This story is being remade and won't be an aftermath about Brawl in the Family anymore. It will only be about the Loud's visit to Lynn Srs. brother Lucas and his family.

Friday evening was pizza night at the Loud house and the eleven children, one boy and ten sisters who lived there were anticipating the arrival of the pizza delivery guy. The children's mother, a dental hygienist named Rita just came home from work a few minutes ago. Finally the doorbell rang. Lana stood outside her mother's door and shouted, "Mom, pizza's here!"

"Thank goodness the doorbells working now," she thought as she left her bedroom. "Lori and Leni, could you take the pizzas while I pay for them?" she requested of her eldest daughters who were sitting on the couch. After Rita paid for the pizzas, she walked into the dining room.

"Kids, no fighting over the pizza, or else I'll giving them to the people at the homeless shelter," she warned them.

After spending a few minutes talking with the children about their day at school while they ate, Rita decided to rest for a few minutes in her bedroom. As she relaxed on the bed reading an interesting novel, her cell phone rang. "Hello," she answered. After the conversation was over, Rita approached two of her daughters Luna and Leni as they performed their Friday evening chore of washing the dishes after dinner.

Girls," she announced, "Your Aunt Sara called a while ago with some great news. Wait in the living room and I'll call your brother and sisters."

Leni said, "Lynn's outside playing basketball, I'll get her."

Meanwhile…

Lori was getting ready for her after school job at Gus' Games and Grub. She was already in her work uniform and applying lipstick when she heard her mother knocking on her bedroom door.

"Lori, could you come to the living room for a minute," her mom said through the closed door.

Lori picked up her handbag and opened the door. "Can you tell me now," she asked her mom, "I have to take the bus to work since dad isn't home from his meeting and I don't want to be late. You know how Gus is with latecomers."

"I want everyone to hear it. Don't worry I won't take long," she reassured the seventeen year old.

After everyone gathered on the couch, Rita addressed them, "This won't take long, I know you have to finish your homework. Aunt Sara called me with wonderful news that your cousin Zachary has been accepted into college next fall. She's having a party for him next Saturday at four in the afternoon and she is inviting us," Rita told them. Zachary, fourteen was another child genius in the Loud family.

Suddenly Lynn groaned with annoyance, "Why do we have to go, they have nothing in common with us."

Then Lori spoke, "But I literally can't stand to be around those… goody two shoes cousins of ours for so long. Why have younger brothers and sisters that you can't boss around?" Lori's siblings just glared at her.

Rita scolded her by saying, "That's not a nice thing to say, young lady."

Lincoln spoke, "Well, I like Jenna because she enjoys reading comics."

"And Andrew likes my jokes," Luan added.

"Normally, I hold a distaste in participating in society's meaningless celebrations, but I will attend to offer my congratulations to a fellow genius for his good fortune," Lisa stated.

Rita sighed, "Sorry girls, but you are all going, besides you don't visit them often."

Rita's tone of voice then changed to a stern one, "And you're all going to behave. That means no fights over silly things like someone getting a bigger slice of cake."

"Oh my gosh" Lori suddenly blurted out, "I have to get to work," but at that moment the front door opened and in walked their dad, Lynn Loud.

"Evening everybody," he greeted his family.

Lori exclaimed, "Thank goodness you're here, dad," After Lori departed to drive the van to work, Rita told her husband about Aunt Sara's invitation.

"Good for Zach," Lynn the father remarked proudly. "Now I'm starving for some of that pizza," he declared then went to wash his hands before eating.

Later that night in Rita and Lynn Seniors bedroom….

After getting into their bed after a hard day's work, Lynn Sr. and Rita kissed each other goodnight. After turning off his lamp Lynn settled down to sleep but couldn't. He was in a state of worry. It was about his daughters and their tendency to not behave well in public. He started remembered a few incidents…

Lana and Lola

They were invited to a classmate's birthday party last year. He received a call from the mother forty minutes after dropping them at the party to pick up his daughters because they had a fight over something he cannot remember. The fight ended when Lola punched Lana in her left arm then before Ava's mom could stop her Lana threw the fruit punch on Lola's pretty dress. Lynn Sr. was met at the front door by Ava's angry father. After that incident, Lana and Lola's classmates never invited them to any more parties.

Lori, Leni, Luna, Luan, Lynn Jr.

The parents wanted to teach their daughters some social graces by taking them to a restaurant for dinner. Lincoln and Lucy stayed home with Pop-Pop as their baby sitter. As they approached their booth, Leni and Lori fought over who would sit at the window, until Rita commanded Lori to take the seat. A server came with coloring books for the kids to occupy their time. While waiting for their dinner, Lori and Leni squabbled over the crayons while they colored, Lynn was eating her roll diners get before the meal is served, then asked Luna," You wanna see food?" then opened her mouth to show Luna the chewed up bread in her mouth. Then six year old Luan disappeared to the booth besides theirs and the little comedian started telling the couple a joke, but one that shouldn't be told while people are eating. The mortified couple just punched their plates away, placed some money on the table and left. Then an impatient Lynn started to knock her utensils on the table and chanted, "WE WANT FOOD, WE WANT FOOD!" then the other Loud girls except Leni followed suit. After trying for fifteen seconds to make them stop, (and enduring a lot of glares from other diners), Rita gave up in defeat and told Lynn Sr, "I give up, let's just leave." He agreed and the family left. Three minutes later while driving home…"We're hungry! "chanted the girls together.

"While on the other hand Lincoln was always well behaved in public," Lynn Sr. thought.

Lynn Sr. then came back to the present. He turned on his lamp.

"Rita, are you awake?"

"Please dear not tonight," Rita grumbled.

"Honey, if the kids are coming with us to Zach's party, we have to lay down some rules so make sure they behave, especially the girls. I don't want Lucas thinking we're raising wild animals," Lynn remarked.

"Remember what happened last year when Lola and Lana attended that girl's birthday party?" he reminded her.

Rita gave a small shudder as she recalled that incident, then reassured him,

"Don't worry dear, they will behave. I'll think of a plan. Now turn off the light."

Rita got someone else to fix the doorbell after the hurricane