him when she lunges at him and both of them fall into the water.
The guys just stand there, looking defeated already.
After about five minutes of pointless punching and kicking, Roxy and Dryden eventually begin to make some progress in breaking up the fight. Roxy starting to hyperventilate from all the stress.
"Stop freaking fighting! We're losing precious time people! They probably already have Trudi and we're just standing here fighting! Can we just go win this stupid challenge so I can go to bed!" Spazzes Roxy, effectively winning everyone's attention.
Owen pulls Marcel out of the water, restraining her from killing John, Tanner and Dryden.
"So why did you want us to dunk Marcel again?" Shae asks in curiousity.
Dryden smiles smugly. "Because, none of you girls have long, curly black hair! And Marcel is the only one with long black hair, but it's straight, so I figured that getting her hair wet would make the back of her head look like Trudi's!" He explains, spinning Marcel around and revealing that the back of her head looks exactly like Trudi's, besides the fact that it's now sopping wet.
"Wallah!" He sings, feeling very smart at that moment.
WITH THE SCREAMING REBELS
Holly, Desmond and Alex; Andrew and Ivy; Myst and Danny; and Jeremy and Aly all split up into four groups to find Trudi.
"Ugh, All this searching and nothing! Not a single thing!" Whines Alex as she crosses her arms in impatience.
"Aw, come on, we're not that bad of company. Are we?" Desmond asks as he puts his arm around her shoulder.
"Come on guys, we can find her! She's probably in a cave or something!" Holly suggests, pointing to a nearby cave.
The three enter the cave and quickly exit, screaming their face's off.
"AHHHHHHH! I vote that she's not in there!" Desmond states.
"Agreed!" The two girls say in unison, bolting up a tree.
A bear comes galloping out of the cave and starts shaking the tree they were in.
"Bears can't climb trees, can they Holly?" Asks a very scared Aly.
"I don't think so!" Holly replies, equally as scared.
WITH MYST AND DANNY
"Trudi! Trudi! Where are you?" Danny calls whilst Myst continues frantically writing page upon page of nature violations. "What exactly are you doing?" Danny asks as he peers over her shoulder.
"I'm writing nature violations! So far there are up to eighty violations I have seen!" States Myst, over exaggerating it a little.
"Wow! I can't believe it! That's a lot of violatio-" Danny's cut off because he gets trapped in a net. However, Myst is too busy writing, she doesn't notice the poor boy's absence. "Myst! Hey Myst, wait! I'm stuck in a tree here!" He yells, struggling to try and free himself, but just getting stuck tighter.
WITH IVY AND ANDREW
Ivy and Andrew are just walking in silence until Ivy speaks up. "Soooooooooo." She says, sounding very bored.
"Think of any place's she might be yet?" He asks, kicking a pebble with his shoe.
"No, not yet. You?" Ivy asks, not moving her gaze from him.
"Well, I did think of one place, but it's kind of unlikely." He replies, not moving his eyes from the ground.
"Where? We do kinda need to win this in order for us to not get the boot." She says sarcastically.
"Oh, hahaha." He replies even more sarcastically. He then proceeds to point to the cliff that the campers from season one had to dive off of.
"Oh. We're doomed." Sighs Ivy as they continue walking up to the mountain.
WITH JEREMY AND ALY
Jeremy is reading poetry on a nearby rock while Aly is doing all of the work. "Hey professor poetry! Mind helping me a little?" Aly asks as she tries to reach a taller ledge, one with a cave up on top.
"What? Hey, you wanna here some of my poetry?" Jeremy asks, a sound of excitement in his voice.
"Not in particul-" She starts, but Jeremy, who has started reading her some poetry, cuts her off.
"Separate are the body and mind
As they go through their daily life.
The world of the mind bursts with color
And sights that could never before be seen.
While the body goes on without a care,
Wandering, wandering, through the day.
Nobody knows the time of day
While they are stuck within their mind.
They float around, without a care,
As they stumble through a faulty life.
In this land, no one has ever seen,
They create a realm of their own color..."
He goes on and on until Aly falls asleep in the same position she started in.
WITH THE KILLER MACE'S
They have been following Ivy and Andrew for a while and decide they will make their move now.
