This is my first time writing a story so if you can give me some tips it would be great and please leave a review
The Secert
Lucia was outside on the porch listing to her new gift from Hippo,Hanon, Rina and Nikora . they bought her an I-pod she was so excited ... they gave it for her b-day. She ran over to Katios but when she got there she found him crying on the rock mountain behind his house. She hoped everything was OK , she went over and asked him what was bothering him. He held back the tears as he told her the terrible news... he was moving to some place in Canada. She held him close as they both cried. Katio asked Lucia why she was crying , she wiped her eyes as she went over in her head how she was going to tell him that she has alwaysloved him. As she opened her mouth to explain why she was heart broken a ship crashed into the rocks she knew that Gakuto had something to do with it . She said that she had too leave .. but Katio wouldn't let her. She then asked if she could use his phone , because she needed to call Hannon and Rina and tell them, that she had to cancel dinner with them tonight although she was lying . She was really going to tell them that they would have to take this one by themselves.