Umm hi this is my first story and its pretty much faxness all out I did use sum 1s idea for the later chaps of a house and cars with maxes mom ok I own nothing this is all JPs I just wrote off of his ideas and other fans ideas and made it my own story hope u like it criticism welcome I am no a good speller but ya well I don't always spell things out either hope u like it I am never gunna end this story EVERY so keep a look out for news I only type wen I have time I have like 20 sum pages done in written I just have to find sum time to type lol well lets get this going!!! Also I switch pov a lot idk y but I do u know lol well thanks o my myspace if u want to add me is .com/magencarter inside joke i have it privet and my name is magen carter and that's my url lol so there u go talk to me im nice lol ;p
MY FAXNESS!!!!!!
Maxes POV
Hey guys Fang and I are going for a fly. Ok the flock said. So then fang led me out the hotel door and we flew up into the air. We flew to a cliff then immediately my heart started to pound "Max" fang said as he pulled my hand into his. We need to talk. He didn't even give me a chance to say anything when he said why do you run? I didn't reply he was already angry then he repeated him self why do you run when I kiss you Max answer me he said Um I said I don't really no why I run. Then he yelled that's not an answer. He was really mad!! Max he said DO YOU LOVE ME?
Umm as a brother no max u no what I mean Yes or NO answer me. I new I had to answer so I said red as a beet yes. Then why do you run when I kiss you? I I…. Fang I get nervous and I think about what the flock would think. Why do u care what the flock thinks this is about us he said as he pulled me to him. God when did he get this strong? He is stronger then I thought I couldn't get free. Promise me he yelled Promise me you wont run anymore Now he yelled promise me I I promise I wont run good he said as he bent down to kiss me. Then alls I could think was o god I love him He's so so perfect o god I truly truly love him more than I think.
He stopped and started to say I swear if u run….. I wont I interrupted him I swear…
Then he said I love you max and don't you ever forget it I wont I said. God I hate emotions I said I broke out crying not able to hold it in any longer Im sorry fang Imsorry I always run its just just I didn't want to give in and be here in your arms crying embarrassing myself I I love you then he wiped the tears off my face and kissed me. And I kissed him back god I love him. Then he picked me up to my feet and I fell over o god he laughed and said should I carry you o my, me in fangs arms flying can u say heaven. I didn't get to reply I was already in his arms he didn't give me a chance he picked me up and flew away. I was in heaven then he kissed me and I realized we were back at the hotel. I wanted to cry again I didn't want to end this moment. SO I said im going to get a shower and ran into the hotel. Ok he said as I went through the door.
So people what did u think press the button and let me know peace,
~Magen ~