"Are you sure you saw her over here, Ivy?" Andrew asks breathlessly.
"Positive! I have the best eyesight ever! My eyes would never fail me!" Ivy replies, beaming.
"Come on! There she is again!" She yells, grabbing the boy by the arm pulling him towards Trudi.
"Okay, so you're sure they won't find out it's you?" Owen whispers calmly to Marcel.
"Absolutely. You guys need to go find Kevin. Now go." She whispers back before grabbing John by the arm. "But he stays here. I have a special job for him." Marcel says, evilly pulling John closer to her to keep him from leaving.
After the rest of the team leaves to search for Kevin, Marcel and John start operation 'Wild Trudi Chase or Something Like That'.
"Are you absolutely sure you saw Trudi?" Andrew asks for the fifth time.
"Yes, Captain Impatient!" Ivy shouts, shocking Andrew. Ivy then notices Marcel running and jumping off the cliff in the style of a professional diver.
"There she goes!" Andrew yells as Ivy pulls him over to the ledge.
"Ready!" Ivy starts.
"Wait, what!" Andrew screams, just realizing that they are gonna jump.
"Set!" Ivy says once again.
"No! I'm not set! I'm not set!" Screams Andrew, trying his hardest to get her to release her stone hard grip on him.
"Go!" Ivy yells leaping off, bringing Andrew down with her.
"AHHHHHHHHH!" Screams a very unprepared Andrew.
WITH THE KILLER MACES
"Anything?" Dryden calls to Owen up in a tree.
"Ivy just jumped off the cliff, and she took Andrew down with her!" She yells back, trying her hardest not to laugh.
"Typical Marci! Always thinking of impossibly awesome stuff!" Richard replies in between laughs from another tree.
"I see Kevin! I see Kevin!" Shae cheers from her perch in a tall oak.
"You do! Where?" Shouts Tanner.
"He's over near the-" Shae pauses, her eyes going wide before she bursts out laughing. "He's in the girl's bathrooms!"
Most of the Killer Maces burst out laughing, some even falling over. Then they start heading towards the place where they would find their hidden teammate.
~Commercial Break~
Shows a beautiful green forest.
"The forest, teeming with wildlife, trees and… Teenagers?"
Shows Chris McLean standing in the middle of a clearing in the forest.
"Yes you heard me right, I said teenagers! Because for this fifth season of Total Drama, twenty two brand new contestants will be competing for one million dollars in this forest. This season is going to be full of drama, romance, suspense, and more drama! But don't just take it from me, ask a few of our contestants!"
Shows a boy with black hair and brown eyes, he is wearing a yellow and red superhero costume. "Hi, I'm SuperSam and I will keep all villains away from this island!"
Shows a boy covered in tin foil. "I'm Carter, and this tin foil is to protect me from the alien invasion, would you like some?"
"Yeah, I know, they're weird." Chris said.
"Hey!" Carter and Sam yelled.
"We also have AJ." Chris said pointing to a girl with brownish reddish hair that was put into braids and blue eyes and freckles. "Say hello to the people AJ." Chris said.
"Hello people." AJ said. "Did you know the word 'Hello' originally came from Old High German, 'halâ, holâ', which was a strong term used especially when hailing a ferry driver. This also connects the development of hello to the influence of an earlier form, holla, whose origin is in the French holà. that means 'whoa there!', which came from the French word là, or there."
"I did not know that, nor do I care." Chris said. "Here is another contestant, Charlotte."
Shows a girl with long brown hair in a ponytail and green eyes she is scribbling something on a piece of paper.
'What are you doing there Charlotte?" Chris asked.
"Preparing for the apocalypse." She answers.
"There isn't going to be an apocalypse." Chris said.
"Fine, die, I couldn't care less." Charlotte said.
"Moving on to Pepper." Chris announced.
A girl with short dark brown hair and big brown eyes is shown.
"Why don't don't you tell the people a little about yourself." Chris said, pointing to the screen.
"There are people in the camera?" She asked horrified, then gets really close to the screen. "I'll save you tiny people!"
"No I meant the people watching at home." Chris says.
