My Endless Love
hey guys!! Am I so happy that first sem's over!! finally!! I can rest my head... :D hahahha... :D
anyways... I'm trying out a new genre of writing... :D hehe... 'cuz, you see... we have a literature class that covers different genre of writting: Poem, Short Stories, and Dramas... well... dramas are quite amazing... so I'm trying it out to see if I can write a good one... :D (Is it even acceptable here in fanfiction?? heheh...) Do please comment if this is good or not... :D
anyways... please do send a review... comment on the style... :D I want feedback... ;D
Disclaimer: Nope, don't own PoT...
Act 1
Scene 1
Manchuria, China. Scene is set on the Japanese Military Advancement to Manchuria. Japanese troops and armoured vehicles are running to one direction, shooting at Chinese men. Ryoma and Syusuke enter. They take cover on a huge rock. Ryoma jumps forward and takes cover on concrete debris.
Syusuke: Ryoma! Stay here!
Syusuke jumps forward to Ryoma's debris.
Syusuke: Just stay here, Ryoma.
Ryoma: No, Syu. We have orders to attack.
Syusuke: Let them carry out that order. We'll provide back-up for them from a distance.
Ryoma: No, Syu! We're here for a war, and I intend to fight that war.
Syusuke: Why are you so hard-headed?! We can still fight that war if we'll keep a safe distance!
Ryoma: That's just cowardice, Syu! I'm not afraid to die!
Syusuke: Don't be so selfish, Ryoma! You might not be afraid to get yourself killed, but I am! I am afraid! I'm afraid that I might lose you because of this damn war! I'm afraid that I'll live another day knowing that I could've prevented you from dying! Why can't you just understand that?!
Ryoma: I understand that, Syu! But I couldn't just stay here while my colleagues are being killed in the front line! No, Syu, I can't do that!
Syusuke: Then at least fight this war with me by your side all the time!
Ryoma: Ok, Syu. Let's do that.
Together, they ran forward to where the heat of the battle is.
Scene 2
Scene is located deeper into Manchuria. Japanese soldiers run forward to the Chinese resistance force. Syusuke and Ryoma enter the scene and shoots from behind huge concrete debris.
Syusuke: COVER!
The two and other Japanese soldiers took cover. A hand grenade exploded nearby the three's position. Other Japanese soldiers near to the grenade jumps and lay dead. The rest continue to attack behind their covers. Ryoma gets hit with a bullet on the right arm.
Ryoma: SHIT! Syusuke, I'm hit!
Syusuke: What?! Show it to me!
Ryoma rolls around. Syusuke tears a part of his uniform and placed it as compress on Ryoma's wound. He gets a bandage from a kit on his belt and bandaged the wound with the compress.
Syusuke: That should be okay, Ryoma. The wound wasn't really big. Just stay here, I'll do the fighting for you.
Ryoma: I can still fire a gun, Syu…
Syusuke: But you're wounded. If you'll move too much, that wound would eventually open up.
Ryoma: But –
Syusuke: No more buts, Ryoma. That's enough. You'll stay here, just as I have told you to!
Syusuke continues to fire from his post.
Ryoma: I'm sorry, Syu…
Syusuke: We should've stayed at the safe zone earlier when we still had the chance. Now look at us. You're wounded and I'm shooting while a carcass lies right in front of me. Why couldn't you just listen to me before?
Ryoma: I'm really sorry, Syu…
Syusuke: (Sigh) It's okay, Ryoma. We're here, and we couldn't change that fact, now can we?
Ryoma: So, do you forgive me?
Syusuke: I forgive you, Ryoma, because I love you.
Ryoma: Thank you, Syusuke. I love you, too, with all my heart.
Syusuke: We'll both survive this war, Ryoma. Don't worry. I'll keep you safe.
Silence. Syusuke continued to shoot at Chinese men.
Syusuke: Ryoma, I'm out of ammo. Do you have a magazine there?
Ryoma: I'm all out, Syu.
Syusuke: Okay. I guess I'll have to get that dead person's gun.
Ryoma: Just be careful, Syu…
Syusuke dive in to the nearby soldier and grabbed the gun.He dive to Ryoma's direction, but was hit by a bullet in mid-air. He landed on the debris that Ryoma took cover.
Ryoma: SYUSUKE!
Ryoma grabbed Syusuke's head and gently placed it on his lap.
Ryoma: SYU! SYU! SYU! DON'T DIE AT ME RIGHT NOW! NO! DON'T DIE, SYU!
Syusuke: (Coughing) Ryoma…
Ryoma: No, Syu! Don't die! Remember your promise! We'll both survive this war!
Syusuke: I guess I can't fulfill my end of the promise now, Ryoma…
Ryoma: No, Syu! Please! Be strong! Don't leave me alone!
Syusuke: (Smile) I'll always be there for you, Ryoma. That's a promise.
Ryoma: Syu! Don't leave me!
Syusuke: I love you, Ryoma. I love you more than I have loved anyone before. I love you…
Ryoma: Syu! (Cry)
Syusuke: Good-bye, Ryoma…
Ryoma: SYUSUKE!!
Ryoma hugged Syusuke's deceased body tightly. Everything stay still. Lights dim out. Spotlight fixed at the two. Sound of gunshot and Ryoma fell dead.
obviously, that's not finished yet... I'll have to get the feedbacks... If the feedbacks reflect a good outcome... then I'll continue this style... if not... I'll rewrite it... and continue with the traditional style of writing... :D
of course... I'm not gonna delete this... If feedbacks are negative... I'll just append... :D
that's all.. :D
all the while... :D
-kitoyisme