"But no one here is at home right now, we are in the forest." Pepper says, backing up from the camera.
"Too much stupid." Chris says holding his head. "Quick AJ, say something smart!"
"Your left lung is smaller than your right lung to make room for your heart" AJ says.
"Thank you." Chris turns to the camera.
"So tune in to see the rest of the campers, and to see who will win, who will lose and who will annoy me the most!"
"Excuse me? Us annoy you?" Charlotte said. "You're the annoying one!"
"Yeah." Sam agreed. "You're always like: 'I'm Chris and I'm so hot and I can do whatever I want.'"
"I'm not that bad." Chris said.
"Yes you are!" Carter argued. "You attacked us with a giant robot bird!"
"And we almost drowned because of you and then you laughed at us!" AJ added.
"Don't forget the time we had to babysit his annoying niece and nephew." Pepper pouts.
"And I'm still having nightmares about those monkeys." Sam said.
"ENOUGH!" Chris yelled. "Shut up! All of you! I am awesome. So anyways, tune into the drama on
TOTAL
DRAMA
FOREST!"
"And beware of the aliens!" Carter yells before the screen fades to black.
~End Commercial~
OUTSIDE THE GIRLS BATHROOMS WITH THE KILLER MACES
"So seeing as you guys are, well, guys, I suggest we go in." Owen explains nonchalantly. The guys stand there, looking very uncomfortable as the girls walk inside the girls bathroom. Owen walks inside and walks directly to one of the stalls and opens the door revealing Kevin who is tied up and wearing a pink tutu and tiara. Owen just stares at him with a blank expression, but Shae immediately starts laughing, receiving a glare from Kevin.
"Just get me out of here before I explode." Kevin says in practically a growl. Owen quickly pulls out a pocket knife, surprising Shae and Kevin leaving them wide eyed as She swiftly cuts the rope imprisoning him.
As soon as they exit, the guys all start laughing and Kevin glares at them.
"Dude, what happened to you?" Vince asks between laughs. Kevin just glares at him even harder.
"Oh, ha ha, very funny! Now, for God's sake, can we get this over with!" Declares an irritated Kevin. The majority of the team, though, continues laughing.
Owen slowly pulls out her pocket knife and a sadistic grin spreads across her face. "Get to the campfire pit, or I'll carve some new artwork into your faces." She muses, looking fondly at her knife. The other team members look at her with wide eyes. They then hastily run over to the campfire pit, arriving right before the Screaming Rebels do.
"Hey! We were here first!" Shouts Holly while they pull up a dripping wet and feather covered Marcel and John with them.
"Um, John? What's with the feathers?" Questions Tanner.
"One word: Marcel." He replies, spitting out feathers.
"It was awesome though! You guys totally missed it! John fell into my feather and syrup trap!" Marcel booms as she and John walk over to their team.
Just then, Danny and Jeremy walk up carrying a sleeping Aly over their shoulders.
"And we have our winners: The Killer Maces!" Declares Chris, appearing in a purple puff of smoke.
"Woohoo!" Cheer most of the Killer Maces.
"Screaming Rebels. Tonight you will need to be sending someone home."
CONFESSIONAL
(John) "Even though I'm covered in feathers, I'm really excited! Go us!"
(Aly) "I guess we lost, I hope I don't go home. That guy Jeremy should go home! He freaking put me to sleep!"
(Jeremy) "We lost! I hope I don't go home."
(Andrew) "Ivy freaking pulled me off of a cliff to go after Trudi, and it wasn't even Trudi! It was freaking Marcel!"
(Ivy) "So it wasn't Trudi then?" *Ivy laughs nervously* "I hope Andrew doesn't hold grudges."
(Desmond, Holly, Alex Split screened) "I can't believe we lost! This is all their fault!"
(Danny) *Pulling twigs out of his hair* "Even though I got stuck in one of John's traps, and Myst didn't come back for me I am probably not the guaranteed target!"
(Trudi) "Chris gave me invincibility, I was in the worlds grossest place ever! I don't even think boys wash their filthy hands in the bathroom!" *Gags*
END CONFESSIONAL
AT THE MESS HALL WITH THE SR AND THE KM
Marcel walks in, pulling a still feather covered John by the ear.
"OWOWOWOWOW! Please let go of my ear!" Whines John.
"Not until I get an explanation as to why you filled my bed with mud, Johnny Boy!" Marcel demands, sitting down next to Owen and bringing John down beside her.
"I, uh... well because, um... Richard told me to?" John lies, pointing at a full-mouthed Richard.
Owen gives John the death glare and whacks him upside the head. "Don't lie, dorkus! I know you, and Richie doesn't do mud!" Owen quips as she crosses her arms defensively. Richard glares at her for calling him 'Richie', but begins to smirk at her for some reason. She glares at him and nearly starts yelling at him, but Marcel cuts her off.
"So it was you!" Yells Marcel.
"Okay, okay, so it was me. Can't we just forgive and forget?" John asks hopefully, appearing to be in serious pain from the grip Marcel has on his ear.
"No! Argh! Why do I even bother?" Marcel shouts, releasing John's ear.
"Why not you try to calm down, maybe you just need some food?" Shae offers, attempting to calm down her enraged acquaintance.
"This slop! HA! No heck of way!" Marcel declares, picking up her food and throwing it at John. Richard looks at Marcel almost as though he's offended that she would just throw food away like that.
With that Marcel gets up and angrily stomps away.
Owen quickly turns towards John, a scowl forming across her face. "Do you even have a brain? Go apologize now, or else." Owen threatens.
"Okay! Okay! I'll go apologize, or something." Assures John, putting his hands up defensively in front of his face.
Owen glares at him before pointing him towards the door.
Once he leaves, Shae turns to face Owen. "If he said no, what would you have done?"
Owen smirks a little, looking at the ground, "You don't even want to know."
OUTSIDE
Shae and Tanner can be heard in a cabin, bickering about nonsense. Jeremy's reading poetry quietly. Holly is busy playing on her 3DS. Myst is busy still writing down nature violations and Marcel comes storming out of the mess hall in a cloud of anger.
She walks up to the nearest tree and begins climbing. When she is about halfway up the tree, John comes rushing out in a fast pursuit with Owen following close behind.
"Take this, Johnny boy!" Marcel screams as she begins pelting him with pinecones.
"AHH! Wait! Stop! OW! Stop! I'm trying to- OW!- tell you something! OW! STOP!" John yells whilst trying to dodge the incoming pinecone missiles flying towards his feather covered head.
"Fine, you get one minute!" Concludes Marcel, jumping from the branch she's currently sitting on.
"Finally! Um... okay, this is a little awkward. Uh... Marcel?" Questions John as he rubs the back of his head nervously.
"Yes?" Marcel asks sarcastically.
"I-I'm s-sorry?" Says John awkwardly. Marcel gives John a deadpan look, appearing as though she doesn't believe him. "Please forgive me?" He quickly adds on, trying to get back on her good side (if he ever was).
"Aww, I forgive you Johnny." Marcel says sarcastically, giving him a half hearted hug.
AT THE CAMPFIRE PIT
"Okay, so here's how this is gonna work. If you receive a marshmallow you are safe from elimination. If you do not receive a marshmallow you must immediately go to the boat of losers and leave! And you can never come back. Ever!" Chris explains in his not so serious sounding voice. "When I call your name come get your marshmallow. "Trudi"
"Yay!" Cheers Trudi, running up to claim her gooey treat.
"Alex"
" Thank you! Thank you! Thank you!" Calls Alex.
"Andrew"
"Yes!" Shouts Andrew gleefully.
"Holly"
"Why am I not surprised?" Questions Holly as she strolls up to claim her marshmallow.
"Ivy"
"Ivy will never be defeated!" Cheers Ivy while ninja style running over to get her marshmallow.
"Desmond"
"Thank you Chris." Thanks Desmond in a gentlemanly fashion, walking over to his marshmallow.
"Danny"
"Really!? Oh my gooey gumdrops!" Cries Danny, running over to his marshmallow and kissing it rapidly.
"Aly"
"Yay! Thank you so much!" Cheers Aly as she basically runs over and hugs Chris.
"Okay. Get off of me!" Chris demands, desperately shaking the clingy girl off. "Jeremy, dude you basically bored someone to sleep! And did nothing at all in this challenge but that!" States Chris, wagging his finger disapprovingly. "Myst, not only did you seriously irritate half of the contestants because of your 'Nature Violations' but you left Danny stuck in a tree for heaven's sake!" Declares Chris exasperatingly. "Ladies and Gentlemen. This is the finally marshmallow of the evening…
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And the final marshmallow goes to… Jeremy! Myst even though I thought you were an interesting character, I have no say over what any of the other contestants had to say, sorry. The Dock of Shame awaits you." Informs Chris, pointing at the rusty old boat that basically docked itself.
Myst sighs. "And just when I thought I could make a change for the better in nature. Oh well, bye everyone!" She waves goodbye as she boards the boat of losers and rides off into the twilight.
BACK AT THE CABIN'S WITH BOTH TEAMS
The Killer Maces girls are gossiping on about something. The Killer Maces boys are busy telling funny stories while Marcel is standing outside the cabin's listening to her MP3 player.
"And that's when I pranked Owen into thinking that there was a bear outside!" John says between cackles while the rest of the guys all crack up and howl in laughter.
"I hear everything, Johnny boy!" Yells a very ticked off Owen from the other side of the wall.
The boys sit there in silence and small barely audible snickers.
"Everything!" She yells once again scaring the boys into dead silence.
Outside you can here Marcel howling with laughter.
Roxy and Shae walk over to the guys side of the cabin's and knock on the door softly.
"Yes?" Ask Tanner and Vince in unison.
"May we enter?" Asks Roxy sarcastically.
"What's the password?" Dryden asks mockingly.
"Pancakes?" Replies Shae in bewilderment.
"Oh. My. God! That actually was the password!" Richard declares in disbelief.
Well if you want a real password, I suggest one that isn't Vince's favorite breakfast food." Owen states with an emotionless tone from the other side of the wall, surprising Vince.
"That's your favorite too?" Richard asks in shock.
"Yes, Speedy Gonzalez. I told you, we hear everything!" Owen replies blankly from the other side of the wall.
Marcel walks into the boy's side of the cabin wearing a blood red tank top, black extra large sweatshirt, black and blood red striped flannel pants and grey ankle socks.
"Um... Marcel? What are you wearing?" Dryden asks awkwardly.
"My pj's, captain of the dunces! Duh!" Marcel answers dryly, leaning against the side of a bunk bed.
"Oh." Replies Dryden, who's now looking anywhere but at Marcel.
There's a loud creak and the sound of a door opening and closing, and then Owen appears in the doorway arms crossed wearing a navy blue tank top and pj shorts.
"What'd I miss?" Owen asks sarcastically.
She receives blank looks from the guys and amused looks from the girls.
"Nothing, if you hear everything as you claim." Richard says in a mocking tone, making quotation symbols with his fingers.
Owen glares at Richard before slapping him upside the head. "Shut up, asshole." She mutters, causing Richard to glare at her.
"I don't know about you guys, but I'm hitting the hay." States Shae, grabbing Owen with one arm and Marcel with the other.
"Night guys, and John." States Marcel, flirtatiously waving at John while being dragged out of the door.
"Wait for me!" Calls Roxy, waving goodnight to the guys and trotting out of the door.
After the girls left, everyone stares at John mischievously.
"Okay dude. What happened between you and the hardcore cookie?" Tanner asks sarcastically. John's face turns beet red.
"Does John finally have a girlfriend after his last breakup?" Richard asks mockingly.
John glares at Richard. "Dude! Alecia was nice and all, but I think we both knew deep down we were better as friends."
There is a loud thud from the other side of the wall. And then a very red-faced Marcel runs out of the cabin and out of sight.
Then silence.
IN THE WOODS
Marcel's running frantically through the woods, blushing madly. From up in a tree, someone is watching her silently.
Marcel walks up to a tall oak tree and starts to climb up frantically, still crimson faced.
The person in the tree realizes that she is blushing and speaks up.
"Hey, what's up?" Asks the voice.
Marcel, who's sitting on a big branch, looks over at the dark figure. "Huh? Oh nothing, just… Nothing." She comments, trying to figure out who she's talking to.
"Oh really?" Asks the figure sarcastically. Then the figure comes out if the shadows and leaps onto Marcel's branch revealing who it is.
INSIDE THE SR GIRLS SIDE CABIN
"I hate elimination ceremonies" Aly sighs as she plops down onto her bed.
"Um... Aly? We've only had one elimination ceremony so far. How can you already hate them?" Asks Trudi, sitting on her bed.
"Too much, oh what's the word I'm looking for? Um... oh! Drama!" Proclaims Aly sticking her index finger up in the air happily.
"No duh, Sherlock! Hence the name Total Drama?" Declares Lex who has curled under her covers to relax.
WITH THE KM WHO HAD GATHERED OUTSIDE
"So me, Owen and John? We're the ones who are going to look for Marcel?" Asks Shae, handing the other two flashlights.
"Um... do I really have to come with you guys?" John asks, obviously in discomfort.
"Yes! You were the one who caused all of this, Einstein!" Owen explains, grabbing the back of his shirt and dragging him into the woods, Shae quickly following behind.
"He's doomed to a life with her!" Dryden complains, sarcasm seeping through his voice.
"You're so rude!" Barks Roxy. Being the only girl left with five guys, she begins feeling overpowered and runs back into the girl's side of the cabin.
"Dude, she totally likes you!" Kevin says, jumping up and down like a hyper schoolgirl.
"Your such a marshmallow Kevin." Richard jokes, punching him lightly in the arm.
"Speak for yourself, Richard. Hey! You guys wanna play truth or dare?" Dryden asks, brightening up a little.
"Sure." Richard and Tanner reply in unison.
"Whatever." Kevin says blankly, crossing his arms.
They run over to the girls side of the cabin and knock on the door loudly.
"Hey Roxy! Wanna play Truth or Dare?" Richard asks in an annoying manner.
"Ah! What? Truth or Dare? Ugh, okay fine I'll be out in a second." Roxy replies exasperatedly.
"Okay, see you over there." Dryden adds, rushing into the guys side.
IN THE WOODS
"So what your saying is that I shouldn't be ashamed if I really do like him?-which I don't!" Marcel exclaims, crossing her arms in annoyance.
"No one should be ashamed if they like someone. Maybe he even likes you back!" The figure says supportively.
Marcel sighs. "I guess your right, but you can't tell anybody!" Marcel warns, giving the figure a threatening look.
"I promise I won't." Promises the figure.
Owen, Shae and John come walking in the distance. Owen and John are bickering and Shae is massaging her temples in irritation.
"I still can't believe you would embarrass Marcel like that! Not cool!" Owen barks defensively.
"It wasn't me! It was the rest of the guys! For the last ti-" John starts, but he gets cut off.
"Shut up! You two are giving me a headache!" Shae exclaims, completely losing it.
Marcel smirks, watching John cower behind Owen. Owen quickly pushing him away.
"Looking for someone?" Asks a giggling Marcel as she hops out of the tree, landing directly in front of John and scaring him.
"GAAH!" Screams John, jumping at least five feet backwards.
"Sorry, Johnny Boy." Marcel apologizes between cackles.
Author's Note: So that was Episode 1, "Manhunt". I'm pretty sure you all already knew what was going to happen seeing as this is just the edited version of the episode, though some things were changed and some things were added. I'm sorry it took so long to finish and I promise it won't take as long for the other episodes. Just please be aware that I'm working on a book on fictionpress and it will probably take up more of my time once I've gotten all the precreated chapters edited and published. Also, please send in ideas for challenges and review telling me how you think I did in editing this. Also, if you could, if you are the creator to any of these characters (besides my own) please let me know what their fear is (unless I already contacted you about this. I couldn't get everyone who submitted characters sadly...) for a challenge idea I'm working on for the future.
Anyway, that was the end of this episode of TDCW, sorry to Myst's creator, I'm not the one who chose who gets voted off for the first two episodes, so all of you guys should know who gets voted off in the next episode.
That is all, bye-bye rainbow cloud believers.
~RCA